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Approved NPC Nala Savante

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NALA SAVANTE
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: 25
  • Force Sensitivity: Master
  • Species: Felacatian
  • Appearance: 5’7, athletically toned. She normally has short brunette hair but occasionally will grow it out, however she prefers to keep it short so then it doesn't pose a risk to her during close combat. Her eyes are probably one of her most striking features, being blue and due to this, some people will grow slightly uneasy. As well as these seemingly normal features, she also possesses the standard humanoid features of a Felacation. Such as, fang like teeth and a long, short furred tail.
    In her large cat form, she looks similar to a cougar, but with a row of spikes that travels along her back and claws that could shred through even durasteel.
    She wears armour specifically designed to keep in mind of their shape shifting capabilities. Which means that when they wear this armour and shift, even in cat form they will still be protected by the armour, giving them a better chance upon the battlefield. This armour is called, Steelskin.

    Each Felacatian under Raven’s employ bears a mark.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Nala Savante
  • Loyalties: First and foremost, loyal to Raven Thystle and second to that, her co-worker Nadia Melia.
  • Wealth: Middle class wealth.
  • Notable Possessions: Obsidian Lightsabre,
  • Skills: Force Sense, Force Smell, Force Empathy, Telepathy, Telekinesis, Protection Bubble, Force-Flash, Force Deflection, Alter Image
  • Personality: Nala is of a serious nature, she takes her job very seriously but in a manner of calm and collection. She is rather polite and follows a strict regimen, but at times whenever Raven needs a sounding board, will often be there to listen and help her make potential plans. In fact she is almost like a confidant to Raven.

COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Weapon of Choice: Obsidian Lightsabre
  • Armour: Steelskin
  • Combat Function: Nala will stay as close to Raven as possible while during combat, as her main objective is to defend Raven at any cost. Nala will respond at a drop of a hat to any commands given by Raven. Including, if need be, to break up and alter images to protect Raven and mislead their opponents. In any situation, Nala with remain calm as per her training. Sometimes, she will rely upon her cat counter part when the need arises.

Strengths:
[*] Level-Headed: In any situation, Nala will remain cool and calm. It is almost impossible to bring any other sort of response out of the woman.
[*] Multilingual: It was certainly a much need prerogative to learn skill multiple languages, so then to keep an ear out for conversations that may be important for Raven to know of.
[*] Combat: She is a force to be reckoned with in combat and will put up a strong fight and she won't back down until she is dead.
[*] Loyal: She cannot be bribed nor persuaded to work against Raven and Nadia, for she feels that she owes Raven for the opportunity given.
[*] Hyper developed Sense of Balance: Each Felacat has a hyper developed sense of balance and therefore is extremely difficult to knock Nala off balance.
[*] Perfect Night Vision: Another perk of Felacats is that they can easily see in the dark.
[*] Fast reflexes and Speed: Due to their cat heritage, they have speed and incredible reflexes in spades, which is very useful when in close quarters combat.
[*] Strength: Strength comes with the territory and therefore can easily over power any weak opponents.
[*] Heightened Senses: Each Felacat has heightened smell, eyesight and hearing.

Weaknesses:
[*] Loyal to the end: She will put her life before Raven in any situation. Unless called off, she will keep going until she is killed. Even if severely injured, she will continue to keep fighting regardless of consequences.
[*] Small Unit: Being that she is apart of a group of three, herself, Nadia and Raven, they can be overwhelmed by rather large groups.
[*] Sonic Blasts: Even Felacats cannot stop a sonic blast, not even the armour can protect them against this kind of attack.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Nala had a rather tough upbringing, while she wasn't struggling exactly, her family did live in poverty and often wished that she could help bring about a new direction for the future. That was when she was approached by Raven when she had only been in her teen years and she accepted quickly accepted the offer to be groomed to be one of her personal bodyguards. Then Raven sent her to a master force user to be trained in both the force and hand to hand combat for many years. Which then led to her employ under Raven's command and has not wanted for nothing ever since.
 
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  • Permissions: Approval for the use of Steelskin is right here.
This is not a permission link, you've only linked the tech sub. This is a Closed Market submission, so you need to show you have permission from the submitter. You don't post in another submitter's Codex/Factory submission to ask for permission (or post at all in another submission unless you're a staff person judging it).

This can be done by showing an approved marketplace transaction or via a screenshot of a Discord or pm convo.

Each Felacatian under Raven’s employ bears a mark.

These links do not seem to work. Please check and fix.

The Obsidian Lightsabre is limited to members of the Knights Obsidian. Per the submission, this NPC is not affiliated with them or the CIS in general.

Weaknesses:
[*] Loyal to the end:
She will put her life before Raven in any situation. Unless called off, she will keep going until she is killed. Even if severely injured, she will continue to keep fighting regardless of consequences.
[*] Small Unit: Being that she is apart of a group of three, herself, Nadia and Raven, they can be overwhelmed by rather large groups.

I'd recommend adding a weakness that actually affects her performance in combat if she were to fight a NPC or NPC written by another writer, since she is a Master level character focused on combat.

Raven Thystle Raven Thystle
 
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Raven Thystle Raven Thystle

Then you should post it in pre-codex, not in NPC Creation.

The moment you submit something to NPC (or Location or Lore etc.) Creation, it is supposed to be ready for judging. And with the exception of the point regarding Strengths and Weaknesses, these were not tips, but required edits.

Moving this to pre-codex since it's unfinished. When you're ready for it to be juged, tag a member of Codex staff.
 
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