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Approved Tech Intrepid Class - Spinal Adaptor Battle Armor MK1

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Out of Character Information
  • Intent: To create an experimental armor set for Ravenous
  • Image Source: Here Fam
  • Cannon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
Production Information
  • Manufacturer: Ravenous
  • Affiliation: Ravenous
  • Model: Intrepid Class - Spinal Adaptor Battle Armor MK1
  • Modularity: Yes
    • Power cells and other energy components can be swapped to increase power input
    • Chemical/ Adrenaline canisters in the cybernetic spine can be changed
    • Parts of the spine can be retracted or dismantled automatically if they are in danger of damaging the wearer or puncturing an organ
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Cortosis weave plating, Heavy Phrik undercoating, Vibro gauntlets with retractable blades
Technical Specifications
  • Classification: Nerve and Spinal cord enhancement
  • Weight: Average
  • Resistances
    • Energy: Very High
    • Kinetic: High
    • Lightsabers: Very High
    • Other
      • Elemental: Very High
      • Sonic: Average
      • Emp/ Ion: None
Special Features
  • Cybernetic Spine with heavy armor plating and BIO enhanced extendability which allows the muscles fibers and bone tissue of the operator to extend and constrict to inhuman levels
Adrenaline and other stims are encased inside the spine which can e released across a person's bloodstream and nervous system. This allows for the wearer to not only heal injuries but increases survivability past levels that are humanly possible
  • Cortosis weaving protects the user from both Lightsaber and energy-based weapons
  • Inside the mask is a technical readout of the operator's vitals and a display of the suits power level provided by the cybernetic spine that must be implanted on the user prior to entering the suit
  • The Mask's bone mold structure was created using what many believe to be the Mask of Darth Nihilus based on its draining presence and the empty void that surrounded it
Strengths
  • Heavily resistant to energy-based weapons and lightsabers
  • Capable of healing the user and providing them with boosts of energy and strength
  • A strong Force presence surrounds the bone mold material used in the armor's mask giving the wearer reserve energy in exchange for a part of their life force as well as their Force signature and mental stability leaving a wound where a part of themselves should be
  • It looks nice
Weaknesses
  • Cybernetic spine's components are susceptible to sonic and kinetic attacks and are capable of disrupting the spine's components
  • Shorts in the cybernetic spine can electrocute and kill the user
  • If the spine is damaged it may collapse in on itself and damage the operator's nervous system
  • Overuse of the spines chemicals can result in overdose and kill and operator
  • The overwhelming presence inside the armor can drive the wearer towards insanity
Description
  • The Intrepid Class - Spinal adaptor battle armor was specifically built for the Cybernetic spine Ravenous had implanted years ago when his natural spine was destroyed in an intense lightsaber duel. While his old spine was functional it was hastily put together in a bid to save his life thus it has its limits such as a weak resistance to wear and tear. This new spinal adaptor will not only, improve upon the previous shortcomings of his old spine but will also provide a combat-focused build designed around Ravenous' fighting style. Years ago Ravenous' associate Orex Mauda found what shows evidence of being Darth Nihilus's mask though it has yet to be confirmed. This mask carried a massive void around it like a wound in the Force yet it hungers constantly. Ravenous saw the opportunity this mask presented and broke down its parts and used them to create his own mask. Because of the link, this new mask has to Nihilus it retains his presence while still being confined to the abilities and fortitude of the wielder. In his true and terrible form, Nihilus was able to destroy planets but because some of his spirit is retained inside the mask and subsequentially the user he is unable to support and power the wearer of the mask cannot contain. (I.E A few souls can be contained but not the life force of entire planets it's simply too much power to muster from a spirit alone.)
 
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Ravenfire

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Ravenous
Hi I will be judging you today
So in terms of your balance
Unique -4
Very Heavy -2
High +1
None -3
Very High +2
High +1
None -3
None -3
= -11 overall rating you are very under powered and can bump up ratings if you would like

How does Darth Nihilus help the user in any way shape or form?
 

Ravenfire

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Ravenous
so you still under by one but otherwise that is fine, please change the medium to average which is the name of the rating.

Also can you please answer my second question, how does the life force of darth nihilus help the user?
 

Ravenous

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Ravenfire Ravenfire oh, my bad I thought you wanted me to explain in the actual post!

Basically Nihilus increases the user's power by lending them his own power in the Force. You know how when people use the Force to such an extent or so frequently that they need to recuperate before using it again? Nihilus would allow you to use the Force twice as long because now you have his power to lean on too. Think Naruto essentially. Also if you feed Nihilus with Force drain he will progressively become more powerful like he did when he was alive.
 

Ravenfire

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Ravenous
Apologies on the long wait, got caught up doing some things.

I have a few points, Firstly under this boards rules you can't use any form of canon characters. By having darth nihilus spirit in this item, that is technically a breach of that rule.
Secondly canon items cannot be claimed any longer so you can highly suggest this is where his soul resides but it may or may not actually reside here.
Lastly maybe give more of an explanation as to how this item came to be, why your character might think it is darth nihilius in the armour along with why he would add his own strength to yours especially if he continues force draining people he literally becomes a planet killer again which is starting in itself to head towards super weapon levels.
 

Ravenfire

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Ravenous
Awesome sauce
so after recalculating everything I realised that you are still under
Unique -4
Average 0
Very High +2
None -3
Very High +2
High +1
Average 0
None -3
= -5 we can either keep bumping ratings, adding on more things like a force rating at extreme or pass it as is.
 
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