OOM-7795 "Oomy"

[Tyluko-Kai Kaimana]

[SIZE=9pt]Name[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: OOM-7795 “Oomy”[/SIZE]

(Image edited by me, original can be seen at http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/OOM-10 )

[SIZE=9pt]Loyalties[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [member='Tyluko Dubykee'] [member='Iris Issey'] (Formerly the CIS)[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Role[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: This droid serves the primary role of combat assistance, but also the role of mechanic, medical aide, pilot, sparring partner and overall robotic companion.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Age[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Was constructed during the Clone Wars.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Model[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: OOM Command Battle Droid [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/OOM_command_battle_droid[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Appearance[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Standard B1-Battle Droid appearance, but with bright cyan-blue markings.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Personality[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: OOM-7795 is very loyal to Tyluko and Iris and is willing to go to great lengths to protect them. He does have a tendency to be somewhat sarcastic and has a tendency to point out the obvious. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Combat[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Function: “Oomy” may have the appearance of a standard B1-battledroid, but his combat ability is far superior. Due to Iris’s superb technical skills, OOM-7795 has been upgraded with several different combat programs that allows him to use various weapons. His combat ability is now more akin to that of a BX-Commando droid and his military strategic knowledge is similar to that of a Tactical droid. He has been programmed to work alongside Tyluko in combat so that they can utilize each other to overcome adversaries.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Strengths:[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]· [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Weapons expert: “Oomy” has been programmed to utilize a variety of different weapons; from standard blasters to melee weapons.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]· [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Tactical Mind: Due to his upgraded logic circuits, “Oomy” is able to analyze combat situations and calculate various ways to overcome an obstacle. His logistic systems also help him to learn and adapt to situations.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]· [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Capable Pilot: “Oomy “is also able to operate various star-ships and other vehicles.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Weaknesses:[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]·[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Zealously loyal: He may act like a jokster at time but he will always do anything in his power to defend his masters. This may cause him to often put himself in harm’s way if he feels it is the most efficient way to protect his makers.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]· [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Outdated Chassis: He may have had some internal upgrades but OOM-7795 still possesses the standard frame of a B1-battledroid and is still somewhat restricted by the physical limitations of the chassis.[/SIZE]

· [SIZE=9pt]ROGER ROGER...Meatbag??: [/SIZE]Oomy[SIZE=9pt] sometimes has a tendency to talk like an HK Unit in combat and has become fond of the term "Meatbag" however he still sounds like a standard B1 Battle-droid and when he attempts to intimidate others in battles, it usually [/SIZE]doesn't[SIZE=9pt] work.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Notable[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Possessions: [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Weapons:[/SIZE]

• [SIZE=9pt]E5-Blaster Rifle [/SIZE]
  Spoiler

  http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/E-5_blaster_rifle
• Thermal Detonators
• Commando droid Vibro blade

Tech Fittings:

• Underwater Drive http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Underwater_drive
• Enhanced logic circuits and combat programs

History: OOM-7795 was a OOM-series Command battle droid that was manufactured by Baktoid Combat Automata to serve the Confederacy of Independant Systems. He had fought against the Republic Clone army in several battles on various worlds including Geonosis, Christophsis, Teth, Ryloth, Kamino and Mon Cala. He served the CIS up until the Battle of Mon Cala where his duty in the Clone Wars would come to an end. During that battle, Separatist agent Riff Tamson and his aqua droids had driven back the Mon Calamari/ Republic Force led by Prince Lee-Char and forced them to retreat from the Capital city. After the CIS secured the Capital, Tamson located a stasis pod hidden in a secret Laboratory. In that pod contained Tyluko Dubykee; one of the last existing members of the ancient Dolphinarian people. The Dolphinarians and Karkaradons had a bad history, and Riff Tamson wanted a chance to avenge his ancestors. The pod was set to be delivered to the Karkaradon homeworld of Karkaris on board a Separatist transport known as the Stellar Ray under the command of OOM-7795. However before the ship could leave the planet, it was shot down by a Republic Cruiser and crash landed into a dark oceanic ravine far away from the Capital City. OOM-7795 and various other droids survived the crash but somewhat were somewhat damaged. For the next few hundred years OOM-7795 and the drois under his command went about their primary programming which was to protect Tyluko Dubykee. However several hundred years later, Tyluko Dubykee attempted to call out for help using the Force; the call was answered by Jedi Knight [member='QuinnColson'] and slicer [member='Iris Issey']. Quinn boarded the ship while Iris hacked into the ships defense turrets, together the defeated the old battle droids and freed Tyluko. "Oomy" was luckily not destroyed by Quinn's lightsaber but was instead knocked out by a Force push, he remained powerless for the next few days. However, Tyluko and Iris eventually returned to the wreck to collect items from Tyluko's stasis pod and while they were at it they took OOM-7795 back to Coruscant. There he was reprogrammed to be loyal to Tyluko and Iris, he was also upgraded with several different combat programs and Logistical programs. He had a new affiliation, but his mission was still quite the same.... to protect Tyluko Dubykee.

