Zac Grayson
Jericho's Bastard
Ok ok, I know everyone might be a little...tired of the One Sith fights, but I most request of you one more. This will not be for a planet and will be on Republic grounds. Alderaan.
First I know you are wondering why Alderaan. This skirmish is personal, it is for Darth Valdra. I have worked hard on this character for over a year, but right after I gained Master I joined one Sith and became a Sith Lord. This gave him the impression of a transfer and we all know transfers don't get the respect like people who work to rise in a faction. so I am demoting him to Knight and to do so I need him injured to near death, Vader style.
Now all of Hakora's life changing moments have ended up on Alderaan and I don't want to stop now. I also want it to be in a duel with with his Rival [member="Taeli Raaf"] so this means Alderaan and Republic.
Now, I do not want to say, "if you do this for me I will give you blah blah." I have not mentioned this skirmish publicly in One Sith because I want to let you Republicans decided what should be the reason for you to join. I need people involved because the Sith need to witness his death including Raaf and the Jedi. I have always been a fan of the dead hiding behind a mask and shock and awe when they are revealed to be alive.
So, my fellow writers, what can I do to make this more appealing to you guys and fun?
First I know you are wondering why Alderaan. This skirmish is personal, it is for Darth Valdra. I have worked hard on this character for over a year, but right after I gained Master I joined one Sith and became a Sith Lord. This gave him the impression of a transfer and we all know transfers don't get the respect like people who work to rise in a faction. so I am demoting him to Knight and to do so I need him injured to near death, Vader style.
Now all of Hakora's life changing moments have ended up on Alderaan and I don't want to stop now. I also want it to be in a duel with with his Rival [member="Taeli Raaf"] so this means Alderaan and Republic.
Now, I do not want to say, "if you do this for me I will give you blah blah." I have not mentioned this skirmish publicly in One Sith because I want to let you Republicans decided what should be the reason for you to join. I need people involved because the Sith need to witness his death including Raaf and the Jedi. I have always been a fan of the dead hiding behind a mask and shock and awe when they are revealed to be alive.
So, my fellow writers, what can I do to make this more appealing to you guys and fun?