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Approved Starship Locum Pacis

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Manufacturer: Sith Order & Bogan Fleet Systems
Market Status: Closed Market
Production: Unique
Length: Low
Width: Extreme
Height: Large
Size: Humongous
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard Countermeasures
  • Standard Engine Unit
  • Standard Guidance Systems
  • Standard Hyperdrive System
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Shielding System
  • Standard Targeting Systems
  • Mycogen Interior Lighting
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • ( + ) Superior Stealth Systems: The Locum Pacis is outfitted with numerous advanced electronic countermeasures and stealth systems, including heat baffling, ablative plating, taozin skin, and double-sealed engines designed to recycle their exhaust signature into the Locum Pacis' life-support and weapons systems, allowing it to remain virtually invisible from scanners and even the probing arts of Force sensitive practitioners.
  • ( + ) Dance of Meteor Shards: The Locum Pacis' crystal halo can be manipulated for use in devastating offense as well as near impenetrable defense. The mirror-like, reflective properties of the Locum Pacis' crystals can redirect enemy fire and even create optical illusions when cleverly ployed. The ship's ability to launch these same crystals like projectiles allows the Locum Pacis to puncture and smash through conventional shields and armor. Combined with lava cannons, rock spitters, and other Force-imbued weaponry, the Locum Pacis is capable of dealing massive damage at close and medium ranges.
  • ( + ) Eerie Aura: The Locum Pacis trails an ominous fog, within which the undead swim through space, watching, hungry. The presence of the Jen'qazoi Mist Wraiths and the unnerving, trailing mist adds a terrifying psychological dimension to engagements with Locum Pacis. The mist obscures vision and scanners while the Wraiths act as a final line of defense, making the Locum Pacis a fearsome presence even without direct engagement.
  • ( + ) Crystalline Resonance: The crystals surrounding Locum Pacis resonate with the Force and can thus be used to amplify magick rituals, potentially affecting entire fleets. Furthermore, intricate ritual chambers have been carved out and prepared within Locum Pacis, ready for use and laden with rare components.
  • ( + ) Hybrid Nature: The fusion of technology and sorcery allows the ship to function both as a conventional warship and as a ritual grounds for Force magick. This adaptability gives it options in a wide variety of combat scenarios. Furthermore, the living materials that make up Locum Pacis allow it to "heal" over time, regenerating certain sections during or after battle due to its bio-engineered resilience.
  • ( + ) Escape Artist: With a state-of-the-art hyperdrive system, as well as two hyperdrive adjacent engines (the Netherdrive and the Helldrive engines), the Locum Pacis is hard to pin down and almost always has an option for getting out of a tight situation.
WEAKNESSES
  • ( - ) Force Nullification: Since the ship's crystal halo and many of its more advanced capabilities rely heavily on the Force, any kind of Force suppression or nullification could severely hamper its combat effectiveness.
  • ( - ) Limited Mobility: Due to its immense size and weight, especially with its stone and crystal structure(s), the Locum Pacis is less maneuverable than other warships of its size. This can leave it vulnerable to swift or coordinated attacks from multiple directions, especially if Locum Pacis is isolated from allied support.
  • ( - ) Ritual Reliance: The Locum Pacis's most devastating abilities are reliant on its crew of Force users. If those practitioners are targeted or incapacitated, the ship's combat power is diminished significantly. An effective boarding action could neutralize these key personnel.
  • ( - ) Focused Attention: Its sheer size and visual distinctiveness, especially with the mist and crystal halo, make it an obvious target.
  • ( - ) Close-Range Vulnerability: Although capable of devastating close-to-mid-range attacks, the Locum Pacis is less effective at longer ranges where the crystal halo and ritual effects may not reach. Its natural weaponry also requires proximity to be effective, limiting its ability to engage from a safe distance.
DESCRIPTION
The Locum Pacis was designed from ancient manuscripts found in the tomb of the Sith Emperor Dathka Graush (c. 7000 BBY). Buried alongside his secrets on eternal life and the creation of undead armies, these designs were rediscovered by Darth Caedes (c. 902 ABY). The ship's construction was a massive undertaking, overseen by Elmindra Xitaar Elmindra Xitaar , requiring the total harvest and subsequent destruction of a Force Nexus on Korriban. Dreadlords speak of Locum Pacis as if she yet lives, the cold corpse of one of Korribani nexus repurposed in unlife to serve.

Half capital ship and half monument to the dark side, the Locum Pacis is as much a sorcerous temple as it is a weapon of war. Its most distinctive feature is a shattered halo of massive crystals which orbit the ship. These crystals, maneuvered through a combination of dedicated tractor beams, magick rituals, and active Force use, serve both as shields and weapons—capable of devastating enemy ships or creating nearly impenetrable walls for defense. Furthermore, the ship's already formidable array of traditional and exotic weaponry is further enhanced by magick, making the Locum Pacis an unpredictable and terrifying presence in any battle.

