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Approved Planet Noverskaa

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Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
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GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Planet Name: Noveskaa
  • Demonym: Noveskaars
  • Region: Mid Rim
  • System Name: Novesk
  • System Features: The planet has 2 moons around it that have yet to be explored. It has one star. in the system's habitable zone. It is a standard rotational period or 24 hours and a orbital period or 365 days.
  • Location: Same hex as Contruum
  • Major Imports: Carbon, Durasteel, Glasteel, Doomium, Copper, Gold.
  • Major Exports: The wood of the trees are as strong as the Wroshyr trees. Animals are also an export from Noveskaa as people use them as pets or even part of terraforming projects. Droids, Ships, weapons and armour
  • Unexploited Resources: The planet has a lot of crystals and mineral deposits that have yet to be discovered (no RMs).
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: Standard
  • Climate: Tropical Wet-dry
  • Primary Terrain: Grassland, Oceans, Forests, marshes
  • Atmosphere: Type I
LOCATION INFORMATION
  • Capital City: Lesorskaa City
  • Planetary Features: There are more than a few rural towns and cities around the planet. However a large amount of the planet in wild with the few towns in between likely having been or still are Hyeanem camps the native peoples of the planet. There is a few hidden ruins if someone knows where to look but beyond that there is not much else on the planet.
  • Major Locations:
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    The valley of the Oceans. From what scientist can tell this area was caused during an Ice age on the planet. This valley looks like waves hence the name the valley of the oceans. A survey was taken of the area which showed that there were useful resources underneath the area. Yet it was agreed that no one is to destroy these monuments where not to be destroyed or face the penalty of death.

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    This tree is named the crystal tree. It is unknown how said tree was formed or why it exists. What is known is that the crystal is harder than any substance ever found. As such cannot be mined or moved from it's current position. But it was once again agreed that the tree is a monument and as such should not be harmed.

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    These two buildings are the new complex from Mirdirmorut. These are being used to create new technologies. Most of which is biological processes. This is also the main home of Tom Taff as vice president of the corporation. He watches the new developments into biological process with glee. This is thanks to Mandal arms and their subsidiaries.

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    Lesorskaa City - Tom also realised that the Town was built by mirdirmorut and should be protected by them to as such with the expansion came 6 AA towers with targeting computers and defence packages from mirdirmorut all run from the office by the AI genesis. The security forces took up policing jobs within the town and it became a safe place to stay. One of the first shops within the town was actually Taff's Taffy.

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    The Argentum Custodi - Created on Noverskaa by The Family as part of the deal with Mirdirmorut, it feel into disrepair when The Family disappeared and Vork was killed. Eventually pirates took over and made it their place however Mirdirmorut still had the codes for all their tech within and it didn't take long before the silver jedi went in and cleared them all out remaking the place as a base of operations on Noverskaa.
  • Force Nexus:
    Intent:
    To explain how the waterfall of peace can exist.
  • Nexus Name: The Waterfall of Peace
  • Nexus Alignment: Neutral
  • Size: Medium
  • Strength: Moderate
  • Accessibility: It is very easy to find and is a main point of interest on Noverskaa without any form of security being not far from the main city
  • Effects: The nature of the nexus neutral and very difficult to detect. The effects it renders is a sense of peace and calm. This is show through all the animals predators and prey appearing to not hunt each other but instead just drinking from the waterfall. It also appears to create a form of plant surge as many plants not found on the rest of the planet can be found within this area.

