Hows my writing?

[RC 212]

I took creative writing and advanced writing in high school. Always been a writer since I was a kid. I have bursts of activity due to deployment issues and what not. But overall I've been with you folks a long time. You've seen the following characters.

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Vassara Raxis
Jack Raxis
Althea Raxis
Colap Ticon
Lisa Ticon
Wraith Draigar

What do you think of my writing? How can I improve. What do you hate, what do you love?

 

[Jsc]

Vassara - I love your gusto. I've never had to goad you for posts or for imagery when we've RP'd together. You don't just follow along and mention the weather. (Though that is perfectly appropriate) ...Nah. Instead you push the story, show your environment, blast the Stormtroopers, and speak with action and intensity. It's really great to have along on any adventure.

Now. Some people see this as showboating. Look at me, look at me; posting. But I don't. I see it as a writer who knows what they want. Somebody who is going to go out there and get it. A pioneer and a real adventuring spirit. That's what I think of when I think of Vassara Raxis. That's what I think of when I think of you.

So... I'd have to say in the short time I've played with Vassy girl. Your Best: Is enthusiasm. Your Worst: Laying it on too thick. But that's just me. 2 cents.

 

[RC 212]

[member="Jay Scott Clark"]

Should come write with Jack!

 

[Anija Betna]

[member="Jack Raxis"] Haven't actually written with you until now... I know.... I'm surprised as well. but, from what little I have seen, I do like your energy. It's infectious, and it helps me to move forward. I like how Jack doesn't pull punches, He says what's on his mind.