DEVELOPMENT THREAD : http://starwarsrp.net/topic/99502-tylukos-log-on-oom-7795/

[SIZE=9pt]Links[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/OOM_command_battle_droid[/SIZE]

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/98930-a-new-day-a-new-adventure/

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/99377-a-dolphin-and-his-droid/page-1

 

[Boethiah]

Under review.

 

[Boethiah]

[member="Tyluko Dubykee"]

You're going to need to make quite a few changes to the backstory of this NPC. Having it built during the Clone Wars--and participation in famous battles--is fine... Having it connected to famous canon characters, especially during a canon timeline, is not fine.

References of interactions and associations with canon characters is going to have to go.

Additionally, your dev thread is not substantial. There are, without a doubt, a great number of posts but one liners don't provide substantial story content. This NPC has a great deal of combat functions ranging from being a high-functioning tactician to having commando-level battle prowess; regardless of its limiting chassis.

That's a lot of strengths packed into an NPC companion, so I would like to see you write a more substantial development thread of at least 10 quality posts.

If you have any questions, don't be afraid to ask. Otherwise I will continue to review this submission once you've changed the backstory.

 

[Tyluko-Kai Kaimana]

I can add more development, however I was unaware that we were not allowed to reference Canon characters as practically every submission I have made thus far has had reference to a canon character. Are we just not allowed to have direct contact? Reason why I ask is because Tamson is critical to the events of my character being placed under the protection of this droid. I appreciate any help you can give.

[member="Boethiah"]

 

[Boethiah]

[member="Tyluko Dubykee"]

You can have references or limited-degree 'ties' with canon characters. But direct contact, or anything that would appear to have great influence on a canon character, is not allowed. Because we don't alter canon timelines or notions. We can expand upon canon, but we can't retroactively modify it.

 

[Tyluko-Kai Kaimana]

Thank you very much for being patient with my questions, I am still getting use to all of the rules and what not. One last question, could a development post be made in the form of a diary or work log that my character kept whilst the droid was being reprogrammed?

[member="Boethiah"]

 

[Boethiah]

[member="Tyluko Dubykee"]

Of course. It just needs to pertain to the submission. The content itself isn't that important, so long as there's effort and reason put behind it. Mind you that it doesn't need to be a chore. Have fun with it; roleplay is meant to be enjoyable. Don't treat the development thread like a requirement, consider it an investment to your future entertainment when you're able to show off a bad ass submission.

 

[Tyluko-Kai Kaimana]

Hello [member="Boethiah"], sorry to bother I just wanted to know if there is some sort of time-frame I need to be aware of. I have not been able to give much time to my development thread because I have been swamped with assignments and Tests for college. I will work more on it as soon as I am able.

 

[Boethiah]

[member="Tyluko Dubykee"]

I would've poked you tomorrow, should you not have responded, to see where your progress was. There is no time-limit for you. At most what we'll do is archive the submission until you are ready to have it reviewed again. Would you like us to do that now and let you get back to it when you're ready?

 

[Tyluko-Kai Kaimana]

[member="Boethiah"] That sounds like a good idea, let's do that. Now I must ask, how would i get it un-archived when I am ready?

 

[Boethiah]

[member="Tyluko Dubykee"]

Just ask the Codex Admin or RPJ that you wish for it to be pulled out when you're ready. If you have further questions feel free to PM them to me.

For now this submission is being marked for archival.

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

Archived.