POPULATION
  • Native Species: Hyaenem
  • Immigrated Species: Humans 80%, Other races 20%
  • Population: Sparse
  • Demographics: Is it primarily human inhabitants with only a decent percentage of aliens.
  • Primary Languages: Galactic Standard Basic, Fisi
  • Culture: Because of the heavy Mandalorian influence in the system, Noveskaars culture is centred around efficiency and practicality. A good idea is a good idea regardless of where it comes from, and the emphasis on meritocracy is high, and corruption is low. However due to the isolation of the small villages on the planet, it isn't very often people meet. Although everyone who does meet often agrees that it better to be isolated then bunched up. Noveskaa sometimes holds hunting events to try and lower the populations of certain animals.
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: The Noverskaan Ruling Council
  • Affiliation: Mirdirmorut, Silver Jedi Order, The Noverskaan Ruling Council
  • Wealth: High - This is due to most of the materials on the planet are under the ground. Most of these spots are where the few natural sites exist. Thus the wealth of the planet is low and thus people use the trees on the planet to build there houses. However with The Family's deal with Tom and Mirdirmorut the amount of goods and supplies being traded have made it so the wealth has risen on the planet. With the fall of the family noverskaa opened a new shipping company that allows for more profits.
  • Stability: High - it is a planet of peaceful law abiding citizens. All outsiders are safe as the Council now rules the planet. Due to Tom being a member of the planet's council and head of their defence forces, Mirdirmorut Security mostly controls the planet. With the new Silver Jedi presence on the planet people have become less likely to cause trouble.
  • Freedom & Oppression: Under the Councils leadership most things are fine especially now with a heavy silver presence planet side
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
  • Military: The miltiary on the world is controlled by the council and is run generally by Tom and Mirdirmorut which allows people to sign up whenever and generally use droids for most of their patrols. It is a world complete with some decent defences. As well as a decent navy as they are protected by Mirdirmorut. However the silvers now own Vork's old base and as such own forces to allow Noverskaa to have an easier time policing the planet and have a visible fleet within the system inspite of Mirdirmorut's own fleet.
  • Technology: The level of technology present is the same of that within the galaxy at large. This is due to mostly Mirdirmorut and Tom and Mykes influences as they try to make sure it keeps up with current galactic standards.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Before this planet was discovered by Mirdirmourt and the Taff's it was a planet barren of civilisation which had an abundance amount of animals on the planet. Due to this it was occasionally used as a hunting reserve by a few knowable people who never remained on planet for long enough to build any homes or towns. Shortly after the galactic war it was largely forgotten about and was removed from a lot of archives much in the same way Kamino was in the Jedi archives. No one alive currently knows why this was. Due to this the system was largely forgotten.

Rex and Tom Taff where doing surveys on the system coming across the planet. When they landed Rex saw how over joyed Tom was at the amount of life present. As such he called in Mirdirmorut scientists as well as Kaine Australis. The surveys of the planet showed large amounts of mineral and crystal deposits however majority of these are under the natural wonders on the planet. The surveys done on the planet and animal life showed that the trees on the planet were as strong as the Wroshyr trees. They also found a location where every animal on planet congregates in peace. The location was then noted down for further research. As such Mirdirmorut set up an outpost on planet to continue their research on the animal and plant life.

The two of them agreed it was decided although the planet would come under Clan Australis. As they are under Clan Australis most of the settlements are members of the clan as such they took there culture and values with them. In efforts to keep up with the rest of the Clan and the galaxy as a whole, the company Mirdirmorut created several holonet stations as well as setting up comm buoys within the area to keep up to date with what the Clan, the ME and the galaxy at large is doing. Once every planetary year Mirdirmorut hold a feast where the Clan members are able to meet and catch up as well as swap or purchase weapons, armour and other hard to get goods. Kaine and Rex spoke of the defences of the planet due to it's proximity to SJO space. As such several missile satellites were put in orbit as well as a fleet of ships to cover the area. From that some members of Clan Australis felt safe enough to call this planet their home. As such the population is still minimal.

However when Rex left the galaxy at large for five years Tom took over control and decided he was not authoritarian enough to keep complete control of the planet and stepped down to focus on Mykes Vatak as well as his company and the galaxy at large. However in his place a council was made to which he was voted to as head of security to allow his company to keep the world safe. He agreed to this and continues to fill this role. However before Rex came back to the galaxy as a whole Tom made a new town for the planet to be it's capital. This was Lesorskaa City with decent enough defences. This has been the site for more than a many wedding since including Tom's own wedding.

When Rex came back however he didn't retake control and was followed by a sister. All members of the Taff family were present in the Valley of Oceans when Rex was killed by his then apprentice and his Brother Rowin Taff finally left his body. With this and other reasons, Tom left the ME with a dissatisfaction making it so that Clan Australis no longer had control of the planet instead allowing it to be neutral.

