Is This Where I Harvest My Cortosis?

[Korro Kenyu]

So I mined some cortosis, here is the DEV Thread. Hope this works...

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/95275-time-to-mine-dev-thread/#entry1383404

I think this is where I post to get it, atleast I hope so.

 

[Ak'lya]

[member="Korro Kenyu"]

First off, you may want to beef up your posts. I've seen dev threads like this one get denied/asked to be expanded due to sheer lack of content.

Secondly, simply link to the Dev thread in your submission to the factory.

 

[Korro Kenyu]

Okay, Yeah I thought that I might want to make it better, I just didn't really know how to do that with mining, but I'll try this one first and if it's not good enough then I might make another. I don't know, thanks for the advice btw! [member="Strask Ak'lya"]

 

[Korro Kenyu]

Wait, [member="Strask Ak'lya"] one more thing, so I should move this thread, I didn't really understand what you said in secondly.

 

[Matsu Xiangu]

[member="Korro Kenyu"]


What he means is that the link to the Dev thread should be included in whatever Factory submission the Cortosis is intended to be included in.

So you can't do much with it now, but whomever is using the cortosis just needs to link to the thread in their factory sub.

However, I'm with Strask. I'm no Factory Judge but I'm assuming they're going to want to see more.

 

[Korro Kenyu]

Okay thanks guys... I appreciate it! [member="Matsu Xiangu"]

 

[Gray Raxis]

[member="Korro Kenyu"]

Okay that thread will not cut it as a dev thread for a sub. Each post needs to be 200-300 words at least and I think you maybe that for the entire thread. You need to add a lot more to that thread and work on the length of your posting in general if that is how you typically post in RP. I'm not trying to be mean or rude, just letting you know exactly whats going to happen. A factory judge told me the rule for dev thread posts in the past so where I got the numbers. And for the length of posts, it is frowned upon to do single line posting. It is very hard to RP with people that do that. It gives your partner little to nothing to work with and offers no insight into either your character or the situation. Try posting as if you are writing for a short story or book. It will be more fun for you as well if you do.

 

[Korro Kenyu]

Okay [member="Gray Raxis"], I don't take offense and sure wouldn't have think your rude. Yeah that's a better way to think of it, I'm not good at role playing with myself and when I start to get going I won't stop so I hope that it will accept one huge post. I also don't think I rp like that. I think I should probably not do self missions after this, I'd rather actually rp with someone then talk to myself, I always found self rps weird. Just write a story on fanfiction.net or something. Anyways I'm glad I didn't submit it right away and made this stupid little post first, you learn something new everyday! [member="Gray Raxis"]