Kor-za, the Warlock of the Force

[Kor-za Ma'an]

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NAME: Kor-za Ma'an
FACTION: Independent
RANK: Technically none
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 20
SEX: Male
HEIGHT: 5'10
WEIGHT: 198 lbs
EYES: Green
HAIR: Short raven black
SKIN: Pale Caucasian
FORCE SENSITIVE: Oh yes

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STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES (Required: 2 Weaknesses Minimum) :
+ Sorcerer: He is good at performing Sith Magicks for his age
+ Young and Fit: He is in good shape due to his youth combined with his excercise
+/- Former Sith: He knows how to use the Dark Side, but it can get control of him and make him slightly MURDEROUS
- Young and Dumb: His youth and his inexperience in certain matters makes him a bit ignorant in some situations, even as a former Sith
- Biased Sith View: His upraising as a Sith has made his view of Jedi and the Republic... biased. He believes they are all corrupt, and all seek to promote corruption

APPEARANCE:
He is a pale man from almost always wearing his armor and robes, with few scars marring his body. He is a calm man, not prone to act out on impulse, yet is not an emotionless droid like many Jedi he has met. When he smiles, it is a thin one, almost never more than a mere twitch of his lips. His body, itself, is rather normal, but a bit more on the toned side. He isn't absolutely ripped, but he is not flabby, either, muscles hardened from exercise and combat. His nose is rather normal for a human. His flesh is pale, slightly sun starved from a lack of sunlight while hiding in his armor and robes, and he has Sith tattoos crisscrossing his body like many Lethans and Red Zabraks.

Voice sample: Miraak - The Elder Scrolls V Skyrim

Armor Look: Miraak's Armor - The Elder Scrolls V Skyrim

ARMAMENT: His personal pet/weapon, the Amphistaff 'Kruziikil'

BIOGRAPHY:
Kor-za was once a Sith Acolyte, taken when he was a child from Tatooine after his family was killed by wild Tuskens during a hunting trip. He was the only survivor, found by Sith Troopers who were on a scouting mission (As well as on an extermination run to wipe out a village of, you guessed it, Tuskens). After a short blood test, he was found to have been Force Sensitive. He was taken to Coruscant, and had shown to be an exceptional user in Sorcery, but... was far too independent to be a Sith. They tried to kill him through overly-dangerous lessons (By Sith standards, that is), but had failed. Eventually, he tired of the total evil of the Sith, and fled Coruscant. For years, he would go about studying ancient ways of the Force, but has not gotten too far in his powers without the training of a master. His own armor, which he constructed on Coruscant, is based off of a combination of ancient Sith armors and his own imagination, and his own lightsaber... is Non-existant, as of now. He has no weapons, choosing to be more of the scholarly type until he grows in power to start his own sect of the Force, the Warlocks. Until then, he will take no master, but will train with any who can offer him the knowledge he needs.

KILLS:
N/A

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
N/A

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ROLE-PLAYS:
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[Teynara Jeralyr]

Far too independent to be a Sith? Clearly you haven't spent much time among us, if you think so.

It's also worth noting that we rarely instruct Acolytes in Sith Sorcery - it being fairly complicated, convoluted and dangerous to be left in the hands of those too undisciplined to wield it as it should be done.

As for your appearance - why such trouble? What does he actually look like? Eyes (hooded, small, large, wide, generally open or suspicious in appearance?), nose (bulbous, sharp, predatory, over-large, too small?), mouth (curvaceous, thin, cruel, generous, prone to smiling, or frowning?), then consider his build and frame - is he heavy or bulky? Thin and slender? Does he look muscular and powerful, or thin and wasted, as if in need of a few more meals? What skin tone does he have? Any scars? Any tattoos or other such markings? What clothing does he tend to wear? There's plenty you can write about to help expand on this - and the more that you write, the more that other people can use when writing with you!

 

[Kor-za Ma'an]

[member="Tirdarius"]

The trouble is there because writing Appearances is intimidating as hell. And the independence bit? He doesn't want to be restricted by any form or law or rules. Yes, even Sith have rules, and he wants none restricting him.

Back to the Appearance bit... I'll try it out. Don't be surprised to see it as, well, dull.

As for the Sorcery bit... maybe he was an exception? Besides, why would Sith care about that? The Dark Side, in itself, is convoluted and dangerous.

 

[Teynara Jeralyr]

[member="Kor-za Ma'an"] I can understand that, but do remember, a lot of people will consult your profile as a means of gauging your character's appearance when they write with you - they will use that as a means of forming an impression, and gain a sense of who he is just by looking at him, as we all do naturally. A tall person dressed in black might be intimidating, while a heavyset man with large biceps might be thought of as dangerous, or a beautiful woman considered sensual and enticing - even if none of these things are true. It's part of why this part of the profile exists.

 

[Kor-za Ma'an]

[member="Tirdarius"]

I think I got it done right. Anything I missed?

 

[Teynara Jeralyr]

[member="Kor-za Ma'an"] Much better My only question: does he have a specific set of armour, or is it just generic?

 

[Kor-za Ma'an]

[member="Tirdarius"]

I thought the image was enough...

Do you know who Miraak is? Yeah, that armor and voice. I should add what his voice sounds like... Doing that now!

 

[Teynara Jeralyr]

[member="Kor-za Ma'an"] Mhm, yup, but are you going to create a proper submission for your armour, or just have it as generic anybody-could-wear-it armor?

 

[Kor-za Ma'an]

[member="Tirdarius"]

Well, its nothing special, yet. Just some standard durasteel armor pieces and cloth robes. So, right now, anybody could wear it, I guess. But, as he had had it designed himself during his time as an acolyte, it is kinda a one of a kind, in terms of looks. I mean to eventually upgrade it with Phrik to make it his Warlock Master armor, while something else is used for Warlock Guards, Healers, Hopefuls, Librarians, etc.

 

[Grrwunhoooll Agaburry]

Looks great! [member="Kor-za Ma'an"]

@Tirdarius

 

[Kor-za Ma'an]

[member="Kezeroth the Unyielding"]


Holy hell, you're ugly!

Thank you oh-so-b.. beautiful gag gag person.

 

[Edward Vyperion]

[member="Kor-za Ma'an"]

Huh... sith magic already, huh?

 

[Kor-za Ma'an]

[member="Vladimir Tedesky"]

He has been studying stuff for years. But is very strenuous, physically and mentally, for him to do it. And even when he does t, its very limited, and rather time consuming. He won't be truly competent in Sorcery or Force Magick for a while.

 

[Edward Vyperion]

[member="Kor-za Ma'an"]

Good, I'm probably the opposite end of the Force User spectrum though, I have potential to use the force, but I don't care about it's powers