Mara-Bashing

[NightSister]

Alright folks, since currently Mara is the character I'm the most invested in and I have quite a lot of plans for her, I figured I'd take the chance to see how I could improve on her.

So, just tell me anything you have to say - my writing skills, character (I just rebooted her bio so please do let me know what you think), heck, even the character art. Anything that can be improved on, or anything that you think is really good because I like compliments I don't want to accidentally change something that was already solid. Give Mara a good bashing, she's tough.

 

[Aithne Charr]

Your witch is pretty, where is the warts and crooked nose, and green skin. Come on you pleb.

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Anyways, havent had the chance to actually Roleplay with you, but your character bio is interesting enough to definitely draw attention. I wish you luck with it in the future. Good luck with your dragon hunting, only a few i know of that tried to do that.