My writing style and such

[Danger Arceneau]

I've so many chars, but I like to think I write them different enough for their own quirks.

I'd like to ask for suggestions on how to improve on my writing. What one would like to see in a particular char's post when I write them. More scenery? Narrative? Internal dialogue?

What can make my writing pop out more? What do you like so far that I should continue? What should I do less?

Top chars most people see me write now a days are:

Danger
[member="Kaileann Vera"]
[member="Adele Adonai"]
[member="Micah Talith"]
[member="Choli Vyn"]
[member="Subject 39"]
[member="Kira Talith"]
[member="Darth Nephthys"]

Some sporadically are:
[member="Darth Isolda"]
[member="Cira"]
[member="Chloe Blake"]
[member="Deagan Hunt"]
[member="Aeron Kreelan"]

 

[The End Narrator]

When I wrote with you when you wrote Isolda more consistently - I enjoyed it immensely. I enjoyed the immersion of emotions that were brought forth, the combination of writing and style further put the individual (Myself specifically) into the moment. This could have been hating her for her wicked ways, the despair felt when your character was helpless to resist the overwhelming darkness that she brought upon them. Just a combination of that - coupled with great selection of music choices - made it awesome. I don't believe - personally - that changes could be made to her to improve the overall flow.

I think the only other one I can truly recall an encounter with is Danger. I believe the style of writing brought from her is just like Isolda - it's great. It's not so much emotionally driven as it is business-esque if that makes sense. Putting it from a character perspective, there was a sense of intimidation when first meeting her - a woman of great power and who embodied confidence. A woman who knew exactly what she wanted and what she needed to do in order to get it, iron hard will - it was all conveyed through the writing of course.

I didn't see much internal dialogue between either character during my interactions - however - I have seen Danger do it, but not so much Isolda.

I think it's fine.

[member="Danger Arceneau"]

 

[Julius Sedaire]

I love you and your style, we just never seem to complete a thread... I'll give it some thought overnight, try and get back to you...

 

[Zonia Kalranoos]

[member="Danger Arceneau"] I am an avid worshipper in the temple of Momma. :*

 

[Olan Teff]

[member="Danger Arceneau"]

Overall I don't see any issues...whatsoever. So far I have been enjoying all of your work. Only thing I can say is...don't spread yourself too thin!

 

[RC 212]

[member="Danger Arceneau"]

I've very much enjoyed a majority of what you've written over the years. I wish you'd bring Chloe back more often. I feel like the Wardens are important and when I wrote Vassara largely absent. Might have Jack become one, might not.

Overall 9/10

1 Being, bring back the Blake!

 

[Danger Arceneau]

Thanks everyone!

I really enjoyed getting the feedback. I'll most definitely take the "don't stretch yourself thin' part.

LOL, I'll bring Chloe out more.

 

[Seraphina Shel'tah]

[member="Danger Arceneau"]

Kaile is adorbs. :wub:

 

[Kaile Vera]

[member="Danger Arceneau"]

Kaile is adorbs. :wub:

Thank you so much!!! ^_^