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Approved Starship Ichinomiya-class Grand Temple

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Affiliation: Inari Shogunate
Manufacturer: Izanami Ironworks
Model: N/A
Modularity: N/A
Production: Limited
Material:

Classification: Station

Length: 3990 meters
Width: 1230 meters
Height: 612 meters
Weight: 18,000,000 T
Cargo Capacity: 1,200,000 T

Crew
  • 120 Officers
  • 12,000 Maintenance and Repair Crew
  • 10,800 Samurai
  • 360 Gunners and Gunnery Crew
Passengers
  • 240,000 Residents
  • 240,000 Additional Passengers
Consumables
  • Self-Sufficient for 120,000 (Luxurious), 240,000 (Standard), 480,000 (Bare Minimum)
  • Consumables for 240,000 (Standard) for 720 days

Armament:

[*]Port Side

[*]Starboard Side

[*]Aft
  • 60 Point-Defense Ion Cannon Batteries


Hangar:
  • 6 Starboard Quarter Docking Tubes (Maintenance and Cargo)
  • 6 Port Quarter Docking Tubes (Maintenance and Cargo)
  • 6 Stern Hangar Bays
    Primary Hangar Bay (Private Hangar Bay of the Daimyo)
    1 Light Freighter/Shuttle
  • 1 Squadron

[*]Secondary Hangar Bay (Hangar Bay of the Royal Vanguard)
  • 1 Squadron

[*]Tertiary Hangar Bay (Royal Guard Hangar Bay)
  • 3 Squadrons

[*]Quaternary Hangar Bay (Royal Guard Hangar Bay)
  • 1 Squadron

[*]Quinary Hangar Bay (Commercial Hangar Bay)
  • 18 Repair Ships

[*]Senary Hangar Bay (Commercial Hangar Bay)
  • 18 Repair Ships



Special Features:
  • 1 System-wide Hyperwave Jammer, jams hyperwave signals within an entire system, preventing communications of starships to other starships outside the system as well as communications via hyperwaves.
  • 1 Thermal Shield Generator
  • 1 Advanced Navicomputer, storing an extremely extensive map of most, if not all, hyperlanes and features of the galaxy.
  • Hyperspace Engine
  • 1 TriLuna 400MGS Stardrive and Hyperdrive System
  • 1 Advanced Life Support Systems, featuring a near-perfect atmospheric air filtering and recycling system
  • 1 Tensor Field Generator and Inertial Compensators, assisting in maintaining the structure of the station despite heavy structural damage and strong planetary gravitational pull.
  • 3 Hypermatter Annihilation Reactor (Power Output: > 3.24E24 W)
  • 6 Nubian Creveld-4 Radial Ion Drives
  • 6 Extensive Sensor and Communication Arrays

Internal Structures:
  • 1 Temple, the literal apex of the entire station, here lies the command bridge of the station. It is also the religious center of the station, in which only the top echelons of society are allowed to enter.
  • 1 Provincial Center, at the very center of the districts, this is the location at which trade between all districts occurs but mostly comprises of only the richest and most successful merchants of the three Commercial Districts. In addition, the centralized government system of all the Districts, called the Provincial Government.
  • 3 Commercial Districts, in the center of four adjacent Districts, the Commercial District is an independent area of commercial trading between the four Districts.
  • 12 Districts, the title for one section of the station, possessed by one Clan and having an independent government, and its own Dojo and Town. Each district represents a holy animal that they revere.
    There are four Major Clans: Seiryuu (Azure Dragon), Suzaku (Vermilion Phoenix), Byakko (White Tiger), and Genbu (Black Tiger). Then, there are four Minor Clans: Kitsune (Fox), Hebi (Snake), Tsuchigumo (Spider) and Inugami (Dog). Finally, there are six subservient Vassal Clans: Mujina (Badger), Neko (Cat), Nezumi (Rat), Saru (Monkey), Tanuki (Raccoon-Dog) and Usagi (Hare).

[*]12 Dojos, structures equipped with the necessary facilities to fully train and house 9,000 Samurai. Includes an armory, a barracks, a training area for melee and ranged weaponry, various starship and vehicle simulators, and finally, a unique relic that symbolizes the Dojo's main area of expertise and is considered a representation of the District's holy animal. The Districts of Vassal Clans possess the same facilities, but do not possess title of Dojo as they lack social rank.
[*]20 Towns, housing 9,000 civilians each and coupled with each Dojo, this is the standard living area for most of the population of each District. The number of Towns varies per District and depends on the population

Maneuverability: 20
Speed Rating: 20
Hyperdrive Class: 18

Strengths:
+ Durable and resilient hull, coupled with superb military grade shields
+ Large Passenger and Cargo Capacity, and is self-sustainable
+ Mobile (albeit very slow)
Weaknesses:
- Limited amount of defensive aft weaponry
- Limited military-capable hangar bays
- Extremely slow and difficult to maneuver
- Takes an extremely long time to position after moving

Description:
In the current Era of Chaos, the sanctity and safety of planetary worlds have ceased to exist. At any moment, any planet is susceptible to conquest or invasion, regardless of pre-existing security and defensive measures put in place. Thus, Kitsune sought out the leading designers of the Izanami Ironworks to create a mobile colony station capable of meeting these demands. The result was the Ichinomiya-class Grand Temple.

The Ichinomiya-class Grand Temple is a behemothic structure, spanning several thousand feet in length and weighing over eighteen million tons. Holding and capable of sustaining a population of 360,000 residents within 12 partitioned levels of the station. Primarily serving as the main place of residency of the Inari Shogunate's population, the Ichinomiya-class Grand Temple serves a similar role to the Worldships of the Yuuzhan Vong, although to a much smaller degree.

