Kat in the House

[Katelyn Feanor]

So, basically, what do you all think about how I write Katelyn and how she is as a character? I'm curious as to what people think about me as a writer as I'm a rather young writer at the moment and would like to get feedback now to…ya' know, learn what I'm good at, bad at, need to improve on, etc. Any positive and constructive criticism is welcomed with opened arms as well, meaning that you get a free hug!

Personally, out of all of the characters I've ever written, Katelyn seems to be the most diverse and down to Earth character I've written. I feel most comfortable writing her, and heck…things haven't turned out at all as I've expected for this character. I mean sure I could write out 2 full paragraphs about how this character has changed as I've written her, but I'll just save you people from the boring talk.

Anyways, people I've Rped with most, what do you think? [member="Nate the Bounty Hunter"] [member="Gray Raxis"] [member="Azula Feanor"] [member="Queen Sovereign"] Along with all of the other people I've rped with!

 

[Matreya]

I have read a few things by you, not many mind you, but as I see it you're actually quite versed in my opinion. Some come to role play and only make minimal effort, more so enjoying the energy exerted by others, or bear many issues with grammar etcetera. You don't seem to. Any issues I have seen have been minor.

4/5. Grow a bit more, and you got it perfect in my book.

Also...

Kat in the Big Blue house

. Edited your title, bold is the edit...

What does this mean? Lmao I read your title and that came to mind yet I have no idea its meaning... huh.. 5 am ramblins I guess...


Anyway, good writing. Look forward to reading more. Maybe have a seriously traumatic event transpire soon, to give your char some depth that she hasn't seen yet. Such as a wound she expects would kill her, though it doesn't, thus creating a phobia or sorts similar.

Kudos on your work!

 

[Jen]

Also... . Edited your title, bold is the edit...
What does this mean? Lmao I read your title and that came to mind yet I have no idea its meaning... huh.. 5 am ramblins I guess...

 

[Katelyn Feanor]

[member="Fos Misao"]
Thank you!! I actually thought that I needed to work on a lot more than that, so thank you for the positive response!
"Kat in the Big Blue house," you say? Nah...I like my ideas more...but why would that come into your mind of all things? :lol:
Yeah...I should go do something Traumatic with Katelyn cause I haven't really rped it out, only written it out for her bio. Though I might do it with Katelyn's

Spoiler

daughter

if she had one that is.

[member="Jen"]

 

[Darren Onyx]

[member="Katelyn Feanor"]

Never RPed with you. But I've seen some of your stuff, not much, but, like [member="Fos Misao"] said, you seem pretty good at it. You are definitely a good writer who shows lots of passion and dedication in your characters and their stories.

Now, I can't say what you should or shouldn't do with this character because it's not my character. Haha, and you are a different type of writer then me and you have different views and ideas. So instead I'll give you my advice I give most of my writer friends; write down a few plot ideas that can farther your development as a writer and your character's story and then pick the one that will be the most fun to play. This means you get a good story, you gain some writing experience, and you have fun. All the ingredients for a great time on SWRP.

I will say, you being a Rogue Padawan means Darren could always train you haha. But hey, that's up to you.

Edit; I mentioned you twice. Man I should go to bed haha.

 

[Katelyn Feanor]

[member="Darren Onyx"]

Thank you, you have no idea how that makes me feel as a writer. Sometimes, I always doubt my writing ability for no reason but mostly in comparison to people who rped and written for much longer than I have. I don't know why I do this, because it always down my confidence. But, then I see something risky for my character…and I just went for it. And, when that happened…I felt like I actually knew what I wanted to do with Katelyna and her whole story. You see, I used to always be nervous about doing different rps that didn't fall in line with how I wanted my character…but I'm glad that on Chaos, I finally took a step out of my comfort zone and that has made all of the difference!

Plot ideas are fun! But, as of recent…like stated above, I've tried going with the flow of things and that is also quite interesting . But, I'll keep in mind to do write out some plot ideas sometime. Thank you for the advice.

Haha, just cause we're both rouges doesn't mean much, I hope! But you wanna know something, originally Kat was supposed to be a heavy user of the force…but guess what? She the complete opposite of that! Amazing how your well thought out ideas can change in an instant and turn into something far better than you have ever imagined. Though, I might want to Rp with you sometime. Either with Katelyn or one of my new characters…who I still need to write out! (Yes!*sarcatic* I love writing out giant bios for characters, I love it even more when I accidentally delete the whole bio on accident)