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Approved NPC Omega Four-Five-Nine

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: [State why you are making this submission. Is the unit there to assist with faction roleplays, to provide an enemy for a campaign? What purpose will this Unit serve?]
To create a combatant unit using former characters I had created, now obselete, and to recreate them in the image of the Knights of Ren for the sake of my participation within the First Order's story driven content. To provide the Faction with an in-depth insight as to those Brennan has affected in the background of current arcs and active threads in play; to create a backstory and to give a second chance to characters that failed to live up to my expectations, now with a new direction under the leadership of [member="Brennan Cabrol"].
Loken Decius - Biography
Zarack Zorathi - Biography
Karrus Zorathi - Biography

The above biographies are being used in the creation of this NPC Unit. While the last two (Zarack & Karrus Zorathi) are going unchanged, the first (Loken Decius) is merely inspiration to Delengtha Ren, one of the Disciples in this Unit. Due to the background stories and histories of Loken Decius, the former character is not to be considered the one and the same.

GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Unit Name: First Order Strike Team Delta Four Five Nine.
  • Affiliation: [member="Caehl Ren"], Knights of Ren, First Order.
  • Classification: Disciples of Ren, Strike Team.
  • Equipment: [If your unit possesses any specialty equipment (weapons, armor, combat tools, etc.) Please list them and provide links here.]
DELENGTHA REN: (Loken Decius Biography)

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A former first Captain of the Imperial Stormtrooper Legions, Decius is renowned in his brutal tactics in military warefare. Among the strike force, he is the Ordinance expert for all firearms as well as melee combat. Lacking any actual force sensitivity, this man makes up for it in the reign of fire that he deals upon those that would seek him out as an underdog among his people, proving well that he will not be left behind because of his lack of spiritual connection. An atheist in his own right, he believes first and foremost in the chain of command and that any foe can be taken down with a blaster large enough.

Lokens specialty rests in heavy munitions and explosive ordinance, far more the staunch giant as opposed to the other two, he is the bull of the china shop in warefare, so to speak. With a direct link to First Order Command and Intelligence, this agent can do some real damage to an urban battle site. He is highly trained in ground force tactics and unlike the bemusing theory surrounding Stormtroopers, his aim doesn't miss!

Armor:
FO-02 Stormtrooper Armor (Black)

Weapons:
FWMB-10 Repeating Blaster
DX-13 Blaster Pistol
E11-S Blaster Rifle
Pyro Grenades (Incendiary)
Merr-Son Stun Baton - Non-Lethal.
M1-VX Grenades

Utilities:
SB-U01 Wrist Datapad
Vibro-Cutter

ARKAOS REN: (Zarack Arkaos)


A remnant of the lost Sith Lord, Darth Exedo; Zarack Arkaos is the product of gang affiliations upon the world of Eriadu, caught between the neglect of a mentally unstable mother and the brotherhood of a criminal organization that sought to manipulate and abuse him, his freedom from the world cost him his innocence resulting in the murder of civilians during a home invasion turned bad. Fleeing the authorities and the Galactic Alliance on his tail, Zarack fell into the company of the Covenant and then formed his own group of Outcasts under the name of Arkaos. The rogue element was later exterminated during a weapons deal gone south, their contractors turning on them and all but Zarack's body being confirmed KIA.

Zarack Arkaos's specialty lays in the fear and pain of others, manipulating the force through the practice of Mental Domination, an advanced blend of Mind Trick and Telepathy in which he is capable of forcing hallucinations upon others to nightmarish degrees, forcing his victims into believing that they are undergoing immense torture or trauma's of excruciating pain. This has proven to be especially useful when seeking to gain sensitive intelligence out of his victims.

Armor:
Ballistic Scout Armor - Alpha One Series.

Weapons:
1x Standard Crimson Lightsaber (Source.)
P-23 Sidearm Pistol
M1-VX Grenades

Utilities:
I-R Alpha One Reconnaissance Gauntlet.

