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Approved Starship The Library Monolith

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Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
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Image Source: The Library, Mortis Monolith
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
Recreated Temple Locations:
Droids:
STRENGTHS
  • Mobile Academy: Ultra slow but using sleg reactors to power the engines. The station itself is able to move. The massive academy it designed to travel and keep from being a target easily.
  • City: Aside from just the academy, the station is massive and to support it a city has been constructed in the upper most layer being able to house several million in modular buildings and districts for different beings. Temples and facilities that will sustain the massive ship.
  • Exotic Matter: The ethereal nature of the metal makes it near weightless despite being and looking dense within the pocket dimension of dream. In realspace it can be grasped and there is a steady supply able to be used by Krass. When experimenting with the extent the design that has been refitted.
  • Choushin Class Uneti: The heart of the ship and a gift from the commonwealth for the jedi in their forging. Krass has one of the younger generation trees installed allowing the jedi to contact without communications other choushin class ships.
  • Seven Points: Throughout the ship, the amnioid fluid flows like a bloodstream throughout it which is duel edged. It it like a circulatory system that keeps the techno-organic systems of the ship flowing and feeds into the seedlings that are being grown for children ships. It shares a mitochondrial cell connecting the ships to the mother and are organelles that will take in nutrients then break them down and create energy rich molecules for the ship. The seven main points are points that can be accessed to connects with the ship so it is always running smoothly.
  • Bonding: The trees are finicky and require a jedi to bond with them locking out others. The duel nature of the starfighters sees them using a dwarfed tree intentionally small and within the control systems. The pilot bonds with it as the ship interior is grown.
  • Duel structure: Designed two fold, the first is the exterior exoskeleton that gives the appearance of a standard starfighter. The interior itself usually measuring in the module of the ship itself is techno-organic with the tree. Encased in the framework and superstructure of the exoskeleton for protection.
  • Advanced Systems: Designed with several notable systems installed on the shipsto improve their capabilities and turn the jedi into a needed operational fighter.
    • Saotome Advanced Tracking System: Designed to give hyperspace tracking capabilities to the ships systems.
    • Advanced Whammy Drive: Whammy Drives create an interdicition pulse that can trip the safeties of ships hyperdrives stalling them. They can't keep a fleet from jumping but for a moment those within range of the pulse can be stalled.
    • Saotome Car'das: Designed for micro jumps with high levels of precision and capabilities.
    • Cater Phalanx: Designed to strengthen the shielding of a squadron. A small team can bunch together and project a shield over themselves for additional protection.
    • Kyberite: At the heart of the jedi fighter giving it a mini lightside nexus and aura that enhances the jedi ewithin and creates a small bubble making darkside influnece over the ships harder.
    • Laminanium: Designed like a Quellian ship the hull of the orbital platforms has a thin layer of the material to improve repairs and over time depending on the amount of damage it is able to patch itself up.
    • Advanced Hyperdrive: Designed with an experimental hyperdrive that is meant to give them some of the fastest flight times across all of the galaxy.
  • Lightside Aura: The choushin design is meant to make sure this is a lightside vessel. it radiates the lightside of the force to repel darksiders from entering and most who touch the darkside feel sick when inside of the ship. When on the ground it makes a bubble of force energy with the light about ten meters. The kyber crystal heart of the ship lets it emanate the force.
