Approved NPC P2-C7

[Térth Waiy]

Name: P2-C7

Loyalties: Térth Waiy, The Galactic Alliance

Role: a pilot astromech

Intent: to create An Astromech companion to pilot an X-Wing

Age: 8 Standard Years

Model: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/P2-series_astromech_droid

Appearance: Light blue translucent dome, white body with secondary light blue markings.

Personality: very sassy. Tends to Disregard Orders unless given to him from a trusted source, which can cause some friction. He is a Practical Joker, and likes to play pranks on people.

Combat Function: P2's not exactly programmed for combat, but does include some tools for self defense. He has light armor plating for defense against ship-to-ship weaponry and heat compensators to protect against the heat of atmospheric reentry, and that's about all he's been programmed with for defense/combat.

Notable Possessions: Intellex II ship configuration computers (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Intellex_II), stun ray (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Stun_ray), shield disruptor (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Shield_disruptor)

History: P2 was created by Industrial Automaton during crisis, so his behavior was odd as his programming was rushed. During a Flight from IA's Headquarters, the shuttle carrying P2 Was Shot down and scavenged by pirates. P2 Hid in an Escape Pod to avoid Catpure. He then made his way across the Dune Sea, to Anchorhead. There, he Met one of the Galactic Alliance's Soldiers, who liked the droid and offered a job with the Alliance. Initially turning down this offer, he went back across the Dune Sea and was Captured by Jawas. He was bought by a moisture farmer, and sold to a local Gang to pay off the farmer's debt. Soon, he escaped, and went back to Anchorhead, found the soldier, and accepted his offer. He was taken to the Alliances headquarters where he was assigned to Térth's X-Wing, as Térth's previous astromech had been destroyed in a crash. He and Térth have flown many missions together, and have formed a cohesive bond.

Image Source: http://www.rancorpit.com/forums/viewtopic.php?p=152040&sid=8c6e778c8468cc7891930f784c62627a

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

Under review

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

[member="Térth Waiy"]

Apologies for the delay.

At first I was gonna point out that you forgot to include Intent from the template, then I realise it's actually not even on the template. This is an oversight on our part. Please include it in your submission:
Intent: [State why you are making this submission. Is the character there to assist with faction roleplays, to help train your character, or provide an antagonist for dominions or something else entirely?]


I'm gonna have to see an image source for the picture used.

Please provide a link to any equipment mentioned under notable possessions and combat function.

Personality: very sassy.

Please expand on this. 2-3 sentences will be fine.

History: P2 was created by Industrial Automaton during crisis, so his behavior was odd as his programming was rushed. Captured by Jawas on Tatooine, he was bought by Térth on a trip through the system, as his previous astromech had been destroyed in a crash. He and Térth have flown many missions together, and they have formed somewhat of a symbiotic bond.

Please expand on this with at least one paragraph.

Thanks

 

[Térth Waiy]

[member="Darth Pyrrhus"] should be fixed now, sorry about that!

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

Nothing to be sorry about. Here to help.

Combat Function: stun ray, shield disruptor

Last thing is I'll need to see a link to the equipment mentioned here as well

Thanks

 

[Térth Waiy]

[member="Darth Pyrrhus"] sorry about that delay, it should be fixed now.

 

[Darth Pyrrhus]

[member="Térth Waiy"]

Good to go!

Approved, pending secondary

[member="Mahet"]

 

[Zeradias Mant]

[member="Térth Waiy"]

The stun ray and shield disruptor would be better placed in the 'Notable Possessions' section. Please reference the section descriptions in the droid companion template for a better idea as to what would be suitable for their combat function. Highlighted in red is the most prevalent to what I'm looking for in this section.

Combat Function: [Combat is difficult to avoid -- after all, this is Chaos. Should your NPC wind up in combat, what would they be good at? How would they work alongside you, or would they be a liability? Please include relevant strengths and weaknesses. The Combat Function line also helps assure us that you won't be abusing this NPC.]

Notable Possessions: [Does this companion droid keep or carry with it any items of note? Weapons and/or specialized things like tech mods or fittings that are not typical should also be listed here.]

Please tag me when the edits are made.

 

[Térth Waiy]

[member="Zeradias Mant"] does this work?

 

[Zeradias Mant]

Works for me.

Approved.