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Approved NPC Null Legion

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Kalzok

Dark Thaumaturge, Loremaster of the Sith
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: Flesh out Tsis'Kaar and Lorekeeper military support
  • Image Credit: N/A
  • Role: The Null Legion acts as the honour guards of the Tsis'Kaar Lorekeepers, specialising in close protection, retrieving and handling Force Anomalies for research, and rooting out spies that would destroy the Lorekeepers.
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: The Inquisition, Sith Empire/Sith Order
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Unit Name: The Null Legion
  • Affiliation: Tsis'Kaar Lorekeepers, The Sith Order
  • Classification: Infantry, Engineers, Recon, Black Ops
  • Description: The Null Legion are the bodyguards, muscle and conventional power behind the Lorekeepers as a whole, deployed to assist the masters of darkness whenever numbers and soldiers are needed. The current Legion is restricted to a handful of platoons after the calamities that befell the Sith Order in the past few years. As such, they mainly act as honour guard into the foreseeable future.
COMBAT INFORMATION:
Strengths:
  • Loyal unto death: The Null Legion is sworn to the Lorekeepers and the Lorekeepers only. There are few who would volunteer, or be chosen, for service to the Sith Order, especially in such trying times. Should any threat to their being come from within or outside what remains of the Sith Order, the Null Legion will fight tooth and nail to defend the keepers of the lost arts of the Sith.
  • A certain set(s) of skills: Despite their limited and generic role on paper, the leadership core of the Null Legion comes from the survivors of decades of battle, giving the Null Legion a surprising depth and flexibility of skill and operation that can continue to be multiplied, through teaching the growing numbers of recruits.
Weaknesses:
  • Few among us: For their designation and role, the Null Legion are few in number, and they cannot afford to deploy in large combat formations until they have bolstered their numbers.
  • Softskin: The Legion has access to little armoured or air support, which prevents it from fully deploying as a proper Legion in the field for open combat.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The Null Legion was formed from the survivors of the past decade of calamities that had befallen the Sith Empire; specifically, the Sith Legionaries assigned to the reserve, almost symbolic legions that were given to the old Kissai Priests and even the Union of Keepers of Sith Lore and the Dark Arts (one of the Sith Empire's many unofficial Loremaster organisations). As the Empire fell from strife and invasion, these scattered second-line reserve troops were forced to work closely with the surviving Loremasters of the Empire, becoming well-versed in close protection, guerilla warfare, and suppression of enemy Force users. These scattered groups would be rallied by Lord Kalzok, one of the last Loremasters of the Empire, and reformed into the Null Legion, sworn to the Lorekeepers of the Tsis'Kaar and under Kalzok's supervision. Since then, the Null Legion has increased its numbers, and begun to take on an active role in capturing artifacts and anomalies for the Lorekeepers to preserve and study, all with the aim of assisting in the Tsis'Kaar ultimate goal.
 
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Kalzok Kalzok

I love the throwback to the history of the board here, but there are some issues, listed below, we will need to go through before I can approve this submission.

Affiliation

Affiliation: Tsis'Kaar, Lorekeepers

As per the template, you need to provide links to the relevant factions and characters when discussing affiliations. Please provide the necessary links, I have quoted the relevant section of the template below.​

Affiliation: [ Who is this unit loyal too? Usually a faction, company, or character. Link any relevant character bios, faction pages, or groups. ]

Equipment
While most of these are fine, there are a few problems I need to highlight to you.​

1) Permissions

While you are using TSE submissions in this submission is not actually affiliated with TSE or TSO. If you could provide the relevant links to TSO in the affiliations section that should clear up this issue.​

2) Limited submission

The Unit Size of this submission is Medium, and the availability is Uncommon. As per the table from the Combat Unit Template, which I have linked below, this limits you to Minor and Major Submissions only.​

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However, you do have a few limited submissions included in your equipment list. Please remove them. I have listed the submissions below for your convenience.​


3) Faction Manifests

As per the Codex Rules you are not allowed to link to manifests which are maintained in a faction page.​

  • Do not place links in submissions to threads that are within the Archives or anywhere that cannot always be publicly viewed. (Ex. Faction Groups/Google Docs/Etc)

You have several links to the TSE Manifest, please include the lists within the body of this submission, including the links to the specific subs in question. Once again I will list the links that will need to be removed below.​


Please tag me when you have made any needed adjustments to the submission and are ready for me to look through it again.
 

Kalzok

Dark Thaumaturge, Loremaster of the Sith
Thanks for the quick reply!

1. Added TSO to affiliation
2. changed unit size to small
3. Listed used droids and grenades. those without production scale listed are canon

Also elaborated and added another line to Combat Function and added hyperlink to historical section
 
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