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Factory Denied Jake's Spear || Winter's Bite

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Jake Ateris

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

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  • Intent: The spear
  • Image Source: Here
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Sith Sword
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Jake Ateris
  • Affiliation: Jake Ateris
  • Model: N/A
  • Modularity: No
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Alchemized durasteel
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Sword
  • Size: Average
  • Weight: Heavy
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Lightsaber resistant
  • Deflects blasterfire
  • Can ground lightning
  • Very sharp
Strengths:
  • Force Light: The spear has been imbued with Force Light. This allows it to cut through creatures of darkness. In addition, the properties of the sword make it exceptional against Sith Spawn, and the like.
  • Dark Side Countering: The spear is made to fight creatures of the Dark Side. As such, it has an advantage against those who use the dark side.
  • Can control Ice / Cold.
WEAKNESSES
  • Ylasmari: Ylasmari block the force.
  • Void Stone: Void Stone blocks the Force.
  • Corruption: Strong practictioners of the Dark Side of the Force could corrupt the blade, warping it's very nature.
  • Loss of Internal Balance: The sword requires internal balance in order to work with a connection to the Light Side. If there is not one, the sword will disappear until there is such a connection.
Description:

A spear made in the past by a Silver Jedi who went around attempting to save lives. The spear was created out of Jedi Alchemy, and Durasteel. The spear was created by him as a weapon capable of withstanding Lightsabers. Furthermore, due to the Force Crystals embedded in the spear's handle, it is capable of unleashing a beam of Force Energies. The spear is also applied with the property of Force Light which makes it effective as a weapon against creatures that employ the Dark Side, Sith Spawn and the Like. It's also good at countering the powers of the Dark Side. It can fly to his hand when he wants it to come to his hand.

The Force Crystals in the spear also allow it to control ice / cold. It also has slots for Force Crystals. Adding new ones could add extra abilities to it.
 
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Jake Ateris

  • Manufacturer: Jake Ateris
  • Affiliation: Jake Ateris

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Can control Ice / Cold
The Force Crystals in the spear also allow it to control ice / cold.

What crystals are being used to control ice/cold?

Force Light: The sword has been imbued with Force Light. This allows it to cut through creatures of darkness. In addition, the properties of the sword make it exceptional against Sith Spawn, and the like.

How does it create and maintain the force light? Just because the technique is used int he creation process doesn't mean it will forever emit it and be able to use it.

Dark Side Countering: The sword is made to fight creatures of the Dark Side. As such, it has an advantage against those who use the dark side.

How does it counter the darkside specifically?

Corruption: Strong practictioners of the Dark Side of the Force could corrupt the blade, warping it's very nature.

Expand and explain what sort of corruption please.

Loss of Internal Balance: The sword requires internal balance in order to work with a connection to the Light Side. If there is not one, the sword will disappear until there is such a connection.

Explain, how will the sword disappear and what determines inner balance?

The sword was created out of Jedi Alchemy, and Durasteel.

Do you kow what the main components of alchemy is? Blood and power. Explain how the jedi was getting the needed components as few know how to preform lightside versions of alchemy.

Furthermore, due to the Force Crystals embedded in the spear's handle, it is capable of unleashing a beam of Force Energies.

You have no mention of force crystals in the materials, special features or strengths and this wave needs more detail please.

It can fly to his hand when he wants it to come to his hand

What is used to let it fly into his hand?

Adding new ones could add extra abilities to it.

Expand on this, what crystals could for example be used and what would it gain?
 
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