Approved Tech Medical backpack

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Medical backpack

Image Source: http://vignette2.wik...CM-598_Medical_
Backpack.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20090422214511
Intent: To create a medical backpack for Frist order combat medics/Corpsman { specifically me at the moment)
Development Thread: N/A/?
Manufacturer: The Frist Order
Model:FMB-01
Affiliation: Frist order
Modularity:Contents changed out to suit different climates/environments
Production:Limited
Strengths: adaptability, built in portable repulsor-stretcher with 150 kilogram weight limit
Weaknesses: can only carry a limit limiter amount of supplies before need to be restocked @ a major medical facility or ship. It also add considerable weight to the armor, and size and shape limites mobility while carrying it.
Description:
A backpack designed to carry medical supplies for first order combat medics/corpsmen While the are semi customizable deepening the environment and expected hazard the troops will be facing, the pack has a limited space and supplies needing to restocked semi frequently, it adds considerable to the armor and due to size and shape somewhat limits the mobility and speed of medic in certain environments.

Each pack contains:

Resource items:
medical datapad- http://starwars.wiki...Medical_datapad
Emergency procedure database x1
portable repulsor-stretcher with 150 kilogram weight limit x1

Cardiac items:
wireless defibrillator x2
cardiovascular monitor x1

Trauma items:
universal plasma fluid sacks x4
heat-insulating blanket x1
resuscitating ventilator x1
vials of injectable bacta and bota x4 ea
injector power cells x2
injector handle and head x3 ea
synthflesh x 6
bacta patches x10
bone stabilizers x8
stim-shots x8
spray splint and bandage x4
flexclamps x10

Anti toxic, anti-venom, and, anti-radiation Items
Various anti-venom, and anti-radiation medicines
Filtration maskx1
adaptors for pressor field generator, and filtration x4 ea
a basic sample analyzer with a few sample vials

General tools
Laser scalpel x3
medicine dispenser(number of each vary with environment and expected hazards.)
antisepticsx 4
sonic scalpel x3
laser cauterizer x4
medical bandage patch- http://starwars.wiki...andage_patchx5



( the contents are a combination of the
http://starwars.wiki...ith_medical_kit
http://starwars.wiki...edical_Backpack
http://starwars.wiki.../Medpac/Legends ]

 

[Gir Quee]

RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review
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Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review
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WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Gir Quee]

Development Thread: N/A/?

This probably won't need a development thread.

it adds considerable to the armor and due to size and shape somewhat limits the mobility and speed of medic in certain environments.

Please add this to the weaknesses section.


Overall, the concept of making a comprehensive medical backpack is solid. While I understand that you're going to be listing components from the examples you listed, some of the text looks like it is directly lifted from Wookieepedia, which could be construed as plagiarism. Particularly this example, which appears word for word from the ECM-598 entry:

Various medicines, such as anesthetics, anti-venom, anti-radiation, and blood pressure regulators contained within a medicine dispenser(number of each vary with environment and expected hazards.)

This seems to have the unintended effect of having duplicates such "various medicines" and "medical drugs", which seems redundant to me. For ease of future use, and for other members of the First Order who might want to use this, I would recommend grouping your like items together and doing some consolidation. For example, you might consider grouping your "emergency medical database" and "medical datapad" together as "resource items", while all of your bandages would be together in another section of the list.

 

[Doc]

Updated

 

[Gir Quee]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Spencer Varanin"]

 

[Ellie Mors]

<p>Approved.</p>