Lark
Saint of the Damned
So it's been a year since I started Chaos, and I've enjoyed just about every minute of it. Looking back, I'm proud of everything that I've done and all the progress that I've made as a writer. I definitely think I've made a great deal of progress, and I'm excited for what the future holds, for both Lark and myself. I feel as though now is as good a time as any to ask for some feedback regarding my way of writing as well as Lark as a character, so I had a few questions I want to ask.
1. Do you enjoy Lark as a character?
I've quite enjoyed writing Lark so far, and I'm looking to introduce him to some new arcs relatively soon. He's slowly been developing as a character, and I look forward to what his future holds. How do you guys feel about him? Do you enjoy reading him? Is there anything you'd like to see him do, or ways you think I could write him better?
2. What improvements do you think I could make as a writer?
I feel like I've improved quite a bit since I started, but I feel as though there's a long way I have to go. My posting can admittedly be sporadic on occasion, and my vocabulary isn't as extensive as I would like it to be. I feel as though I'm constantly using the same words to describe Lark's actions, so I'd like to improve upon that aspect. Other than that, what do you all think needs improvement? Any criticisms you all have would be welcomed, that's why I'm making this post!
Going forward, I'd like to make a short to-do list, goals that I'd like to accomplish. First and foremost is to be more involved in The Sith Empire activities. I haven't been involved in many threads as of late, and ever since joining the Sith I've only taken part in a handful of dominions. I'd like to step up my game and be more involved in faction activities.
Second is to give Lark's bio a clean-up. I really need to get it up to date with threads that have been participated in, as well as adjust his backstory and personality. It's not the same as it was when I first wrote it, and I'd like to improve upon it quite a bit.
That's all I've got for now, any feedback would be wonderful! Thanks for helping make this a great year, and I know the next one will be even better!
1. Do you enjoy Lark as a character?
I've quite enjoyed writing Lark so far, and I'm looking to introduce him to some new arcs relatively soon. He's slowly been developing as a character, and I look forward to what his future holds. How do you guys feel about him? Do you enjoy reading him? Is there anything you'd like to see him do, or ways you think I could write him better?
2. What improvements do you think I could make as a writer?
I feel like I've improved quite a bit since I started, but I feel as though there's a long way I have to go. My posting can admittedly be sporadic on occasion, and my vocabulary isn't as extensive as I would like it to be. I feel as though I'm constantly using the same words to describe Lark's actions, so I'd like to improve upon that aspect. Other than that, what do you all think needs improvement? Any criticisms you all have would be welcomed, that's why I'm making this post!
Going forward, I'd like to make a short to-do list, goals that I'd like to accomplish. First and foremost is to be more involved in The Sith Empire activities. I haven't been involved in many threads as of late, and ever since joining the Sith I've only taken part in a handful of dominions. I'd like to step up my game and be more involved in faction activities.
Second is to give Lark's bio a clean-up. I really need to get it up to date with threads that have been participated in, as well as adjust his backstory and personality. It's not the same as it was when I first wrote it, and I'd like to improve upon it quite a bit.
That's all I've got for now, any feedback would be wonderful! Thanks for helping make this a great year, and I know the next one will be even better!
