Levi JaSune

[Levi JaSune]

.Name: Levi JaSune
Weapons:Sith Lightsaber
http://jamesvillanueva.deviantart.com/art/SWTOR-Sith-Inquisitor-Saber-170082321
Faction: The One Sith
Species: Human
Age: 23
Sex: Male
Height: 6'1
Weight: 154
Eyes: Sith Eyes
Hair: Black
Skin: White
Force Sensitive: Yes
Strengths:Strong in the force, Good with a Lightsaber, Great Pilot, Good aim.
Weakness: Anger, Fear
Appearance: Brown Suited
Biography: I was born onto a planet I did not know of and These two Merchant's Passed me over to the Jedi Temple where Two Jedi's Took me in until the sith showed up and Killed them both right before my Very Eyes. After that I was taken to a Sith Temple trained as a Sith and Here I stand today Ready to battle
Ship: Tie-Bomber

 

[Tanith Alde]

[member="Levi JaSune"]


Hokay. May I offer some suggestions? Just to neaten this up?

Awesome.

First off, tie bombers are outdated by several hundread years, theres plenty of awesome ships to choose from though, go wild.

Secondly your apperance should be whats 'under the hood' figuratively and literally.

Third, you may want to expand your bio just a little, give people more of a sense of what your characters all about.

And maybe space things out a little, its a bit messy.

 

[Levi JaSune]

I Agree with the fact Tie-Bomber's our out of Date and all but my Character is a Older Sith With one of the last Surviving Tie-Bomber's and I just didn't have time to reinstate that into the Ship's info because I had to go at that time. And I'll think about adding more about the 'under the hood part'