Each Grand Temple is individually designed by Kitsune and a cohort of extremely skilled and cutting edge starship designers of the Izanami Ironworks, and each step of the process of creating each of these structures was directly managed and supervised by Kitsune to ensure utmost perfection. Although all the Grand Temples share the same technical specifications, each Grand Temple is embellished differently and representative of the dominant clan on board the station. Under Kitsune's watchful vigilance and leadership, an initial eight Grand Temples were created, each representative of a specific Major or Minor Clan, and the Izanami Ironworks continues the tedious and extremely long process of creating dozens of duplicate batches at the moment.
Each section of the station is denoted as a District and holds several towns, depending on the population of the Clan which inhabits it. Currently, there are eight clans within the Inari Shogunate. There are four Major Clans: Seiryuu (Azure Dragon), Suzaku (Vermilion Phoenix), Byakko (White Tiger), and Genbu (Black Tiger). Then, there are four Minor Clans: Kitsune (Fox), Hebi (Snake), Tsuchigumo (Spider) and Inugami (Dog). Finally, there is the subservient and socially lower class called the Hata Clan. On each Grand Temple, the presence of each clan varies, with some being completely unrepresented while others completely dominated and each district also varies in the number of towns depending on its population.

Each District possesses a small government system, a Dojo, one to, a maximum of, forty Towns, and finally, an agricultural and/or industrial complex, providing sustenance for its population. Of course, Districts often import exotic and more palatable ingredients, but they can subsist on the staple crops that they produce. The ratio of agriculture and industry varies between Districts, with some solely possessing agricultural capabilities while others, relying more heavily on other industries. Each Clan is known for a 'specialization' in one or more industries, with the Major Clans often providing luxury goods and services, while the Minor Clans providing produced, crafted or manufactured goods. Most, if not all, of the Vassal Clans' Districts rely completely on agriculture and produce surplus amounts to trade with other Districts. The trading of these goods often take place in the Commercial Districts, which are placed among four Districts. Trading can also be done in the Provincial Center, the most center part of the station which holds the administrative buildings of ruling clan of the station. However, trading in this location is reserved for richest, most successful and most prestigious merchants of the Commercial Districts and most are unable to visit the Provincial Center unless possessive of decent social standing within the Inari Shogunate.

Finally, the most important and most crucial part of the station is located at the literal apex of the station: the Temple. The Temple is the religious complex on board each Grand Temple and serves as the center of religion. Here, monks stay in constant prayer to the Goddess of the Inari Shogunate: Kitsune. In addition, the command center of the station also exists here, and is only accessible by the highest echelons of society. Being able to enter the Temple is an honor for any in the Inari Shogunate, as it equates to the closest connection to the Goddess.


Development Thread:
Intent: To create an offworld habitation station, similar to the Yuuzhan Vong's homeworld ship or the Ithorian Herdship, for the Inari Shogunate. Note, this craft will never be utilized in an offensive capability and is primarily utilized as a place of permanent residency. Movement of these stations will be absolutely minimal and will be mainly be in planetary orbit of a planetoid body or completely stationary.
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[member="Kitsune"]

I'm sorry but right off the bat this ship is against the rules as no ship over 3,000 is allowed without a flagship thread, and even then must be owned by a major faction itself.


1. Only Major Factions may own Flagships.

2. Flagships are a prefix located in the Star Wars: Open Role-Playing forum.

3. The requirements of the Flagship thread are as follows:

a. The thread must be a minimum of 400 posts.

b. There must be at least 7 writers actively involved in the thread.

c. The thread is public and is open to any other Major Faction to join.

d. The production - or possession - of the Flagship must be the thread's major focal point.

5. No player may captain a ship over 3,000 meters without the Major Faction Owner's consent.

6. No ship over 3,000 meters will be approved for any Major Faction without a completed Flagship thread.

7. Each Flagship must be labeled Unique.
 
[member="Kitsune"]

You repeatedly call it a mobile habitation ship, and its speed and the fact it can hyperspace support those along with your description which only calls it a station once. If you want it to be a station then emphasize that so there is no mistake. If it is one then please drop the speed and hyperspace as most stations are highly immobile and towed rather than moving on their own through hyperspace (though most are generally built on site).

Also the dominion is not a sufficient dev thread. The only possible mention of this submission is the ISS Fatass in which you make no descriptions, make no real use of it throughout the thread, and do not give any details about it or its capabilities.

If you want this station please perform a dev thread with 3 writers.

Perhaps they can be touring it as you show off daily activities aboard the temple. Or you have one under attack and showcase its defense.
 
[member="Camellia Swift"]

Ship references changed to station. Speed throttled.

Additional dev thread added, totaling four unique writers and 40 posts.

Of course, the additional dev thread still needs to be continued/finished, and thus, adding more posts in the end. This thread's purpose is the obtainment of mining supplies and then, the mining of raw materials for it. Plot-wise, still has a bit to go, but the thread will end with Kitsune mining the planet and building the framework of the Ichinomiya-class Grand Temple.
 
[member="Kitsune"]

Alright, last request is that you move the development thread and intent sections to the bottom as is in the original template. added information is fine, but keep the parts in the template in their places. Sorry for not mentioning that sooner. Everything else is fine though now, I'll send this to secondary after you fix that.
 
I don't see much of a difference between this and a flagship quite honestly, and that makes me uncomfortable.

However, with one other change i'll tentatively approve this.

This thing is also huge, and while you state that its slow it has a speed and maneuverability rating of 18. There are smaller ships with less maneuverability so i would like you to raise this to 20.

[member="Kitsune"]
 
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