Approved Tech Kytrand Tourmalines

[Nathan Bloodscrawl]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To make a new gemstone

• Image Source: https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Gems_P4061909.jpg
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Name: Kytrand Tourmaline
• Manufacturer: Kytrand
• Affiliation: Kytrand, Mineral-Works of Epica
• Market Status: Open-Market
• Homeworld Kytrand
• Production: Mass Produced
• Modularity: Can be fashioned into jewelry
• Material: Gemstone

PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Gemstone
• Weight: Very Light
• Color: Caries
• Resistances:
• Energy: High
• Kinetic: Low
• Lightsabers: None
• Acid: None
• Ion/EMP: None
• Electricity: None
• Sonic: None

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Gemstones of relatively low value for the middle market coming in many vibrant colors, retaining their value through periods of economic instability
• Can be cut and polished in many ways

STRENGTHS

• Value: With individual samples often valued for their vibrant color and almost always internally flawless state, these command a five hundred to one thousand credit price range, a value that rarely drops even during periods of instability. Indeed, they can actually be used as a standard form of currency given their abundance

WEAKNESSES

• Brittle: Relatively Brittle compared to other gems. A good whack of the hammer could crack one
• Theft target: A massive theft target if large boxes of them are in transit. Even stationary can prove a problem if improperly secured

DESCRIPTION

Kytrand Tourmalines are among the most common and abundant gemstones on Kytrand after it's diamonds. Sold all over the Galaxy, these ornament gems are almost always flawless internally and possess a staggering variety of colors. In some worlds, they can serve as official currency. Average price is 1400 credits.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Nathan Bloodscrawl

Sorry for the delay since there are so many had to organize this.

• Resistances: (If this submission has specific resistances, please list them. For each category choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, and Extreme. Ratings of High, Very High, and Extreme will need to be added as strengths with elaboration.)
  • Energy (And other Blaster type weapons): How much protection does the material provide against this type of damage?
  • Kinetic: How much protection does the material provide against this type of damage?
  • Lightsabers: How much protection does the material provide against this type of damage?
  • Other: How much protection does the material provide against other types of damage? (Examples: Sonic, EMP/ION, Elemental. You must disclose each specific type that applies to this submission with its own rating.)

Resistances are not optional, they need to be filled out. You can put none for all of the categories if you wish but they are only optional on the droid template.

• Resistances (Optional): This is suggested for Battle Droids and other Droids intended to participate heavily in direct combat. (For each category choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme. Ratings of High, Very High, and Extreme will need to be added as strengths with elaboration.) Resistance Ratings Extreme will require the submission to be Unique.
  • Energy (And other Blaster type weapons): How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage?
  • Kinetic: How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage?
  • Lightsabers: How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage?
  • Other: How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage? (Examples: Sonic, EMP/ION, Elemental. You must disclose each specific type that applies to this submission with its own rating.)

This will count for other subs such as
Kytrand Sorceress Tears
Kytrand Pearls
Kytrand Dusk Pearls
Kytrand Rose Garnet
Kytrand Crazy Lace

THis sub and those additional five will require the template to be restored and filled out.

 

[Nathan Bloodscrawl]

Have filled in the template, Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

Nathan Bloodscrawl

I see none of the templates listed nor this one with resistances. As I said each category can have a rating of none. There should be 4 ratings of none on each template.

 

[Nathan Bloodscrawl]

But I did put "None" in each resistances section on this sub and the subs you mentioned. They say None. They're right there, Krass Wyms

 

[Nathan Bloodscrawl]

Have also made significant edits to the subs you have already posted your thoughts on, Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

Nathan Bloodscrawl

PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: (Ore, Alloy, Rock, Metal, Mineral, Compound, Gemstone, Element, Textile, Gas, Fuel, Liquid )
• Weight: (Please choose a weight between Extremely Heavy, Very Heavy, Heavy, Average, Light, Very Light, Weightless.)
• Color: (Does it have a specific color?)
• Resistances: (If this submission has specific resistances, please list them. For each category choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, and Extreme. Ratings of High, Very High, and Extreme will need to be added as strengths with elaboration.)
  • Energy (And other Blaster type weapons): How much protection does the material provide against this type of damage?
  • Kinetic: How much protection does the material provide against this type of damage?
  • Lightsabers: How much protection does the material provide against this type of damage?
  • Other: How much protection does the material provide against other types of damage? (Examples: Sonic, EMP/ION, Elemental. You must disclose each specific type that applies to this submission with its own rating.)

This is from the template

PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Gemstone
• Weight: Very Light
• Color: Caries
• Resistances: None

This is how it looks in your sub. The bolded and underlined sections are what are needed.

Please add them back. Since it shows your last edit was before any requests were made I know you haven't made any edits to the sub. You are not new to the factory, you know from previous judgements that templates can be added to but don't have things removed unless it has the optional area modifier.

Once the templates are restored the actual judgement for them will begin.

 

[Nathan Bloodscrawl]

Have added resistances, Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

thank you

approved