  • Advanced hyperdrive: The ship is equipped with an advanced hyperdrive that uses a whammy upgrade to produce an interdiction field around it for a brief moment.
WEAKNESSES
  • Agena: Designed with the Agena to radiate the lightside of the force so that the academy is a beacon of the lightside to any and all force users.
  • Neural Net: THe neurral net of the academy allows connecting and automating a number of systemsbut for a skilled hacker who can get itno the biocomputers can hack it and cause havoc.
  • Sleg Reactors: Built with a massive series of sleg reactors, the power increase to allow the station to be mobile if even slowly can cause massive build up of energy that can cause the engines to explode.
  • Civilian Station: Lacking armaments aside from pressors and tractors to ensure nothing gets in its way
  • Hanger: Not being able to support military vessels is a big thing for the station and such its hanger is designed with racks for civilian ships and shuttles but has no defensive weapons to prevent boarders more just relies on internal security systems.
  • Protective Qualities: Largely non protective in qualities as it doesn't fully adhere to the rules of physics. The metal looks dense and like it would be highly protective but it isn't.
  • Exotic Particles: Largely unknown and not seen in the galaxy before. It isn't invincible nor is it really strong but it reacts violently near dark and anti-matter which can disrupt and destroy it or even cause it to rupture and disintegrate.
  • Force Nullification: Composed of solidified energy from a pocket dimension. Within a force nullification field it becomes heavy. The molecular structure is super dense but able to skirt and not adhere to physics like gravity normally. Without the force to preform this it becomes almost impossibly heavy to lift.
  • Kyber crystals: Using the design of the finalizer and enhancing the power of the weapons with crystals gives the ships a secondary effect as the crystals used for weapons can be explosive if cracked.
  • Sleg: A powerful energy enhancer, the sleg absorbs and channels the excessive heat generated by the chassis of the speeder. Making them maintain a stronger level of power but also increases the chances that they could explode from the heat.
  • Hive Minded: A benefit in some ways allowing the ships to heal each others internal systems itself but it also means that they share pain. A strange effect is choushin ships can refuse to attack each other.
  • Organic: With the amnioid a skilled force user is able to properly stun and stop the functions in their tracks. As Satele Shan showed the fluid produced by the circuits can be manipulated and used to calm or disable the bodies for a time as long as there is concentration and knowledge of the fluid. Like a blood flow in the body it can be constricted and have build up of waste or gunk that damages the ship like a heart attack or even stroke.
  • Shared Pain: A danger and something felt from the onset and creation of them. The choushin share pain which can affect all of the ships from starfighters to capital ships.
  • Radiates the Lightside of the force like a beacon alerting others to its location.
  • Force Nullification: The ship is seeped in the lightside of the force and such it does not function well when the force is nullified. The choushin itself can be damaged or even die without the force over an extended period of time.
DESCRIPTION
Discovered by Sasori and Matsu
Taking what time she could with the jedi, studying their needs and what she had learned from previous construction efforts, Matsu pushed Sasori's latest construction to something greater than ever before. Special attention was also given to the droids and AI's working within the station, giving them more information, more drive to assimilate knowledge for the jedi's use and to protect it within a thick metal shell that is designed to recoil and keep away darksiders.

