I.M.D. C.C. MkI

[Darth Banshee]

Image Source: https://uk.pinterest.com/pin/308707749437935196/
Intent: To make an anti force user scout armour for the clans
Development Thread: Here, here and here 4,6,8,10,21,33,46,63,67,75,77,80,83,88,91,95,98,
Manufacturer: Independent Military Developers
Model: I.M.D. C.C. MkI
Affiliation: Closed market, calns only loyal to U.C.M.
Modularity: Colour
Production: Minor
Material: Phirk, durasteel, Armor Weave
Classification: Anti force using scout armour
Weight: 10kg
Quality: 7 to chest and head 5 everywhere else
Special Features: Lightsaber resistant, (not blocking but glancing blows)
Silenced wrist blaster (Right Wrist)
Mini Rocket launcher (Right Wrist)
Hush coms
Infrared sight
Ultraviolet sight
Droidcam
Paddle beamer (Left Wrist)
Baby Ysalamiri
Rebreather
Med kit
Grappling hook
GPS system
Stealth capable
Soft leather boots
Strengths: Lightweight
Minimal lightsaber resistance
Defends where from the force
Weaknesses: Not everywhere is armoured
Not good against explosives, as many gaps for shrapnel to get in.
Description: Ch'an'cio'cislin'ci Ch'ascim means scout armour in mandalorian tongue, and that is why it is called I.M.D. C.C. MkI. The breastplate and helmet, are made from a durasteel and phrik alloy. This gives them resistance from glancing lightsaber hits, but full contact it only slow down. As for the rest it base layer of armour weave, which gives minimal protection, but allows manoeuvrability. To keep the weight down they used a young Ysalamiri lizard, so they are still protected from the force, but only a meter bubble, which cover most humans. The droidcam is way of seeing things like a droid, and droids are immune to some type of force stealth, as such if they are using one them, the where can see them. They also comes with a stealth system, it last roughly one hour. Though it can be recharged, at any electrical point thanks to its universal plug. It also has paddle beamer, this is used to take down the hand that wields lightsaber or gun at close range. By stunning that part of the body, this would give the user advantage at close range.
Primary Source: (Please link the source of another writer's submission that you are modifying for your use; only necessary for "Chaos Canon" submissions)

 

[Jorus Merrill]

RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review
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Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review
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WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Jorus Merrill]

[member="Sabine Kurtass"]

To be able to use a Restricted Item in your Factory Submission, a writer must first complete the objective attached to the restricted item in a convincing manner that adds to the quality of the role-play thread. Standard development may grant between Unique and Limited production depending on the submission, with a maximum of Minor production following additional development.

Submissions using Restricted Items will be reviewed by a Role-play Judge, and may be declined depending on the quality and effort of the submitter.

Your third dev thread has enough effort to it that I'd consider it standard development. Your first two dev threads are incredibly cursory. One appears to be a stygium mining thread with no relationship to this submission. Many of your posts in those threads are under a hundred words, occasionally under fifty, just a sentence or two. I'm not referring to your posting partner who regularly posted one-liners, either: your own posts were beyond minimal in many cases. The focus of the second thread appears to be something uncomfortable involving bubble baths, massages, whips, and young female slaves. I'm also fairly sure I've seen that thread cited and rejected in a previous submission at some point in the last few months; I know it's one I've had my eye on a couple of times before, in a Factory context. If that's not the case, I apologize, but considering the thread's age and the fact that it's a stygium thread (and this sub has nothing to do with stygium or stealth that I can see), I don't think I'm far wrong.

Normally when someone posts several development threads, they're aiming for something substantial -- in this case, a middling suit of phrik armor at minor production. I don't see any evidence of actual effort in the first two dev threads, and I'm not wild about them being cited to boost the armor to minor production. Given that you're aiming for Force-immune phrik armor in really large quantities based on this development, and considering the dev thread issues, I find myself concluding that you might not be acting in good faith here. I was about to deny this on those grounds, but I don't believe in one-shot denials.

Complete an additional 20-post development thread, remove the first two development threads, and we'll go from there. PM Spencer Jacobs for un-archiving when your development is complete.

 

[Jorus Merrill]

Moved to Archives - PM [member="Spencer Varanin"] for removal / if denied for Second Chance please post and tag Spencer Varanin for review.

Thank you!