Vessels:
VOI Air-Speeder
The Baccara - Also seen in biography.

Force Equivalent: Sith Knight.
Acolyte | Apprentice | Sith Knight

Tactus Otium: ||| ||| |||
Commonly referred to as Force Sense, the ability to see much farther than ones eyes can travel; Tactus Otium is the answer to the question: How are Force Users able to react fast enough to evade and counter blaster fire; providing a vivid sense of the situation unfolding around those capable of applying this skill in their chosen field.

Tutaminis: ||| ||| |||
Relating to the ability to absorb energies both natural and otherwise, this branch of the Force has been known to be applied both offensively and defensively. For an example, the ability to lesson the blow of a blaster shot to the side through great focus in extending the force from within to create a small barrier around ones exterior (some call this force: Protect).

Telekinesis: ||| ||| |||
Referred to some as Force Push and Force Pull, telekinesis consists of two branches of the ability. Sustained Telekinesis where an object or person is held in place for a period of time, and then Burst Telekinesis in which something or someone is thrown backwards or pulled in towards the user.

Telepathy: ||| ||| |||
Consisting of more than just communication from one mind to another, Telepathy is the umbrella term for the ability to affect a persons mind on the whole. Whether convincing others to do something they normally wouldn't (mind trick), or otherwise projecting images, memories or words into the consciousness of the target. The effect of Telepathy varies dependent on the mental strength of the foe.

Swordsmanship: ||| ||| |||
The ability to wield a lightsaber or sword, be it a single hilt or the use of dual blades or a staff through the form of Jar'kai. Force Users train exceptionally hard to combat those they would meet in the field of battle, with as much emphasis on this as they put on their studies over the Force, there are many forms of the sabre arts taught across the varying Orders of the known galaxy, some unique to the individual while others follow more contemporary learnings.

NOCTURNUS REN: (Karrus Zorathi)


Former Jedi Padawan of the Silver Sanctum Coalition and then an Initiate of the Order of the Gray, Karrus Zorathi is the younger brother of Zarack and more significantly the life long rival of which the two met each other in conflict many times. As is the case when the light battles against the dark, the two brothers struggled against one another, never coming to over turn the other in their attempts to kill one another. The blood feud between them forced to conclude when they came into contact with Brennan Cabrol, he of whom under [member="Samka Derith"]'s approval, sought to include them both in the Disciples missions for the First Order due to witnessing the fierce aggression they showed. To date they are slowly coming to tolerate one another with the help of Ren Indoctrination.

What he lacks in equipment, he makes up for in medical aid through the study of Curato Salva, the Jedi healing arts taught to him in his initial days as a hopeful prospect under the Jedi Order. Continuing to train in the art long after his leave of the world of Voss, Karrus has adapted to empower himself through the revitalization of stamina, strength and mental strain. He tires far less easier than the average person, his wounds are capable of healing provided he is no longer being engaged, to focus his efforts. Outside of combat, his healing abilities extend beyond his own injuries to provide medical care to his peers, though fatal wounds require more time to bring to close and the drain on his aura in the force will leave him time to recover, proportionate to the treatment delivered (Negating the death of another will drain him of the strength to engage in further combat until he can recuperate).

Armor:
Armor of Ren

Weapons:
1x cross guarded Lightsaber
M1-VX Grenades
Incendiary Grenades

Utilities:
SB-U01 Wrist Datapad

Force Equivalent: Neutral Knight.
Initiate | Apprentice | Knight


Tactus Otium: ||| ||| |||
Commonly referred to as Force Sense, the ability to see much farther than ones eyes can travel; Tactus Otium is the answer to the question: How are Force Users able to react fast enough to evade and counter blaster fire; providing a vivid sense of the situation unfolding around those capable of applying this skill in their chosen field.

Altus Sopor: ||| ||| |||
A basic component in the use of most Core Force Powers, this is the means to amplify ones focus in the force itself, strengthening what potential you might naturally have in order to delve deeper and produce a superior effect of the desired ability. Those of great skill in Altus Sopor can cloud their presence from other force users completely by melding their presence in among the natural flow of the force itself.