The station itself is massive, designed to be unmatched within the galaxy. Matsu wanted to have something that could benefit the jedi in the longer run as opposed to another flashy ship and work on things found within the Jedi archives and from the jedi fortress worlds that they had so far managed for themselves. Continued construction efforts so that they would be able to make every section, every detail within the ship into something that would be able to continue to impress visitors while providing them a plethora of information.

The events of Omega accelerated some of her ideas and gave her the chance to seriously work it out as the master worked with other jedi and groups to develop it. Using the manufacturing and self sustaining equipment they had developed, along with the prefab modules ensured the station would be able to produce its own food, water, energy while being isolated from the rest of the galaxy should the need arise. Their continued efforts to make it into the largest archive included importing and reconstructing temples within the station itself using complicated and progressive biocubes, much like the mandalorians had.

Inside of those they could have environments transplanted from other worlds that mirror different locations allowing for a whole new level of meditation and openness as you were no longer just on a station but you could be in the original jedi temple at Coruscant taking your trials, ot the temple of the dawn, an enclave that held significant value and importance to the jedi themselves. A lake even that has been worked on to flow and provide the jedi with aquatic training for themselves as well as some farmland letting the different ranks and groups work with them.

More work that has been getting into many of the things they have developed with it. Saotome had worked on and created a number of new and improved designs that would allow the station to have its own working systems instead of just being like the rest of them. Matsu's work on it to really beef up what they were doing to provide this station while designed based on the crucible to be something wholly unique for herself that the other jedi would be able to work on it until she was letting reconstruction efforts and designs for ancient jedi temple be made scaled to fit within.

Other reconstructed areas of the jedi temple as well as needed locations for the order were overseen with the help of Joshua Dragonsflame as Matsu worked on more of it. The modular setup of the crucible so it could be used in different ways while still maintaining itself was a welcomed choice before the jedi master worked with Sorel to get the large station moving around. Slowly and as a lumbering beast but it was set up to be one fo the few rare mobile space station that were in the galaxy. The development of the AI that would control it being done but it was unsure if it would be fully finished and ready to go by the time the stations overhauls were done.

Combining all of her knowledge of the jedi order and what she could do with the stations, using the information learned from restoring Exis station with Shmi for the Jedi order there was a lot Matsu was looking at additionally. Aside from a new name that would likely be needed for the station since crucible class wasn't always good and this wasn't meant to be just another one. The Library seemed to presumptious and she knew only a select few might actually be wanting to use it for their ends. Others might not so no pleasing them time to move on and forward when she installed some of the sun shielding Domino helped make along with stronger collectors.

The final and main component of the Library was to disguise it. As much as Matsu enjoyed the idea of trying to give it a stealth cloak and all the fixins there was a great deal she could get out of it and a large image disguiser was made. Not exactly uncommon they had been used on other ships before as well this was just giving a fixed power source and a single image. That of the massive monoliths themselves. On either side of the massive station the hologram is projected making it look purposefully larger then it actually is and that is it. It looks larger but anything can pass through the image which is why the massive station generally tries to avoid passing through debris fields.

The massive image projection also means that it can serve to disguise the Library itself so that it would present to others something amazingly simple and ancient. To just give it a purpose while in the middle the Library itself is located and others are able to enter. The modified Crucible with its large power reactors easily able to maintain standard holograms and not the hardlight that it uses within itself. The Rosewood AI that has been developed and the Chevron keys provide the station with a strong sense of security within to prevent people from coming into it.

Grand Antiquities: One of the biggest areas of the ship, collected works, tomes and everything that can work for the jedi itself in providing places for them to keep and learn about the history of the order from artifacts and different pieces of equipment. The keeper assigned to the station oversees the massive floor that is filled and has racks, displays and sections for new arrivals that are within jedi lore and that have either been lost, stolen or missing. Rumored artifacts and items or in some cases information about the different jedi collecting things they may have found or brought in.

Grand Libraries: Massive and beautiful in most places, the large libraries of the jedi orders station is designed to teach its history. and it is administered by Jedi librarians. The different librarians for the massive libraries allow the jedi padawans strainign on the station and the visiting jedi to find places that they will be able to study and locate small quiet areas. Library droids and the stations specialized AI have been developed along the lines of having construction efforts built into it. Everything within the grand library level provides information about what is kept in the antiquities level and vaults including the black vault and replica biodomes.

Central Communications: The large reconstructed communications center developed using hardlight projectors to show them all fo the station as well as connecting to the massive navigational network developed by the saratai project. Huge amphitheater sized room where nearly one hundred jedi can gather to listen to all of it. The detailed reports they are able to put on display, the large scale communications system also allows them to coordinate teams across the galaxy or across the galaxy with research teams until the jedi masters wanted to allow more communications. More things within the communications hub itself are designed as a massive beast of the ship at its heart.

Meditation chamber: Scattered throughout for all of the jedi themselves the large scale meditation chambers are set up. Using calming and amplification crystals that were built into their synthweave and syn mesh allows the jedi themselves to use them more to focus their minds then just reaching out and going to meet with the other jedi on the ship itself. The collective gatherings and knowledge allowing the station itself to slowly become a mobile force nexus of the lightside of the force allowing the jedi something to have for themselves. The different meditations that would be working on it put the different chambers to use so that the jedi can train their minds.

