Star Wars Roleplay: Chaos

Register a free account today to become a member! Once signed in, you'll be able to participate on this site by adding your own topics and posts, as well as connect with other members through your own private inbox!

Approved NPC Koren Merr

Status
Not open for further replies.
PTeUOfN.png

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: A personal guard for Elani Zambrano
  • ​Image Credit: Game of Thrones
  • Role: Elani's guard, Imperial Sentinel
  • Links: N/A
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: Appears 34
  • Force Sensitivity: NFU
  • Species: Kiffar
  • Appearance: Koren's a powerfully built humanoid. His skin is slate gray as if he is a corpse, but he is just as alive as the rest of us. Well, most of us anyway. His eyes are bloodshot and red. Patches of black hair sprout from his head in a mangled mess.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Koren Merr
  • Loyalties: Elani Zambrano
  • Wealth: None
  • Notable Possessions: None
  • Skills:
    ​Unbelievable strength(2x that of an average human)
  • Beast riding
  • Martial arts

[*]Personality: Koren is a creature void of any personality. He doesn't speak. Only listens to his master's will. When given an order, he reacts immediately and does what he is told to the letter. He is nothing but a ruthless guard dog thanks to the genetic manipulation on him.
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Weapon of Choice: Power hammer
  • Combat Function: Koren unleashes his incredible strength when ordered to be Elani. He'll bend and break any foe he fights. He swings his power hammer and incredible speeds and crushes his foes. This is the only way he is effective, however. Anyone outside of his reach is safe from his wrath. Koren will ride his beast into battle and as it rips through his enemies with it's jaws, Koren will engage them with his hammer and his martial arts. Koren's large size is great for slow and heavy hits so faster and smarter opponents can defeat him. The main issue with Koren is that he cannot act without verbal orders from Elani. Should she be unable to speak to Koren for some reason, he'd basically be just a giant paperweight.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

In an effort to search for more ways to increase her influence, Elani Zambrano ventured to Byss, the former throne world of Emperor Palpatine, for answers. Once there, she managed to salvage some knowledge from an ancient tome found in the depths of the planet's capital city. The tome explained to her the process to creating Imperial Sentinels, guards of the Emperor's Dark Side Adepts. She took the instructions to a group of Imperial scientists to aid her in creating a sentinel of her own.

Elani had the proper equipment gathered to begin the process. Using tissue from some Kiffar, she began the cloning process. During the gestation period, as the process instructs, Elani introduced several chemicals into her sentinels body. These chemicals eliminated almost all brain functions, turning the sentinel into a subservient being. As the sentinel grew, Elani mutated the sentinel using Sith alchemy, greatly increasing it's strength and size. As a result, it's skin turned a deathly gray as if he were a corpse. Soon, Elani's sentinel was fully grown and ready to serve her.
 
[member="Elani Zambrano"]

Usually we want direct link to 'artists' or 'sources', but this a screencap from a famous TV series. I am okay with the mention of it being from Game of Thrones.

All I need you to do is clarify the 'unbelievable strength' one. How much we talking here when compared to a regular human in terms of multipliers? Right now it's a bit confusing, because you first mention that he uses very strong and fast attacks up-close. But then later on you mention that his large size makes him ideal for slow and heavy attacks.

Having him be both unbelievably strong and fast considering his mass would be a bit much though. So I suggest you stick to the latter interpretation when you clear that up.
 
He, himself, is slow. Like he cant really run. Maybe like a light jog, if that. But when he's fighting he isn't gonna take a year for one swing. All that weight + momentum, it's gonna be a pretty fast swing. Maybe not like a Bruce Lee, but for someone his size it's fast.


I hope that clears it up.

[member="Jairus Starvald"]
 
[member="Elani Zambrano"]

Two times as strong is reasonable enough. All you need to do is stay out of his reach and he can be worn down too, so there is enough leeway to bring him down. Wookies are stronger and faster, so I don't have an issue with this.

Enjoy.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.

Users who are viewing this thread

Top Bottom