Curato Salva: ||| ||| |||
An umbrella title to the force abilities focused on self healing and rejuvenation of the natural body. Stamina and lost strength can be regained by drawing the force into ones center, healing significant injuries and sustaining ones life in the field of combat given enough time to focus.

Tutaminis: ||| ||| |||
Relating to the ability to absorb energies both natural and otherwise, this branch of the Force has been known to be applied both offensively and defensively. For an example, the ability to lesson the blow of a blaster shot to the side through great focus in extending the force from within to create a small barrier around ones exterior (some call this force: Protect).

Telekinesis: ||| ||| |||
Referred to some as Force Push and Force Pull, telekinesis consists of two branches of the ability. Sustained Telekinesis where an object or person is held in place for a period of time, and then Burst Telekinesis in which something or someone is thrown backwards or pulled in towards the user.

Telepathy: ||| ||| |||
Consisting of more than just communication from one mind to another, Telepathy is the umbrella term for the ability to affect a persons mind on the whole. Whether convincing others to do something they normally wouldn't (mind trick), or otherwise projecting images, memories or words into the consciousness of the target. The effect of Telepathy varies dependent on the mental strength of the foe.

Swordsmanship: ||| ||| |||
The ability to wield a lightsaber or sword, be it a single hilt or the use of dual blades or a staff through the form of Jar'kai. Force Users train exceptionally hard to combat those they would meet in the field of battle, with as much emphasis on this as they put on their studies over the Force, there are many forms of the sabre arts taught across the varying Orders of the known galaxy, some unique to the individual while others follow more contemporary learnings.

COMBAT INFORMATION

Availability:
Unique.
Deployment:
Limited.

Strengths & Weaknesses:
DELENGTHA REN:
+ Pride of Battle - Finding home in the battlefields of war, he is a titan of combat. When the adrenaline hits, this man becomes a torrent of defiance and will take a great deal of damage before his will to fight on is overcome.
+ Itchy Trigger Finger - Shoot first and ask questions later, his experience and knowledge across firearms is vast and he can make the most of a blaster like any Ren can make of a lightsaber. Be it the back of the rifle in melee or from the end of the barrel firing at range, he is a gifted marksmen and soldier on the ground.
+ The bigger the bang - The harder they fall. His explosive expertise makes him a prime choice for siege and infiltration missions. Armed with the might of the First Orders armory, whatever their needs, he can be certain to find a use for thermal explosives.

- Zero Force Ability - The only member lacking Force Sensitivity, this puts him at an obvious disadvantage when combating Force-Users.
- Slow Moving - Due to an excess of weight in armaments carried and worn into battle, his mobility is slower than that of his peers.

ARKAOS REN:
+ Mind Domination - Through his ability with Telepathy and mental intrusion also known as Mind Trick or at it's much more advanced stage "Dominate Mind" he is able to induce manipulative hallucinations within his victims, dreams or visions of which aren't truly occurring yet created by his own will to mentally scar his targets, is able to convince them of pains most torturous in the interest of gaining intelligence. This technique while psychologically detrimental, has no physical impact on their bodies save for an excess of heart rate inspired by the mental trauma.
+ Live and Die by the sword - The polar opposite of his brother, Zarack is most skilled in his swordsmanship and will often prefer to take to his opposition within close quarters looking to best them in physical combat.

- Unfathomed Arrogance - A blind confidence in his own ability can be both intimidating and yet self-destructive. Through his ability within the Dark Side of the Force as well as his skill with a blade, he had become too cocky in his own knack for violence that his actions are often fueled before thought. To be proven weaker than his brother or any other opponent has almost become a fear and one that results in immense rage, powerful yet blinding.
- Zorathi Blood Feud - At odds with his Brother, both Zarack and Karrus Zorathi never managed to conclude their violent history with one another. While their indoctrination under the First Orders Knights of Ren was extensive, they were unable to forget their violent tendencies towards their sibling. If not for the control the Knights of Ren held over them, nor their forced faith in the Supreme Leader, these two would likely kill each other before their enemy.