Medical Level: Designed for testing and treating those who come to the temple itself. There are a great deal of labs and interests within it. Advanced research testing within it as the medical and lab area is designed to be a small section of the total station. The massive Library station here is filled with medical offices and levels so the different medical departments, research and lab areas to protect and work on observing sicknesses. Gene therapy labs as well as genetic labs where templates for different species across the galaxy. To work and develop or find force sensitive creatures that they can bring here and have with plants that feel the force.

Biodome: Scattered throughout the station, the massive biocubes are designed to contain environmental differences. For training and for reconstruction of different temples. Central to it is the reconstruction of an ancient Star Temple, the ancient jedi Dawn Temple, the ancient Light Jedi Enclave and the Eye of Ashlanae for the jedi to be able to come around and meditate. A hardlight and reconstruction of the ancient site of Jedha where the jedi once gathered materials for their lightsabers has been set up. With new and old materials to make it into a journey and honor the ancient ways as well as the new ways within the order. Reconstructed Halls of Knowledge allow the jedi greater tests.

The massive mobile temple and home to eveything the jedi do is still quite a feat as they were not done with it. Providing a large area of interest, a larger area of study into The Oracle of Pelgrin something that is of great interest to the jedi allowing them to try and understand the ancient means while working with it. At its core and heart the reconstructed replica of Kaleth itself a bastion for knowledge within the jedi that serves as a massive repository of wisdom. The reconstruction of The Lost City of the Jedi is also of interest for the padawans and those wanting to explore or move about within. The locations that are reconstructed use the self sustaining living modules.

Vaults: Through and made to go off of the different acquisition rooms, the vaults are where different artwork, different statues and valuables or items of interest have been brought, catalogued and given a designation that the order can find and review with droids. Matsu herself has worked and enjoyed the work that could go into it as the are generally kept up to date and organized. Archive droids can work on many of the things here and keep the information. Other aspects of the vaults are the items of interest taken from different facilities that have been discovered by Orihime Ike and Sorel Crieff. The items they discovered have been put into the library for them to access as well as others.

Black Vault: Thick turadium walls with some synth mesh and one fo the heaviest doors of tunqstoid. the black vaults has an inner lining of Nullification resin that prevents the darkside from coming out of the vault. It is very much like the Sanctum of the Exalted where the jedi have sith and darkside artifacts that have been discovered. Security droids are designed to be within the vault itself and activate when the vault is opened. If the person is not one fo the authorized to be in there or has the correct clearance they are programmed to open fire along with the internal vault security systems. The droids and defenses are also made to alert those who are within the library and masters outside of it. So they will know there has been a break in.

Large Acquisitions: A massive docking bay and hanger behind thick heavy doors. The large acquisitions department is made for holding ships or remains of ships that have been found. Or anything else that is able to be recovered by the jedi but it to large still to retain within a vault on the station. The tunqstoid doors and containment shield allow it to be opened and bring ships in while people are within it and the area opposite is the large hanger bay for storing and allowing other to come. nullification resin is around in case acquisitions resonate with the darkside and can be stored for the long term.

Observatory: A bubbled area on top of the station, crystasteel that is able to let the jedi train and meditate within the vastness of space. Making it seem like they are walking on the surface of the station that is smooth to observe all around them. A bubble able to be connected and docked with the Botany bay the jedi master who worked to build the massive library. Working from he observation point for all of it, some areas that they would be able to check out to oversee and have their own training sessions or a way to see different worlds.

Standard Quarters: Constructed throughout the massive station, the living modules provide jedi with their own rooms and are able to house many of the jedi before within single, double and group rooms. Providing plenty more for the different masters that will be able to stay around and water along with the guest quarters. Several of the rooms can be used for those who are visiting with their own rooms near the training rooms as well as the hanger bay.

