Jeh Chikwaj

[Jeh Chikwaj]

NAME: Jeh Chikwaj
FACTION: Star Wreckers
RANK: Admiral
SPECIES: Mon Calamari
AGE: 27
SEX: Male
HEIGHT: 1.89m
WEIGHT: 12 lbs
EYES: Green
HAIR: N/A
SKIN: Salmon Coloured
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

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STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Jeh Chikwaj is especially strong in water. He has a large brain and it exceptionally clever. However, he is weak on desrt planets like Tatooine. He is incapable of walking for long distances.

APPEARANCE:
Jeh Chikwaj is salmon coloured and his skin is silky smooth. He has large green eyes and can see for miles! He dresses in white battle armour with blue streaks.

BIOGRAPHY:
Jeh Chikwaj was orpahned by a group of Jedi when he was 3. his parents were smuggling weapons to Geonosis. They shot down his parents ship whilst they were smuggling the last haul of blasters. Jeh Chikwaj now owns Radient VIII, a similarbut improved ship to the Radient VII. He uses it to fly around the galaxy, wrecking entire civilisations.

 

[Darren Onyx]

Hey man. I think that, before you start RPing, you get into cleaning up your creation page here. Fix some grammar issues and include a extended Bio that will really help others understand who your character is and what his goals are.

If you have any questions, feel free to ask me or one of the Staff Members.

[member="Jeh Chikwaj"]

 

[Jeh Chikwaj]

Kk

 

[Jeh Chikwaj]

Bio: Jeh was the Avenger, his life was destroyed when it had only begun. He WILL destroy the Jedi, he will avenge his parents, that is his only goal in life, to destroy them...

 

[Jeh Chikwaj]

That better?

 

[Lucrezia]

Some small things mainly

• Who are the star wreckers?
• Your ship needs a tech sub more then likely
• The planet Meridias I am not finding on wookiee it will most likely need a sub
• The largest ship a non faction member can have is 400m an armada of star destroyers wouldn't be possible

It is interesting but generally we don't double post, you have a good opening thread and might get some people to join it never know.