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Karren Trask Feedback 3.0

Well same thing as the last. Been writing Karren trying to push her to grow hard. She has moved from idealistic Jedi to realist Neutral. I'm curious to know those of you who have written with me, what you think. I'm curious to know what those that have been reading me think also.

  • What do you like?
  • Dislike?
  • Suggestions?
Please leave me some quality feedback. I appreciate it.
 
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In all seriousness, I think Trask is my favorite character of yours. Can't put my finger on why, but she feels more real somehow. Keep it up.
 
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I feel bad about dropping the ball on your thread with Sumiko. Alas, I lost muse for her for unrelated reasons. I need to rectify this some time.


As for Karren, in a number of ways she reminds me of a younger Siobhan. Is determined to fight the darkness, becomes radicalised and increasingly extreme in her approach, while still wanting to fight the good fight. Keep it up.
 

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