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La'kuus review / Improvement (Much Needed)

Hello all. My character has been through a little bit in the last few weeks, and I know darn sure I didn't exactly give it the best clean-up in that time. I'm going to start on a good platform after this.

Once the main portion of this judgement has passed, I'll probably work on updates and getting a better session of quality moving the lines.

Please don't hold back. I honestly do want to improve her as much as possible.
 
@La'kuus Quelin

It's hard to get a good feel for what her motivations were at the start. Shes got the company and things like that now so shes heading in a good direction. Other than that....Her content various from some great great posts for those that have time, to some short and sweet for those that don't.
 

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