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[Katana]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Intent: A Melee and Ranged weapon Katana can utilize.
Image Source: Here
Canon Link: Force Imbued Sword
Permissions: N/A
Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Manufacturer: Katana
Affiliation: Katana
Company Name(s): N/A
Market Status: Closed Market
Model: N/A
Modularity: Further enhancements could be made with the Force to this sword.
Production: Unique
Material: Phrik, Beskar, Songsteel, Cortosis, and pretty much all the other Lightsaber Resistant Materials. Jal Shey Techniques, Sith Alchemy, Force Crystals, Alkahest. Ground up Khyber Crystals.
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
Classification: Sword
Size: (Please choose a size between Extremely Large, Very Large, Large, Average, Small, Very Small, Extremely Small.)
Weight: Very Heavy
Ammunition Type:The Force
Ammunition Capacity: Very Small (10 Per Crystal)
Effective Range: Long Range
Rate of Fire: Very Low
Damage Output: Varies between Very Low and Very High.
Recoil: None
SPECIAL FEATURES
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STRENGTHS


Equivalent: Due to numerous infusions of techniques similar to Alkahest, this sword is a match for many Sith Swords, and other blade types.

Can Clash with lightsaber: Due to alchemy it can.

Aura of Fear: The Sword produces an aura of fear via alchemization that allows it to essentially do a "Mind Trick" that makes people want to back away, to run, to cower in terror when the Sword is out. It really drains the Force Crystal to use this.

Variable Blasts: He can send out cleaving shockwaves of varying power level out of it, including Stun, and blasts that could knock people through walls. He can even send out shockwaves that could kill. Really drains the Force Crystal to use this.

To me, my sword!: This has a limited application of telekinesis applied to it with Alkahest so that it can fly to the hand of the user should it be within their line of sight. Really drains the Force Crystal to use this.

Ignite, My Blade: Via limited application of the Force Power of Pyrokinesis, the sword can ignite enough so it can slice through armored vault doors, through battle droids, and armor. This unfortunately uses all the charges in the Force Crystal up after 5 superheated slashes.

Eruption: A 5 Foot Circle around him will glow. Fire will then erupt up from the circle, consuming anything stupid enough to be close. It completely exhausts the Force Crystal to use this.

Venom: Due to modifications he has made to the sword, the sword can administer two kinds of venom. The first is a mild paralytic that won’t do lasting harm to anyone. The second is a very painful and deadly venom.

Self Bound: Only Katana, or those he directly allows can lift the sword. To anyone else, the sword would become too heavy.

Can Short out a Lightsaber: Due to the mix of metals in it, this sword can short out a Lightsaber.

Force Entities: Due to the Ground up Khyber Crystals used in the reforging process, this sword can cut through Force Entities like a hot knife could cut through butter. It could also do some damage to Sith Spawn.



WEAKNESSES


No Crystals, No Blasts: Destroying the Force Crystals used to power the blasts would render the sword f unable to shoot blasts of Force Energy out of it in the slightest.
Beacon of the Force: Due to the Force Powers the staff has, cloaking it's presence in the Force is impossible.
Force Nullification: Force Nullification would render it an ordinary sword with no powers.
Each of the more powerful shots takes 10 Shots from the Crystal.
Crystals must be specially alchemized for the sword.
Will to Fight: The sword will only work as long as he has the will to fight. Break his will, and he can't use the sword until he regains it.
Heavy: The sword is very heavy.
Not a LIghtsaber: At the end of the day, this isn't a Lightsaber.
Cold: Intense Cold could make the sword brittle, rendering it easy to destroy by someone with enough physical strength.
Beacon of the Force: Unfortunately due to the powers put into the sword, and the techniques used, the sword is a beacon in the Force. Jedi and Sith alike can detect the blade, making it likely some would attempt to seize said sword. It's presence can be felt in 1/4th of whatever planet it's on.
DESCRIPTION
A Jedi Master got tired of the Sith being so powerful across the galaxy, and decided to make a weapon that could be used to oppose them. A sword, a master piece. Approaching Katana, a neutral Force User, he asked him hundreds of times to forge the sword. Eventually Katana relented, and agreed under the condition he have full creative freedom with the sword. The Jedi agreed, and Katana started work on the first of his creations. When the Jedi was killed by a Sith Lord, Katana retrieved the sword. He then took it, melted it down, and reforged it for his own purposes - a weapon he could utilize. His efforts employed the same techniques as those used in both Force Imbued Blades, and Sith Swords.

First, the technique of Imbue Item was employed by him upon reforging the sword. This was done in order to make the sword able to properly clash with a Lightsaber, and to channel a limited version of Pyrokinesis, and Telekinesis. He didn’t stop there, though, no. He continued his work on the sword, using Sith Alchemy to make further adjustments to the sword. The same techniques utilized to make a Force Imbued Sword were employed by him.

