Just made this character and want roleplay

[Blake Knight]

I'm looking for any instersting roleplays he wants to train to be a Jedi and would like to find a master he could use some friends or a nice girl to hangout with Blake is young and can get himself into trouble he's looking to meet Jedi too I would like to talk over ideas

 

[Jsc]

Jake. Can we talk punctuation, spelling, and run on sentences for a moment. I'm beginning to notice a pattern here.

Ex:

"I'm looking for any interesting roleplays. Blake wants to train to be a Jedi and would like to find a master. He could use some friends or a nice girl to hangout with. Blake is young and can get himself into trouble. He's looking to meet Jedi too. I would like to talk over ideas."

^ This is how you would correct your post. Now. Moving forward? I would strongly recommend you at least make an attempt to write somewhat coherently in your future posts. Please make an attempt to use good punctuation, spelling, and avoid run on sentences when you post on the boards. Even when using a phone. Writing English is a wonderful skill to learn these days and will become a blessing to you throughout all of your life. But it does require at least a little effort on your part.

Cheers and happy posting.

 

[Blake Knight]

I never claimed I was good at any of if but I want watch more in rps I dont really care too much if I don't when talking about ideas

 

[Jsc]

Jake. I'd like to help you so I'm going to PM you. Maybe we'll figure something out together. Cheers.

 

[Blake Knight]

Ok I'll explain it this so people understand.No I don't use grammar in out of character and talking about ideas for roleplays.But I do use better grammar when I roleplay even though I'm on my phone mostly.Being on a phone mostly makes it more annoying to use the right grammar for all my posting.The autocorrect dose sometimes mess up my spelling but my spelling isn't great anyway.Ok now dose anyone else have an issue with my writing with that said?

 

[Ali Hadrix]

I feel it was a bit harsh to jump you on a public board like that, though I would agree that those points were valid.

We would love to have you at the Galactic Republic, home to the stock canon Jedi Order. I myself write an apprentice, though that doesn't mean we can't get some writing done!

 

[Jordan Achilles]

[member="Blake Knight"]
Wanna tussle with a sith? Will a sith in training.

 

[Blake Knight]

[member="Ali Hadrix"]
Sadly that was me being nice but very blunt

[member="Jordan Achilles"]
Nah the sith thing isn't my style

 

[Jordan Achilles]

[member="Blake Knight"]
But, But..I'm bored...

 

[Ali Hadrix]

I understand where you're coming from.

Let me know if you're interested with writing with the Jedi Order!

[member="Blake Knight"]

 

[Blake Knight]

[member="Jordan Achilles"]
So am I but I was thinking about being more a rogue Jedi

[member="Ali Hadrix"]
I don't think the Jedi order is for the idea I have

 

[Blake Knight]

I'm also trying to think up a background and get roleplays going.

 

[Lucien Cordel]

[member="Blake Knight"]
Wanna tussle with a sith? Will a sith in training.

Jordan Achilles So am I but I was thinking about being more a rogue Jedi

I think [member="Jordan Achilles"] means he wants to duel you [member="Blake Knight"]. I get the impression you thought he meant training.

If not I apologize

Thanks,
Cal

 

[Blake Knight]

[member="Lucien Cordel"]
Yeah I did read it wrong but I really don't want to duel either

 

[Elion Menaio]

[member="Blake Knight"]

*silently raises hand indicating a thread sounds great*