Obscure song lyric references.

[Viktor DuSang]

So, what's your take on Viktor?

You feeling the character?

Thinking I'm a terrible writer?

Thinking I might be cooler if I wanted to make a gun that shot memes?

Tell me!!

 

[Ophelia DuSang]

[member="Viktor DuSang"], I'll leave two brief criticisms here and you can read whichever you think will help you the most.


Tenderness

Spoiler

If I had one hope for you and this character it would be that you enjoy his development. Be excited for all those beautiful epiphanies that you are bound to serendipitously discover over time.

It’s so difficult to be 100% mindful and present and it’s completely okay if you get caught up in your head every once in a while (gods knows I do), but if you practice writing from an authentic place I don’t see how you could possibly go wrong.

Je t'aime, petit frère.

Tough Love

Spoiler

F*ck what other people think :flower:

 

[Viktor DuSang]

^_^

Je t'aime aussi, [member="Ophelia DuSang"]