Kaile Beans and Bobo.

[Kaile Vera]

So here is my Kaileann.

I've been in over twenty threads, private, public, invasion, skirmishes, and open threads. I'm happy to have met so many people icly, and I was curious what people thought of her and Bobo.

Anything one would like to see her experience? Do? What can I as a writer do to writer her better?

She's my biggest muse so far and I'm having fun, but I would most defiantly like some feedback on her now so I can come back a year later and compare and contrast!

 

[Arage Bao]

[member="Kaileann Vera"]

*steals Bobo and runs*

 

[Kaile Vera]

[member="Samael Rekali"]

Leave Bobo alone!!!!

 

[Judah Dashiell]

[member="Kaileann Vera"]


I don't know, all she's doing is crying right now. I'll report back later.

 

[Felran Natri]

[member="Kaileann Vera"]

I have seen some of herthreads. They are pretty good. The only thing missing is a thread with yours truly

 

[Fabula Caromed]

Query. Can we eat Bobo, to really get a feel of how he is?

Or at least breed him so I can have one.

 

[Andanian Ategann]

[member="Kaileann Vera"]

One or two threads with you, and I really love her. Didnt even know she was Force-Sensitive. She really hits that 'innocent' vibe for me.

I'd have more to say, but we'd have to thread more

 

[Kaile Vera]

Query. Can we eat Bobo, to really get a feel of how he is?

Or at least breed him so I can have one.

D: no eating!!

And no

he is sterile and his genetic makeup is so unstable that he can't even be cloned

[member="Felran Natri"] - i'm easy!


[member="Andanian Ategann"] with how things look, i'm sure we will be threading more! I really, really did enjoy our interactions.

 

[James Justice]

[member="Kaileann Vera"]

Haven't seen all too much of this character but you seem to be putting a nice twist on the girl next door archetype. I like what I am reading. You have a believable character, good story lines, are pretty believable, and seem to be quite sweet. Not OP from what I have seen or too over the top, all in all pretty good.

 

[Kaile Vera]

[member="James Justice"]

Thank you so much!

I wanted to go for your "Girl next door type" with a very bubbly outgoing personality. A real sweetheart. Bobo just makes her all the more interesting.

She's grown loads due to her experiences with Kurt Meyer, Asmus Janes, and Jamie Pyne, plus everyone else who has given me the honor of rping with them.

Not sure where she will end up. I'll be interested to see where she is at one year from when I posted this thread!

 

[James Justice]

[member="Kaileann Vera"]

VICTORY DANCE FOR GETTING IT RIGHT

I love it when a character is organic in their growth and change, it makes things so much fun, now doesn't it?

 

[Kaile Vera]

[member="James Justice"]

IT DOES!

She just most recently went through the realization at just how alone she is. Sure she has Bobo, and he means the 'Verse for her, but due to her assignment and how she's constantly been going from one place to the next, she has no real "home". When the "home" she had build with Kurt seemed to be lost to her, she spiraled into a depression because she had no clue where she now belonged.

I'm very interested to see how the dynamic will end up with Kurt, Jamie and Kaile. Special mentions go to Asmus and Braith.

Not sure, but very, very interested.

 

[James Justice]

[member="Kaileann Vera"]


Ah, yes. James does relate. His recent charge into the depths of the Darkside helped him realize how purely alone he is, and how much the death of his wife affected him. So much feels. Love the feels. A ripped and open hurting soul, James tries so hard to ignore it. And a hero's complex, he feels that he has to save everyone and every world, even if he does it the wrong way. Out of his emotional pain comes the resulting romance issues where he pushes women away as the get too close, for fear of loosing them again.

Sigh, #James World Problem

 

[Ellie Mors]

She has that girl-next-door vibe.

 

[Kaile Vera]

She has that girl-next-door vibe.

Thank you!

I was trying to go for that. I wonder what else I could do to really make her pop. I know I should probably do a bit more internal dialogue and work on my descriptions. It is always difficult to come up with a good balance.

 

[Kaile Vera]

So i've done some more rp's with more people and a lot more char dev!

Any new tidbits for feedback and such?

 

[Ellie Mors]

Reading threads with her is my guilty pleasure.