Crew Quarters: Scattered around and made for the dedicated crew of the station, the technicians, pilots, operators who keep the temples running but might not be actually force sensitives or jedi. They are no less treated well for their efforts and work with rooms that equal the others on the station and provide everything they could need from entertainment for their off hours to long term growth for food and supplies. Utility droids that are going around the station can be called in for different tasks.

Ancient Masters: The specialized vault of ancient masters displays. The urns and the displays are made to honor the jedi showing an image of the jedi if one existed and what history can be recovered about them. As the rooms and vaults are set up and organized via era within the jedi order to combine different parts. The majority of displays have a small compartment for any recovered personal effects that have survived and displays around the area for different artifacts of the jedi. Pre-Ruusan Jedi‎‎, Post-Ruusan Jedi‎, New Jedi Order members‎‎, Redeemed Jedi‎, Army of Light members‎, Altisian Jedi‎, Unidentified Jedi‎, Jedi Lords‎ and a hall of Grand Masters‎. There is even sections made for Former Jedi‎ and Redeemed Jedi‎ and jedi after the Gulag Plague.

Lightsaber Labs: A large repository of components and architect droids that aid younglings in their construction of lightsabers as well as a number of jedi themselves. The supplies are from all over the galaxy and it is designed to give all of the artisan's who seek to work on saber hilts new ways to try out techniques for themselves as well as others. The computers for working on them are comprehensive with new information and showing advances in lightsaber technologies that can be accessed by those who need or want it. The larger labs can offer a number of additional areas for working on different things.

Chevrons: The seven symbol code unique to each jedi that has access to the library and set up with biometric tags. Without going through procedures to be added to the database or being granted a visitors badge the security will eject from the station as needed. It is not exactly the best but given how often peoples opinions and allegiances change a way to control the flow of who might have access or who might try and endanger was needed.

The Rosewood Core: The heart of the Libraries AI computer named Rosewood. He knowledge of the jedi history and information from the databanks is ever expanding and she has combat protocols within the station to ensure that it is protected from harm. Able to move it and jump the library into a safe place should it be endangered by others as well as update her databanks when new sources of information are found or presented. Her list of artifacts and different jedi allows her to program biots and droids to properly provide a best guess of how said masters or jedi would interact with the people using information and over all best calculated guess work.

The Monolithic jedi temple has been used and secured over the years... growing in size and resembling the massive monoliths that are hidden in the far reaches of the galaxy. Matsu curating it with the Jadeite who served on Ahch-To to bring all of the information from it and the Repository that they had there to fill in much more information about the ancient jedi... about the je'daii but there was a lot that was being brought into it. The jedi orders being documented and many more jedi being invited like Coren Starchaser Coren Starchaser and Romi Jade Romi Jade but some of the jedi she knew like Maple Harte Maple Harte who had fallen and could be helped was there. With the jedi fleet that was being developed by Matsu to give the jedi enough of the ships.

They have continued to worrk on many more things... expanding and with advances that the jedi have been doing... the enclaves, the different orders as they fight. Matsu sought to make sure the monolith was there for them as it contained a holocron vault dedicated to sending what information they had through the jadeite upgrade to the kirano visor.. it would allow them to get many of the holocrons like the old academy network developed my Jorus Merril and the Laventine Sanctum. A benefit to many as it allowed the collective knowledge of the jedi to be found.
 
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[member="Matsu Ike"]

Before addressing the substance of what you've got here, we need to tackle the camouflage elephant in the room. Hyperspace tractor beams are Celestial tech. Much smaller-scale stuff has been done and would be suitable (Git's factory ship, my Great River emplacements, that kind of thing) but all the examples I know took a lot of work. The Celestial tech's gotta go.
 
[member="Matsu Ike"]

Here's the closest approved equivalent of which I'm aware: 270 posts, semi-unique, still vastly scaled down from that. If you happen to spot any ships that actually have a link to hyperspace tractor beams, please let me know.