NOCTURNUS REN:
+ Curato Salva - An expert in the preservation and revitalization of physical health through the Jedi arts of Curato Salva, his stamina and strength can be maintained far longer than most typical sentience, even among Force Users. Through constant co-ordination between his body and the flow of the force he is able to exceed his physical limitations, using the Force itself to fuel his physical needs within combat (Heightened strength and speed, added advantage against mental strain/decay).
+ Unchained - restricted not to either the Darkside nor specifically the Light, through his time with the Order of the Gray he has come to understand the limitations and practices of abilities both believed to have been Jedi and Sith in origin.
+ Inquisitor - Focusing more so in the study and practice of the Force, his ability to manipulate that power far exceeds his prowess within the saber arts. As one who seeks to further empower himself and use this destructive force against their enemy, he has become a significant threat to those who follow the way of the sword. (Primary strength in Force Use).

- Stick them with the pointy end - While trained to use the lightsaber and fair at it, his skill in swordsmanship is less advantaged than most where as his strengths were placed within the use of the force. He is therefore more at risk within close quarters as opposed to being at arms length where he might prefer to crush a mans throat with his telekinetic grip.
- Under equipped - Lacking the technological possession of his peers, Karrus enters into battle with the very basics of equipment; Armed with only his lightsabers and a pair of grenade variants, his survival relies on his faith and experience in the use of the Force.
- Zorathi Blood Feud - At odds with his Brother, both Zarack and Karrus Zorathi never managed to conclude their violent history with one another. While their indoctrination under the First Orders Knights of Ren was extensive, they were unable to forget their violent tendencies towards their sibling. If not for the control the Knights of Ren held over them, nor their forced faith in the Supreme Leader, these two would likely kill each other before their enemy.

Description:
The nature of this Strike Force being taken up by one of the Disciples of Ren rather than a Knight or Master of the secretive Order was a decision made out of judgement against [member="Brennan Cabrol"] in order to determine or not his effectiveness within the Supreme Leaders regime. Tasked with appropriating a selection of individuals to undergo mental processing and indoctrination into the hands of the Knights of Ren, Brennan Cabrol's absence months prior would now come to light, and the true reason to why he had not been involved in the battle of Mustafar or the previous wars against the Galactic Alliance before the invasion of Skor II. Many figures came up in his search though few lasted amidst his expectations and a wish to truly impress his superiors with an outfit that would adequately praise Seiger Ren and prove their worth in combat. With [member="Samka Derith"] overseeing his operation, Brennan distanced himself from his peers and even his Master in order to gain full secrecy towards his given mission, an aspect of the objective to be able to prove that he himself could work within the shadows and behind the scenes.

Delengtha Ren - This man was the first and most difficult recruit to bring into the fold though admittedly required less manipulation over his mind than his pairs would undergo during their indoctrination process by the Knights of Ren. Once an Imperial First Captain of the Imperial Forces, a prized soldier who had fought for most of his life for the Galactic Empire and the Imperial Remnant, he was targeted for recruitment not only because of his prowess in battle but so too for his affiliation and knowledge over the Empire led now by Tanomas Graf, a branded traitor to the First Order.

Formerly stationed under the command of Lucien Irridius, his superior opted to betray the Galactic Empire and soon earned himself a rather significant bounty on he and all those that defected with him. Choosing instead to resign his commission rather than turn coward and traitor to the Empire, Delengtha Ren would be approached by Brennan Cabrol over the coming weeks and at first the two would come to blows. While neither one managed to best the other, Brennan Cabrol sought not to kill the man but to offer him a renewed purpose, speaking of the First Order for which Delengtha would have certainly heard of. Initially the man declined and the two went their seperate ways, Brennan continuing on with his search. It wouldn't be until after the discovery of Arkaos and Nocturnus Ren, that Delengtha would manage to track down Brennan Cabrol and choose to look into the offer more deeply, tired of being presumed part of the regime that turned their backs on the Empire and seeking a life of similar service, an Imperial rule and a fresh start in which his tactics could be utilized with far less restrictions than part of military command.

