Kurayami Bloodborn...Thoughts, comments, critiques?

[Kurayami Bloodborn]

Alright, so I have been wondering out of those who have read some of my writing or those who I have written with on here, what do you think of Kurayami? Also anyone who has a question about him feel free to ask. So let's see what you guys have to say. I hope that any criticisms I get are things I will be able to work on as time goes by. Thank you for the input and I look forward to see what everyone thinks.

 

[Aithne Charr]

I noticed you put a significant amount of time into detail and it shows in your posts, and your character's dialogue normally sounds pretty realistic and fluid rather than forced.

 

[Jsc]

+ You write a darn convincing fighter pilot.
- I have no idea what his face looks like.

 

[Kurayami Bloodborn]

[member="Jay Scott Clark"]

Since you asked nicely and I had been trying to find one for awhile anyways...