Since then Tom as well as the council have secretly made a deal with a rather large crime family and one Ahtemis . This was in an effort to allow themselves so protection and control from the crime family. This was also due to several rebel factions who were branded as sith lovers who had been affected by Rowin Taff. However they in truth were no longer happy with the council at all. However these sources were soon silenced and Noverskaa went back to normal.

After some time the family crumbled with all of their leadership either disappearing or in Vork's case dying. As such the places they had control over ended up with unaligned pirates using their old base to try and keep control. However eventually Tom had the Silver Jedi Order step in and take over the old base once again assisting in Mirdirmorut having some extra hold over the planet. However this didn't last forever as one day out of the blue the entire Taff family disappeared.

No one knows where they went but there old house hasn't been touched in little over 3 years even by Mirdirmorut employees out of respect for the Taffs. However in Tom's Absence Mirdirmorut continued to prosper and even made a subsidiary called NSC or Noverskaan Shipping Company. This new company builds and runs ships so Mirdirmorut don't have to extend any more than they have and also gave them a chance in Hyaenem to be hired and work with people easier.
 
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It is around earth's orbital position.
I need you to remove mention of earth from the sub- you could leave it out entire, or merely put 'in the system's habitable zone', whichever you prefer.



The planet has a lot of crystals and mineral deposits that have yet to be discovered.
Though they have not been discovered yet, they are still there. If you have anything specific you would like this to be, please list it. If you do not have specific plans, simply add a note (no RMs)



Native Species: None
Do you mean none, or no sentient? You mention the trees and different animal species so I just want you to put something here to make it clear that you mean no native *sentients*.



Military: It is a fortress world complete with some decent defences. As well as a large navy as they are protected by Clan Australis, Mandal Arms and Mirdirmorut.
There is nothing in this sub that would make this a 'fortress' world. Acceptable to say it has decent defenses, but it's a forest world with small settlements- remove reference to it being a fortress world please. It also seems strange to me that a large navy would protect a world that is so sparsely inhabited with low wealth? You are welcome to leave that but I suggest you think about what the rest of your sub says and if that really matches what is put down in this particular section.
 

Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
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[member="Irajah Ven"]
Thanks for judging my sub today

I have clarified the first 3

As for the last one, I have downed it to a moderate navy. It is more due to the positioning of the world itself. Given it is between Mandalorian empire and Silver Jedi space and Clan Australis is a Mandalorian clan it just made sense to have at least decent sized navy there.
 

Zeradias Mant

Democracy Dies in Darkness
[member="Rex Taff"]

Please expand upon your Historical Information section by at least two paragraphs. What was life like on the planet before/after discovery? How does a seemingly rural society keep on par with galactic tech levels? Plus anything else you feel would be beneficial for readers of this sub to understand what it's all about.
 

Zak Dymo

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Ravenfire Ravenfire

I'll be doing this review for you. There's just a few format issues that I'd suggest cleaning up before this gets locked, then you'll be ready for the second review.

1. Remove Template Instruction Language
Force Nexus (Optional):

The words (Optional) here can be removed, as its part of the template instructions and not intended to be part of the submission itself.

2. Old Link

The link for Mirdirmorut is no longer a valid link. I believe this is the correct link for that.

Once those two items are addressed, I'll stamp this and pass it up. Please tag me when you've completed any edits.
 
Ravenfire Ravenfire | Zak Dymo

Nice work guys! Just a few little things:

1.) Location: AC25 - This needs to be listed in accordance with the template. We don't use hex codes from the old map or the Wookie because the new map doesn't support that.​
Location: [ This can be a screenshot of the hex from the map with a marker, or you can say that it is located "in X planet's hex" and give a general description of positioning. If you intend to add this planet to the Chaos Map please review the rules thoroughly.]​
2.) Major Imports: Materials and weapons.​
What kind of materials? Anything rare should be linked - Just the word "materials" can mean many things.​
3.) Under "Links" the Mirdirmorut hyperlink is broken and goes to an oops page.​
 
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