Arkaos Ren - The leader of a rogue group of criminals lead by the Force User heavily influenced by the Darkside and once trained by a remnant Sith Lord, Zarack Zorathi had managed to form a struggling cell that he had dubbed the Outcasts of Arkaos by the time that Brennan managed to run into him. First impressions weren't very high in the least, the man a decade older than Brennan himself acted with a temper far greater and a confidence intolerable to the Disciple of Ren, yet in the way that Zarack had somehow managed to captivate his outcasts with an almost fanatical guise led Brennan to consider what sort of path the man could commit to within the Knights of Ren, controlled by their methods of mental invasion and stability. It was not difficult to infiltrate Zarack's rogue band of mercenaries and pirates, playing well to all the similar ideals of the majority, feeling victimized by the galaxy and at war with society for the failings of those that should have known better, Brennan needed only tap into his past to portray a friend to Zarack in order to come to understand the crude and volatile yet able force user, soon discovering he had a brother and an immense hatred for his younger sibling. A hatred that Brennan suddenly became invested in.

Nocturnus Ren - Former Jedi and student of the Gray, following not the rules of any one Order but seeking balance to an ultimately turbulent life, it was no wonder from the outside just why he and Arkaos Ren would not see eye to eye. Though there seemed to be affection enough to keep Karrus from killing his older brother even when given the opportunity, Brennan studied the two closely and over the weeks began to further encourage their altercations when he realized just how strong their angst for one another made them. With the help of First Order Intelligence, Brennan Cabrol used Karrus Zorathi to lure his older brother and his Outcasts of Arkaos into a false lead for a munitions deal; Nocturnus Ren believing himself to be meeting with a former associate of the Silver Sanctum Coalition and Arkaos Ren seeking to gain a foothold for his people in an arms trade, the two were both pulled into a trap orchestrated by contacts of Samka Derith's at the request of Brennan's. Zarack's people were ultimately slaughtered while he and his brother Karrus were captured by the FOSB and subjected to rigorous amounts of torture and mind therapy, the pair being robbed of their former lives and instead forced to serve the will of Seiger Ren as his new Disciples.

After months of re-purposing and reintegration with First Order society having gone according to expectations, the Strike team had been designated Omega Four-Five-Nine. Commissioned under the Knights of Ren and placed within Brennan Cabrol's immediate care, the combat effectiveness and the overall success of the team is to be a testament of his ability to lead others, part of what's expected in all Knights of Ren, the ability to mediate ground forces when taken up in the heat of war. With the recent bouts taken against the Galactic Alliance and the prospect of opposition to the will of the Supreme Leader, Omega Four-Five-Nine has been cleared for duty. Failure to no doubt deter Brennan's future within the Knights of Ren.
 
[member="Brennan Cabrol"]

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[member="Brennan Cabrol"]



Brennan Cabrol said:
his wounds are capable of healing provided he is able to spend the time to focus his efforts and so too can he do so for others so long as their injuries are not life threatening.

While I'm sure you've already bore it in mind, I would be more comfortable approving this NPC if it were made more clear that his healing abilities can't be used while he's in the thick of combat.

Other than that, this will be ready to go.
 
[member="Feeto Chivaro"]

The following edit has been made:

"his wounds are capable of healing provided he is no longer being engaged, to focus his efforts. Outside of combat, his healing abilities extend beyond his own injuries to provide medical care to his peers, though fatal wounds require more time to bring to close and the drain on his aura in the force will leave him time to recover, proportionate to the treatment delivered (Negating the death of another will drain him of the strength to engage in further combat until he can recuperate)".
 
[member="Mahet"]

Edits have been made both to Force related details as well as a change to the affiliation to acknowledge for the recent name change of this sub-account.

Thanks :)
 
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