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Luka Zeare

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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: MandalArms
  • Affiliation: MandalArms
  • Model: N/A
  • Modularity: No
  • Production: Limited
  • Material: Durasteel, blaster components
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Blaster Pistol
  • Size: Small
  • Weight: Light
  • Ammunition Type: Power cell
  • Ammunition Capacity: Low | 30 (power pack)
  • Effective Range: Auto: Personal Semi-Auto: Average
  • Rate of Fire: Auto: Very High Semi-Auto: Low
  • Stopping Power: High
  • Recoil: High


SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Magazine is auto ejected
  • Can switch between a non automatic mode and a automatic mode
STRENGTHS
  • small, lightweight craftsmanship makes this weapon easy to carry
  • Provides exceptional pressure
WEAKNESSES
  • Lowered accuracy in fully automatic.
  • Useless in most long ranged shootouts
  • Requires frequent reloading
DESCRIPTION
A personal design of Luka Zeare, it is a small smg used primarily for quick assault and close quarter scenarios. Magazine is auto ejected when it runs out for a quick reload in order to keep up the pressure the weapon provides. Firing incredibly quick additionally means that you must be able to manage your ammo clips. Additionally if one is in a firefight it can be switched into semi-auto mode.
 
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Hi there!

A few things here:

You're going to need to list a company to manufacture this at Limited production. Do you have a company that you could list for this? It can be someone elses, with their permission. You could also utilize a faction, if you have one in mind.

With Limited, you'd want to affiliate this with more people than just yourself. Say, a minor faction or a specific group of people. Unique is about the only time you'd list yourself as the sole affiliation.

Personal for range means that it's only literally a bit further than point blank. Is that what you meant? Average is about normal for a blaster.

Could you reword the strength about it being small to say something like "small, lightweight craftsmanship makes this weapon easy to carry"?

The listed strength about dual wielding isn't actually a strength, please remove it.

The semi-auto thing also is not a strength, please remove it.

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Luka Zeare

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I made fixes to the tech specifications and strengths and weaknesses, still working on the production details though. Additionally I did mean personal when it came to the auto mode.
 

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