Upon finishing, he deemed his sword a masterpiece. Now he carries his sword with him permanently, a reminder that he can make a successful masterpiece. It is also a reminder that his creation was not good enough, however.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Under Review

 

[Krass Wyms]

Katana

Alright lets begin.

Material: Phrik, Beskar, Songsteel, Cortosis, and pretty much all the other Lightsaber Resistant Materials. Jal Shey Techniques, Sith Alchemy, Force Crystals, Alkahest. Ground up Khyber Crystals.

This is just overkill and should be massively pruned down. I am fairly certain the light and darkside alchemy techniques would cancel each other out or break the blade.

Aura of Fear: The Sword produces an aura of fear via alchemization that allows it to essentially do a "Mind Trick" that makes people want to back away, to run, to cower in terror when the Sword is out. It really drains the Force Crystal to use this.

If this is made with force light alkahest then how did an aura of fear survive within it? That would have been destroyed with the force light.

Variable Blasts: He can send out cleaving shockwaves of varying power level out of it, including Stun, and blasts that could knock people through walls. He can even send out shockwaves that could kill. Really drains the Force Crystal to use this.

Must like the previous swords you have made trying to do this I will address it with the overall area.

To me, my sword!: This has a limited application of telekinesis applied to it with Alkahest so that it can fly to the hand of the user should it be within their line of sight. Really drains the Force Crystal to use this.

Again is the sword sentient to use the skill or it is required from the user?

Ignite, My Blade: Via limited application of the Force Power of Pyrokinesis, the sword can ignite enough so it can slice through armored vault doors, through battle droids, and armor. This unfortunately uses all the charges in the Force Crystal up after 5 superheated slashes.

Not a LIghtsaber: At the end of the day, this isn't a Lightsaber.

As before this eliminates it as a weakness. You can just ignore it not being a saber.

Eruption: A 5 Foot Circle around him will glow. Fire will then erupt up from the circle, consuming anything stupid enough to be close. It completely exhausts the Force Crystal to use this.

There is nothing therein the sub explaining how it can alter the environment in such a way. This is a powerful technique on top of everything else you are packing in here.

Venom: Due to modifications he has made to the sword, the sword can administer two kinds of venom. The first is a mild paralytic that won’t do lasting harm to anyone. The second is a very painful and deadly venom.

What modifications are used to make it on top of everything else able to excrete venom?

Self Bound: Only Katana, or those he directly allows can lift the sword. To anyone else, the sword would become too heavy.

What is being used to create this enhancement?

Can Short out a Lightsaber: Due to the mix of metals in it, this sword can short out a Lightsaber.

Given the sheer amount of materials used and size of the blade this wouldn't be refined enough for a cortosis sword at best it would be cortosis weave which can resist a saber not short it out.

Force Entities: Due to the Ground up Khyber Crystals used in the reforging process, this sword can cut through Force Entities like a hot knife could cut through butter. It could also do some damage to Sith Spawn.

Ground of kyber crystals would not give this effect. Force light enhancement would make attacking sithspawn much easier however with the darkside alchemy you use that would and should be canceled out.

Each of the more powerful shots takes 10 Shots from the Crystal.

Ammo count is not a weakness

Will to Fight: The sword will only work as long as he has the will to fight. Break his will, and he can't use the sword until he regains it.

As before this is a good example of a non-weakness. If you are fighting with this how often are you suddenly going to lose the will to fight?

Cold: Intense Cold could make the sword brittle, rendering it easy to destroy by someone with enough physical strength.

If this is a masterwork force sword then how can it be brittle? Force blades are notably reinforced with the force and able to last for thousands of years. This is not a weakness as everything else in the sword contradicts it.

Beacon of the Force: Unfortunately due to the powers put into the sword, and the techniques used, the sword is a beacon in the Force. Jedi and Sith alike can detect the blade, making it likely some would attempt to seize said sword. It's presence can be felt in 1/4th of whatever planet it's on.

A sword this powerful would be able to be felt by far more then just a small portion of the planet. This is not a weakness.

Your description explains nearly nothing about the sword. you give some history and just barely touch on force imburing fire effects but then don't explain where alkahest, alchemy or the grab bag of materials factor into the blade. Overall this sword is a mess and will need substantial edits and that is before even entertaining the balance ratings. You will need to drastically either prune or balance out all of the strengths, add substantially more to the description. I would focus on not contradicting yourself.

Now he carries his sword with him permanently, a reminder that he can make a successful masterpiece. It is also a reminder that his creation was not good enough,

 

[Katana]

Please Archive, as I will be completely redoing the sub. Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

As you wish