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Approved NPC Lieutenant Harbok Mrawr [Paladin Company Platoon Leader]

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Lieutenant Harbok Mrawr [Paladin Company Platoon Leader]

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create an NPC second in command for Paladin Company
  • Image Credit: Here
  • Role: Lieutenant Mrawr is an officer in the Antarian Rangers. He serves as platoon leader for Paladin Company's second platoon and is Captain Beltran Rarr's second in command.
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: Paladin Company, Beltran Rarr, Togorian
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: 23 Standard Years
  • Force Sensitivity: Non-Force User
  • Species: Togorian
  • Appearance: Harbok Mrawr stands approximately 9.0 (3.0 meters) feet tall and weighs nearly four hundred pounds. He has predominately tawny fur, with a dark red main and white whiskers. His eyes are a lighter hazel colour and he has black retractable claws in his hands.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Harbok Mrawr
  • Loyalties: Paladin Company, The Silver Jedi Concord, Beltran Rarr
  • Wealth: Modest
  • Notable Possessions: A pet Mosgoth named Stelvor
  • Skills: Excellent marksmanship and knowledge of combat operations, excellent situational awareness and hand-to-hand combat skills
  • Personality: Coming from a nomadic hunter culture, Harbok has a bit of a wild streak in him. He is often struck by wanderlust and the desire to explore far off and remote places. He is a vicious and courageous warrior who enjoys a good fight and relishes a hard-won victory. He is not known for being particularly approachable by his troops and tends to keep to himself when not on duty. That being said he is seen to be a generally competent and fair commander.
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Weapon of Choice: Military blaster/pulse rifle, claws in hand-to-hand
  • Combat Function: Lieutenant Mrawr acts as Beltran's second in command. He has commanded the Company when Beltran has been indisposed or unavailable. Often he will command a small subset of Rangers.
Strengths:
  • Brave: Harbok comes from a culture of nomadic hunters. As a male Togorian, his life is in danger virtually every day of his life. As such, the dangers of combat rarely cause any anxiety or apprehension for him. This is one part the brashness of youth, and one part the knowledge that all beings die-so there is nothing to be afraid of.
  • Dangerous: Togorians are natural hunters. Male stand well above the average height of most humanoids and weight significantly more. They are naturally agile and resilient and also have impressive claws and fangs. Even unarmed, Harbok is an exceptionally dangerous combatant who has only been made all the more dangerous by his Ranger training.
Weaknesses:
  • Young and Brash: Being a young male of a predatory species, Harbok often charges head first into situations without taking the time to examine all the angles. This can lead him to making critical mistakes and putting himself and other troopers in harm's way unnecessarily.
  • Inexperienced: While a combat veteran in his own right, Harbok has only recently graduated from Ranger Officer Training School. He has a solid grasp on squad and platoon level tactics, but is still learning how to conduct battle on a larger scale. This can lead him to sacrifice the larger picture or overarching strategy in favor of more immediate and obvious gains.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Like all male Togorians, Harbok Mrawr was raised for the first few years of his life by his mother in one of the larger settlements on Togoria. Upon reaching the appropriate age, he was then collected by his father and would spend the rest of his childhood learning to hunt with the other males of his pride. While Harbok took to the nomadic lifestyle with all the gusto one could hope for, he often felt as though he was meant for greater things. When his father died during a hunting exertion, the Togorian saw a chance to leave the narrow confines of his life for something better.

With aid of his mother, he was able to purchase a ticket off-world. Soon, he learned of the war between the Jedi and the Sith and decided to join the Antarian Rangers. He excelled at his training and graduated from the Basic Ranger Qualification course as a Specialist. His first assignment was as a forward scout in the 666th Mechanized Battalion. There he would serve with distinction at Kintan, when upon the death of his Sergeant and Lieutenant, he led his platoon in a devastation counter charge against Sith forces.

Seeing his potential, Ranger Command sponsored him for the Officer Training Course. There he learned basic military maneuvering and tactics. While learning these things was more difficult for him, he did graduate in good standing a few short weeks after the Silver Jedi victory at Yurb. When a group of survivors of that battle decided to form their own Company, Mrawr was offered command of second platoon as a second lieutenant. He accepted and would go on to serve in the Company in several battles including Voss, Myrkr, Chroma-Zed, Anzat and Nar Kreeta.
 
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Fevris Derzelas

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Hello! I will be reviewing your submission.

Solid work here! Only two things to point out before I stamp it.

1. Image Credit
  • While the link you provided leads to a webpage, it does not credit the original artist. I was able to find a link to the artist's page here, please replace the current credit for this one.

2. Affiliation
  • As per the codex rules:
    Do not place links in submissions to threads that are within the Archives or anywhere that cannot always be publicly viewed. (Ex. Faction Groups/Google Docs/Etc)
    You cannot link to archived submissions, please remove or replace the link used for the Antarian Rangers.
Beltran Rarr Beltran Rarr
 
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