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Need some advice guys...

So, recently been ill all week. Signs of winter and the cold, my body just gives in. While recovering today though I've been over some of the stuff I wrote while out of my head on all of the painkillers. I'm overexadurating, don't worry. Anywho, I figured that the stuff I wrote while I was ill was quite poor, really really short. Thus I want to ask you guys as a friend almost.

Is my writing always that bad?
What'd you like about my writing?
How could I improve?
Should I add more cockney slang?


So yeah, just a few questions and a basic joke on the end. Long live the queen and all that. Well, my humor didn't improve while I was ill. So yeah, any feedback would be great. This also spreads over my two active characters I will list below. Thanks!


[member="Jardo Snow"]
[member="Xander Black"]
 

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