Permission(s):
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Out Of Character Info


Intent: To create a personalized flagship for Darth Caedes which uses sorcery and other exotic weaponry as a means of defense.
Image Source(s):
Permissions: TSO, Bogan Fleet Systems, Taeli Raff, Onrai

Technical Information


Affiliation: The Sith Order
Model: N/A
Starship Class: Battlecruiser (2000m-5000m)
Starship Role: Command
Modular: No
Material: Stygian-triprismatic Polymer, and Impervium Armor Plating, Nykkalt Anti-Sensor Coating, Taozin Skin Undercoat, Star Iron-Impregnated Alusteel Skeletal Frame, Heavily Reinforced Duraplast Hull Liner, Dallorian Alloy and Agrinium Panels, Laminanium Structural Plating, Ceraglass Viewports, TibannaX Exhaust Gas, Yorik Coral Interior Hull Plating, Telecrystalline Interior Hull Lining, Various Starship Components
Armaments: Yaret-Kor
Rock Spitters
AI-T "Salamand" Turbolaser Batteries
AW-Ix01 "Hydrus" Ion Cannons
AW-Fx01 "Scutum" Flak Guns
Qektoth Bio Energy Array
Null-burst Projectors
Power Crystal weaponry
Shield Leech weaponry
Breacher-class Boarding Torpedoes
Locum Pacis' crystal halo
Defense Rating: Extreme
Speed Rating: Average
Maneuverability Rating:: Low
Energy Resist: Extreme
Kinetic Resist: Very High
Radiation Resist: Very High
Other Resistance(s):

EMP/ION Resist: Extreme
Lightning Resist: Extreme
Flame Resist: Extreme
Force Resist: Extreme; warded against sorcery and various magicks

Minimum Crew: 8000
Optimal Crew: 15000
Passenger Capacity: 300
Cargo Capacity: Large
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Darth Caedes Darth Caedes

It is very cool, but I found several problems, these are mostly permission issues.
  • The Image source field is broken, I would like to ask you to add the image source link to the template (others usually put it under the art). Thank you for your understanding!
  • Your character can't own this ship (Affiliation), because individuals cannot own larger warships more than 500 metres. Please remove your character from the Affiliation, and please remember to that, you can always use your own subs.
  • You can't use the Bogan Fleet Systems as manufacturer without permission, because it is not your company. I would like to ask you to delete it or ask a permission.
  • You can't use Taeli's subs in this sub without a permission.
  • The The Pellucid Crown's affiliation is for the The Brotherhood of the Sith faction, and not for this SO which is the current one. I would like to ask you to ask a permission, or remove it from your sub.
  • This is the true to Onrai's sub (Diatium Capacitance Array), that was made for a different faction not for this, please ask a permission here too.
  • The Hangar space is 21 in this case, and you added only 15 to your list, you can add 6 more if you want.
 
MANIAC MANIAC ,

Thanks!
  • added an image URL. It's an image generated from an Ai program called MidJourney, then photoshopped by yours truly.
  • Makes sense. Affiliation updated.
  • Regarding the Bogan Fleet Systems, the member is unfortunately no longer around to ask. That said, we built the submission together (both OOC and IC) with every intention of each using it for ships much like the Locum Pacis. In fact, the company submission explains in detail that Darth Caedes ordered the shipyard's construction himself.
Bogan Fleet Systems or simply the Korriban Imperial Shipyards is one of the naval construction authorities within the Sith Order. Answering directly to the current ruler of Korriban and by extension the greater Sith Order, Bogan Fleet Systems specifically constructs and mass produces 'Sorcery Vessels'.
He brought it to the attention of Darth Caedes who ordered the development of the shipyards.
Darth Caedes is and was the King of Korriban at the time Nwul submitted this company. Thoughts?​
  • Awaiting permissions from Taeli Raaf.
  • Awaiting permission from Jairus Starvald for the Pellucid Crown.
  • Awaiting permission from Onrai for the Diatium Capacitance Array.
  • Thanks for the heads up! Hangar allocation updated ( +6 ).
Will update when permissions are obtained or else content is removed from this submission instead.
 
T E R R A R I S - C O M M A N D
Factory Judge
Darth Caedes Darth Caedes

Sorry for the delay.
  • Please add the MJ's link to the template and not to the premade field. In the premade field it is not visible.
  • Affiliation is the same, I think you forgot to save the sub when you deleted your character name.
  • Regarding the Bogan Fleet, unfortunately, that is only RP fluff and not a permission so I can't accept it.
  • I would like to ask you to link the print screens about the permissiont to the template or to the premade field because the if you only tag the users is not acceptable, because the judges cannot see the permission where they allow you to use their product(s).
 
MANIAC MANIAC ,

Oh! Good catch. Should be ready now.

Updates:
  • MJ link updated (near the top).
  • Updated Affiliation information.
  • Provided permission for Bogan Fleet Systems (pulled from the many conversations Darth Nwul/TheWebVagrant and I had while making the submission together).
  • Provided screenshots of the other required permission(s), near the bottom.
 
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