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Approved Tech Kyrel's Second Lightsaber

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Out of Character Information:

  • [SIZE=11pt]Intent: To create a Second Personal Lightsaber for Knight of Ren Kyrel Ren.[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Canon link: See Below[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Restricted Missions: N/A[/SIZE]​

[SIZE=11pt]Primary Source: N/A[/SIZE]​
[SIZE=11pt]Production Information:[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Manufacturer: Kyrel Ren[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Model: N/A[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Affiliation: Kyrel Ren[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Production: [/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]Unique[/SIZE]​

[SIZE=11pt]Materials: Lightsaber components, Durasteel, Phrik plating[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]Qixoni Crystal[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]Kyber Crystal[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Technical Specifications:[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Classification: Lightsaber[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Size: One-Two Handed[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Length: Hilt- 33 cm Blade- 91 (Adjustable to 110 cm)[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Weight: 4 kg[/SIZE]​
[SIZE=11pt]Special Features:[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Anti Ion Mesh[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Insulating Materials [/SIZE]​


[SIZE=11pt]Detailed Special Features:[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Dual Phase: This emitter allows for the wielder to adjust the blade length for both offensive and defensive capability, through a blade length adjustment switch.[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Discharge Energy Cell: A cell within the saber able to modify the blade output allowing for the wielder to deliver stronger power attacks. [/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Telgorn Cell Mark I: Another cell located within the saber also able to modify the output of the blade, increasing the strength of the beam, and allowing the wielder to deliver electrical attacks to foes. [/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Anti Ion Mesh, Insulating materials: Anti Ion Mesh and Insulating material are able to allow the saber to withstand lightsaber resistant material such as Cortosis, when it hit’s cortosis the Anti Ion Mesh keeps the saber from being completely deactivated, the Insulating Material allows for the blade to be quickly reactivated when the Saber has struck such materials.[/SIZE]​



  • [SIZE=11pt]Ossus dueling lens: A lens primarily used to aid and is specifically made for Lightsaber duels.[/SIZE]​

  • Trapped Grip[SIZE=11pt]: A hidden [/SIZE][SIZE=14.6667px]booby trap[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt] within the hilt that was designed to activate should an unauthorized user attempt to steal or activate the weapon without the owner's permission to use the blade. [/SIZE]



[SIZE=11pt]Strengths:[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]The Power of the Dark Side: Due to the bled Kyber Crystal, and the Qixoni crystal, this boosts the connection of the dark side through the one who wields this blade, by amplifying one’s force powers.[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Lightsaber resistant: The Phrik plating the hilt of the blade is resistant to lightsaber attacks against the hilt directly.[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt]Thief’s folly: The Trapped Grip of the hilt is designed to protect the lightsaber from theft, in the event the saber is stolen without the owner’s knowledge the thief will undergo excruciating pain in an attempt to steal the saber with the activation of a booby trap.[/SIZE]​

  • [SIZE=11pt] Cortosis and other Materials: [/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]When faced with a Combatant who has Lightsaber resistant materials such as Cortosis, The Anti Ion Mesh within the Saber allows for the Saber to not become completely deactivated when striking the material, and the Insulating material allows for quick reactivation after such an event. [/SIZE]​

[SIZE=11pt] Deadly Blade: [/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]The Dual Phase Emitter allows for the blade to be extended to aid against blasters, and ranged attackers, and shortened for Melee combat. The added Telgorn mk I, and Discharge energy cells allow for a stronger and deadlier blade to be wielded against one’s enemies. [/SIZE]​
Weaknesses:

  • Other means of destruction: Just because the saber is resistant to Lightsaber based attacks through phrik alloy, it does not mean that the saber is invulnerable, and could be destroyed through other means, such as being crushed, caught an explosion, or destructive Force Powers such as lightning, and cannot operate underwater.

  • [SIZE=11pt]Hard Slice: Even though the trapped grip accessory is useful in the means of protection against thieves, it does not mean the saber is totally safe, it could only be undone if someone is skilled to deactivate the trap, after that they are free to use the saber as they please. [/SIZE]​


  • [SIZE=11pt]Slugthrowers: Cannot defend against Slugthrower weapons.[/SIZE]​

[SIZE=11pt]Dark Side Drawback: After prolonged use of the Qixoni Crystal, even though it amplifies one’s strength in the dark side, and the user’s force powers with the saber, after sometime the user would start to feel the effects of fatigue due to prolonged exposure.[/SIZE]​

Description:​
[SIZE=11pt]During the Battle of Kaeshana, Vader obsessed Disciple of Ren known as Kyrel Ren lost his first Lightsaber in a duel between him and Firemane Padawan Charlyra Araano. Kyrel was successful in killing her, but he was heavily damaged thus his saber was stolen by Jedi Trextan Voidstalker. Following the Battle of Kaeshana, Kyrel Ren was promoted for his bravery and combat skills over the missions he had served in. Now as a new Knight of Ren he would need to replace the weapon that he had lost on Kaeshana. He had acquired a black coat of Durasteel, and some Phrik plating, along with several lightsaber components such as a Diatum Power Cell, Discharge, and Telgorn energy cells to make the blade deadlier. . He bled the Kyber crystal that he had took during the Lothal Expedition, to the point where it would serve and bonded to him. He had also acquired a rare Qixoni crystal when First Order forces raided a black market operation on Dosuun. Kyrel acquired the crystal for himself to power his lightsaber, and to strengthen his connection to the dark side. He had also built a Dual Phase emitter for the hilt so that the blade length could be doubled through a switch to adjust said length., he also acquired Anti Ion Mesh and Insulating Material from the Science Division to add the internal strength of his saber against Cortosis and other Lightsaber resistant materials that could be used by foes against him. Learning from his mistake on Kaeshana he added a Trapped grip, so if his saber was stolen again it would electrocute the thieves, if they didn’t unlock it. This saber would serve as Kyrel’s main weapon in his missions to carry out the Supreme Leader’s will, and has served him in the War against the Galactic Alliance through notable Battles such as Mustafar, and Skor II. [/SIZE]
 
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Kyrel Ren said:
Not all powerful: Even though the Kyber is bonded to the wielder, and the Qixoni amplifies one connection to the dark side, and force powers. It does not mean the wielder is completely all powerful with the dark side, as it is meant to strengthen one’s connection to it.
This is not a weakness - no saber or other weapon sub is expected to be all powerful, it's not weakened by the fact that it's not such. Please drop this.



Kyrel Ren said:
could be destroyed through other means.
Please specify what 'other means' here. I would suggest adding that it shorts out in water, but if you can think of other methods please add them.

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