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Approved Tech Ori'verd

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Intent: A heavy weapon, powered armored suit capable of fighting on the frontline and taking out more powerful targets
Development Thread: (10 posts)
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/39090-making-frankensteins-monster-mandalorian/
Manufacturer: Beskar'ad Inc
Model: Ori'verd Heavy armor Variat 1
Affiliation: Mandalorian
Modularity: The heavy weapons can be interchanged with others it's class
Production: semi unique
Height: 3 meters
Weight: 240 kilograms
Material: 1% Cortosis, 2% Alum, 7% Ciridium, 92% durasteel
Modified Katarn Armor
Power packs
Energy cells


Classification: Powered armor, Multipurpose
Quality: 9
Special Features:
Z-6 rotary blaster canon w/ generator : heavy blaster linked to the HUD for more precise targeting
EMRG-50 rail gun w/ 8 round magazine : powerful long range sniper rifle capable of explosive kinetic impact
Equalizer w/ 4 tubes : 4 tube ion cannon whose ion bolts, when striking targets, suffered power failure
retractable cortosis weave vibrosword : retractable vibrosword in place of the average mando's vibroknife
magclamps in boots : capable of clamping onto surfaces for anchoring
shockwave generator in chest plate : intense sonic wave that would tear apart a target that was hit by the energy created
shockweb : electrified stun field applied to armor
servos, microservers, hydraulics, jump servos, mini repulsors, and energized microfibers : for enhanced strength and moderate speed just under average (considering size)
modified 3100 Firebrand heat shielding components : heat shielding armor
specialized foam-gel shock resistant layering : a shock cushion for the wearer
Advanced targeting computer : more precise targeting for the heavy weapons
Advanced HUD : multiple ocular filters, sound dampener, external speakers,
rangefinder : capable of estimating range to target within centimeters
comlink : capable of broadcasting to open channels and private
emergency bail out pack : Disassembled E-11, four magazine slugthrower, comlink, knife, and medkit
repulsorlift system : for flight in gravity fields
heavy armor : for durability in atmospheric reentry and fire fights
nutrient frame : for negating the force
exoskeleton : to strengthen the frame and give the wearer added strength
reinforced trauma padding : to cushion the wearer during kinetic situations
armor weave : strengthened fibers covering joints for added protection

Description:
The life of an infantry soldier is short without the necessary reinforcements afforded by heavy weapons. But to often tanks, starfighters, and other heavy weapon platforms cannot enter a limited engagement. And armor, the kind that can take a beating and still keep the soldier standing, breathing, and fighting.

Taking the kinds of engagements that his vode seem to see themselves in it became obvious that a new weapon was needed. One that could be dropped into a firefight. One that was mobile. One that packed the heavy hitting weapons that the average soldier could not carry into the field of battle. And heavy armor.

But in so many engagements it seemed that troop transports and drop pods were the way to set soldiers on the field of battle. So tanks, vehicles, starfighters and other types of armored vehicles were seemingly left out of the beginnings of many battles when they were needed for carving out a niche for reinforcements to land the appropriate tools and craft of war.

With these thoughts Kal Kandossii put Beskar'ad Inc into motion to build a suitable weapon for the times. Part battle suit, part powered suit, part heavy weapons platform, part armored unit, part mobile assault ... the Ori'verd came into being in the minds of the Beskar'ad.

Taking several different plans and schematics from other ventures Kal wielded them and merged them into a creation mirroring others but unique in itself. A battle suit able to perform many functions. Anti aircraft weaponry, anti infantry, anti armored vehicle, and mobile assault. Their plan was to build a battle suit that could turn the tide in battle thus saving the lives of soldiers.

(+) heavy armor plating allows it to take a beating and keep on ticking
(+) heavy weapons

(+) melee combat (beskar covered vibrosword)

(+) emergency escape in case of ... emergency catastrophic failure due to damage

(+) upgraded HUD and targeting systems

(+) easily deployable (troop transports, orbital insertion, drop pod)
(+) insulated kinetic protection

(+) heat/cold insulation

(-) external generator for Z-6
(-) external targeting cable for Equalizer running to helmet

(-) lightsaber resistant, but no beskar or other lightsaber 'stopping' alloys' in armor

(-) when hit repeatedly the servos can/will lock causing frozen systems until that portion of the armor can be rebooted (1-3 posts)

(-) systems are susceptible to jamming/emps (hardened but still will be affected for 1-3 posts)












(ooc: The basis for the template came from tweaking this design ...)

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/AV-1A_assault_armor
 
Also, I see a few issues with this right off the bat.
  • You mention a beskar-lined vibrosword, is this an approved weapon or is this something that is a part of the armor? If it is a part of the armor, I will need a forging development thread for the beskar (10 posts). I will also need Beskar/Mandalorian Iron added to the materials.
  • I will need something in your description to describe how the items in your special features work - especially the shockwave generator.
  • You left the weight untouched, please include it.
[member="Kal Kandossii"]
 
I happened to be reading up on your company, and noticed it was a tier 1 weapons manufacturer. I request that you either change the production from Limited to Semi-Unique, or change the manufacturer to another company. (Generally a company would not have the means of creating technology outside of its own operations, and if you are intending to branch out either for a tier advancement or for a submission modification, you will need to tone down the production amount to reflect on your company's status.)
[member="Kal Kandossii"]
 
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