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Approved NPC Lo'lak Pinkeel

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Name: Lo'lak Pinkeel
Loyalties: Razel Kolt
Role: Razel Kolt's best friend.
Development Threads: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/89703-amongst-the-sands-once-more-open/(will be there) http://starwarsrp.net/topic/89089-razel-kolt/
Age: 95
Species: Human
Force Sensitivity: No
Appearance: Very frail and small muscles. He has grey hair and wears glasses. Wears a ragged lab coat.
Personality: Intelligent but humble and selfless.
Weapon of Choice: Wits and (rarely) a blaster.
Wealth: Poor.
Combat Function: He would run away. If he was forced to fight, he would probably try hacking into nearby technology and using it in the fight. Almost any hit on him will cause pretty bad damage.
Skills: Genius hacker and scientist.
Notable Possessions: None, other than a bunch of scrap metal.
Other Notes: If in an rp with this character, please discuss before killing or permanently injuring him. Lo'lak was born an orphan. His family were scientists, and one of their attempts to make a large explosive went wrong, and blew up, killing them all. Lo'lak was just born, and not at the accident, so he survived. He was captured and raised by space pirates, but he would always use any spare time he had to discover more about his parents...

Eventually he earned enough trust of the pirates to get his own ship, and escaped at the first chance he got. He then continued his scientific career, which he continued until he met Lo'lak and joined his crew. They then went on a search of an abandoned space station - or at least they assumed it was. They ended up triggering a self destruct sequence, and while everyone made it out of the station, the owners were not pleased, and placed a bounty on the crews heads. They were attacked, their ship ruined and destroyed. Everyone died except for Lo'lak (who took the only escape pod) and Razel Kolt. Razel, too injured to be recognizable, was left, and later collected by Lo'lak, just before he lost all life in his body.

Lo'lak took Razel to his ship, and used his own stem cells as well as any parts he had to keep Razel alive and give him a new body. Once his friend was stabilized, Lo'lak searched and found an abandoned, albeit damaged, mining ship, which he scavenged for parts. It took years and years, but Razel awoke from the coma he fell into and had his cyborg body, as well as a small ship Lo'lak managed to sort him out with.

They had no time for introductions, as scavengers they mistook for pirates approached. Razel and Lo'lak flew off in different ships, and lost each other in the panic. They lost each other for a few days, before Lo'lak managed to send a short message to Razel via comms. They joined up, and went to Tatooine, as Lo'lak found signs of the bounty hunter who attacked them years ago.



Intent: Razel Kolt needs someone he can confidently call a friend, even after project Resurrection and it makes sense for the creator of his cyborg body to understand.
 
Looks ok, but needs a bit more description in general. Maybe add a passage about his history, how he became friends with Razel, etc. The Dev thread only mentions Lo'lak, and says very little about him. Of course, there is no need for a dev thread anyway, so that is not really a problem.
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Please finish the backstory, simply copying and pasting from the thread if you want. Also, please move the entire "backstory" category so that it is instead in the "other notes" category.
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