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Approved NPC Nara Windu

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Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Age: 25
  • Force Sensitivity: Master
  • Species: Human (Korun)
  • Appearance: Tall, with dark hair and dark honey skin and a heavily professional appearance. Military styled uniform under trench coat and hair up in a tight bun.
SOCIAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Nara Windu
  • Loyalties: Silver Jedi/ Matsu Ike Matsu Ike
  • Wealth: Jedi Stipend
  • Notable Possessions:
  • Skills:
    • Talented Fleet Commander
    • Skilled Competition Shooter
    • Decent Saber Duelist
  • Languages:
  • Personality: Serious with a habit of wanting to help lost causes and those who are in need of help. She is nice enough until someone does something to sour her opinion of them but she is always willing to give a chance and meet them before making conclusions.
COMBAT INFORMATION
  • Weapon of Choice: Ataraxia MK. II first and foremost and then her lightsaber and force skills
  • Combat Function: Serves mainly as a fleet commander, directing the jedi warships and serving on the bridge. When confronted, uses a combination of saber and blaster with force body to outlast opponents.
  • Force Abilities:
Strengths:
  • Fleetwide Battle Meditator
  • FLeet Bond: Connected to her Choushin tree Nara is connected to the fleet and better able to coordinate the ships. The force bond allows Nara to mentall control her ship and commune with it and the saplings that it has created.
Weaknesses:
  • My Crew: One of the most dangerous aspects of the jedi is attachments, and Nara is deeply attached to her crew who are family and able ot be used against her.
  • Immune System: Having spent most of her life in a clean environment on ships. Nara's immune system is weaker and without filters exposure can cause chronic illness.
  • Force Nullification: THe choushin bond with the ship and tree gives control but without it the ship is in pain and it is like losing a limb. Voidstone, yasalimiri or any means to sever the force can cause pain or even disorientation.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Born among the children of the jedi and one of the few who had chosen to go off world and explore to bring back resources. Plying it upon the trade lanes in a tramp freighter she might appear to many like a Warden of the sky but instead usually appeared more like a smuggler who was secreting resources and supplies to a world that was considered uninhabited. Nara worked among the children as she found a better place and ways with Tycho to bring in supplies to the others. THen they were discovered by the jedi Sorel and Matsu and Corvus... they had followed the old clues that were left behind to mark the path for those who could use and see the force itself. Nara wouldn't have kept the clues but seeing that the jedi itself was alive and thriving with multiple orders across the galaxy.

Eventually the children of the jedi were able to return to the orders and sent several members. The force sensitive bloodlines seeking others and bringing hopefully some of the more dogmatic and refined views that they presented compared to many of the more open-minded orders. Nara worked with many of them and would remain on the ship. It was after all her second home... no more her primary, with the island they had secured being a distant memory. It led to some complications as she was rarely exposed to a non-clean environment which made her immune system far weaker than most and she was chronically sick. She would work with her crew and make sure they unloaded and loaded supplies for the other jedi before deploying them to the planet in drop pods that coluld be retrieved later.

Using special filters she was able to move up as the Kenobi fleet was being formed for the jedi and she was one of the jedi captains that they wanted to have. She could be second to Tychus the one who led most of the programs that saw them getting supplies and the older jedi master would be able to teach them as well as guide them. SHe traaded in her cargo hhauler for one of the more advanced choushin that she bonded with and was able to grow into one of the warships taking command of the Ataraxia vessel which was one fo the newest in the Kenobi fleet but the first to have a dedicated bond to its commander being able to respond to their thoughts and defend. SHe developed her skills using the ship to train and expand her senses to the others in her battle fleet and was sent to secure the well as the Ancilla was being protected.

The attack on the silver rest though was one of the things that recalled her and her battle group kyber from the ancilla to Kashyyyk and they sent what they could to back up the kenobi fleet and secure the system. THey remained there before moving to resecure and handle some of the key points of the jedi with various temples as well as a promotion. Nara was given the rank of commander officially and was below the admiral of the kenobi fleet. She was given a chance to be on the councils security circle serving to aid the explorerscorps and their exploration ships as protector. With the dissolution of the Concord it saw her battle group escorting the silver rest to its new location on the High Plane of the Jedi.
 
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Matsu Ike Matsu Ike

I like this submission! Always love to see some more uniformed folk around, but I have one little issue I need addressed before I can stamp an approval on this for you.

The easiest one to fix is in relation to Force Abilities. In Combat Function you note that the character makes use of Force Body in combat but don't list that power in Force Abilities, so a simple mention of Force Body there is needed.

The other concern I have is in the Strengths. I am very confused by the Fleet Bond strength but given that greater detail on it is provided in the Choushin sub it's not an issue, merely a bit vague for someone that hasn't read that submission. But again that isn't an issue that needs to be changed.
 
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