Approved Tech Octuple Barbette Ion Cannon

[Pyre Palpatine]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Create an ion cannon for the capital ships of the brotherhood of the maw
• Image Source: Tap here
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: octuple barbette turbolaser, ion cannon

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: The Dread Forge
• Affiliation: Brotherhood of the Maw
• Market Status: Closed-Market
• Model: O.B.I.C. (octuple barbette Ion cannon)
• Modularity: Can be mounted on various battlecruisers and star destroyer-type ships if wanted
• Production: Mass-produced
• Material: Standard (Durasteel,Tungsten)

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Ion cannon
• Size: Large
• Weight: Heavy
• Ammunition Type: Ion shots
• Ammunition Capacity: Extreme
• Effective Range: Personal or Average
• Rate of Fire: Average
• Damage Output: Average
• Recoil: High

SPECIAL FEATURES

• None

STRENGTHS

1. The O.B.I.C can cause devastating ion barrages.

WEAKNESSES

1. The O.B.I.C. has a limited range although its effective in Personal, Average ranges it will take substantially longer to disable a ship from farther away.

DESCRIPTION
The octuple barbette Ion cannon or O.B.I.C for short is a type of ion cannon that was first seen mounted on the Sovereign-Class Battlecruiser/Heavy Carrier as their main weapon created by The Dread Forge.

 

[MANIAC]

Pyre Palpatine

Hello! I'll be your judge today.

• You cannot use the Obsidian Star as manufacturer, because it is not your submission. Please ask a permission from Beltran, or modify it.
• Material: Standard; please specify this/these.
• Effective Range, there is no short or medium range, please select the proper rating:
  

  Effective Range: (Effective range in relation to the weapon type. Remember that a carbine will have a longer range than a pistol, an assault rifle longer range than a carbine, and a sniper rifle longer than an assault rifle. Choose from None, Point Blank, Personal, Average, Long Range, Battlefield, and Extreme. Battlefield and Extreme will require justification in strengths and weaknesses.)

• Please modify the strength's wording a little, like "it may able to cause devastating ion barrages" or "it can cause devastating ion barrages".

 

[Pyre Palpatine]

Pyre Palpatine

Hello! I'll be your judge today.

• You cannot use the Obsidian Star as manufacturer, because it is not your submission. Please ask a permission from Beltran, or modify it.
• Material: Standard; please specify this/these.
• Effective Range, there is no short or medium range, please select the proper rating:
• Please modify the strength's wording a little, like "it may able to cause devastating ion barrages" or "it can cause devastating ion barrages".

Is it okay now?

 

[MANIAC]

Pyre Palpatine

Thank you, almost good. You need to write the Personal or Average to the effective range field, like this:

Effective Range: Personal or Average

But if you keep this on Average your ratings are +2, with Personal the ratings are +1. So you need to edit this too.

 

[Pyre Palpatine]

Pyre Palpatine

Thank you, almost good. You need to write the Personal or Average to the effective range field, like this:

But if you keep this on Average your ratings are +2, with Personal the ratings are +1. So you need to edit this too.

Is it okay now?

 

[MANIAC]

Pyre Palpatine

Yes, thank you!

Approved.