OK, next item.



Matsu Ike said:
Affiliation: Matsu Ike

There's some leeway with stations. The 400m personal limit only applies to ships, and the Civilian Space Station template (600m-10000m) says this:

  • Affiliation: (Example: The TIE (Twin Ion Engine) Starfighter was primarily created for the Galactic Empire. Do not put the company unless the product is only for your company's use. Common choices include 'Open Market', Personal, or the name of a specific Faction/Major Faction.)

So in terms of technicalities, there's some wiggle room for you to be able to own a large station. However, we're talking about a maxed-out heavily-outfitted space station whose base model is restricted to Major Faction ownership. You can understand why I'm leery about letting anyone have personal ownership of a station this big and this advanced and expensive. Now, in theory, I'd be fine with a Tier Six like Sasori owning the station, but you've built something unique in Sasori:
  • Rationale: Matsu's love of research and developing small bits and bobs for use by her fellow jedi led her to seek out Baktoid owner Alli Wren and with her help and donations. Sasori was able to for a tax write off as a charitable organization that demands no money for their products was setup. As it has grown and expanded the inner working have built up so that the company is large but it still values many of its customers. Charging what the people could pay instead of a solid price that is inflexible, as they have some of the work into the advanced, exotic, force technologies they have expanded into a galactic wide company playing under the radar of many because they don't go after them.
I'm not sure Sasori could afford this station, and given that pricing model, I'm in some doubt as to how Matsu Ike could afford this even if she owns 100% of Sasori. (I'm assuming she does.) The most sensible path might be to ask for this to be owned by a major faction such as SJO. However, I'm open to being convinced.

Separate point. If the Mortis Monolith is the holoshroud and the Independence Day disc is the actual structure of the station, how's the height 10km as well?
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
[member="Jorus Merrill"]

For the look the base crucible model is round, max dimensions and meant to be a massive cylinder almost. The stations aren't pretty and serve more for purpose For it to be able to project the large hologram I mostly went with it having a large surface on either side so it can project the images needed to disguise itself as a monolith. Any of them really as crucible the book made mention that the rift looked like mortis and that there could be dozens more out there in the galaxy. Sadly as the last book in that time period there seemed to be some setup and what could have been an interesting new threat/thing.

edited the affiliation and Matsu as the builder is just the caretaker. Given it is a massive station and yes decked out to be the perfect place for someone to stay and work on research and their own things within the tech division.
 
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Matsu Ike said:
Sasori SynthMesh (Interior)

So, if I'm understanding this right, your synthmesh is made of wintrium, desh-terenthium, and your synthweave, and your synthweave is made of pontite and solari crystal -- two of the rarest crystal types around, to say nothing of the rarity of wintrium itself. How much synthmesh is being used here? Just the Black Vault and some of the blast doors, or the entire interior, or somewhere in between?

Also, your Performance Booster comes with a penalty to maneuverability that isn't reflected in your stats. If you want this thing to accelerate like a Star Destroyer, it's gonna need to have that drawback reflected somehow.
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
[member="Jorus Merrill"] in areas is the idea. The intention is the wringness lightsiders feel near places of the darkside just made opposite so darksiders don't like being in the station. Or how Adults in the Tooth Fairies tower that is a place of children reacted and made the adults feel wrong in Hogfather.
 

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Salve, [member="Matsu Ike"], I will be finishing the judgement of your submission.

Just one thing today:

1. Please remove Antimissile Octets from the "Defenses" list and place it in "Armament".
 

Tanomas Graf

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Looks good to me, [member="Matsu Ike"]

Passing this on for approval from [member="Spencer Varanin"]! Thanks!
 
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Matsu Ike Matsu Ike

I really loved this submission too! It was awesome! I'm really glad I could read it! I found 3 broken link:
  • TL-DR Guard droid
  • BG-77 caretaker droid
  • ROD data librarian droids
Please fix them!
 
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