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Phaetra-class Light Battlecarrier [SularenCo Refit]

Major Faction

Marlon Sularen

Warlord of the Empire
Marlon Sularen
Character Bio

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Battlecarrier | Can hold a large amount of Starfighters and Support Craft and has enough Weapon Emplacements to directly engage enemy Warships of the same size.
  • Strong Shielding & Defenses | Three-Layer Shielding along with a Vast array of Countermeasures allows the Phaetra-Class Light Battlecarrier to withstand lengthy assaults from numerically superior foes for extended periods of time
  • Gravity Wells | Possess the ability to activate Interdiction Fields to prevent enemy warships from escaping the battlefield
  • Cloaking Technology | Possess the ability to utilize Cloaking Devices to easily slip in and out of enemy Systems and conduct Surprise Attacks against enemy Targets
  • HIMS | Allows the Light Battlecarrier to bypass Interdiction Fields raised by Hostile Forces
WEAKNESSES
  • Vulnerable Rear | The Rear of the Light Battlecarriers is lightly defended rendering it vulnerable to enemy assaults
  • Large Profile | The Large Profile of the Phaetra-Class Light Battlecarrier makes it an easy target for smaller and larger vessels alike which may be detrimental should a sufficient amount of enemy forces manage to overwhelm the Battlecarrier
  • Cloaking Technology | The Phaetra-Class Light Battlecarrier is unable to utilize it's Weapons or even Jump into Hyperspace when it's Cloaking Device is acting. Any attempt to jump into Hyperspace while it's Cloaking device is active will literally tear the ship apart
SIGNIFICANT WEAKNESSES
  • Exposed Reactor | Due to it's excessive amounts of Hangar Bays , the Phaetra-Class Light Battlecarrier's Reactor Core is more exposed leading to an increased risk of detonation and outright destruction of the Battlecarrier.
DESCRIPTION

The Phaetra-Class Star Carrier that would come to be known as the FDS Tormentor , was first built during the Early Days of the Third Imperial Civil War soon finding itself within the notorious Wraith Squadron under the command of the then Commodore Marlon Sularen during his time within the New Imperial Armada. When Sularen was dishonorably discharged from the New Imperials , rather then abandoning him and staying loyal to the New Imperials , the crew of the Warships within Wraith Squadron defected remaining loyal to their Commanding Officer. While some of the Vessels of Wraith Squadron such as the Pellaeon-IV Class Battlecarriers were brought back into service under Sularen during his time as Lord-Imperator of Byss. The Phaetra-Class Star Carrier was kept mothballed by Sularen who sought to re-introduce the Vessel into his Armada at a later date. After over a decade of inactivity , the Phaetra-Class Star Carrier formerly known as the NIV Tormentor was brought back to service under Sularen once more this time within the Final Dawn Navy as the FDS Resurgence.

Upon being brought back into Service , the Resurgence was heavily retrofitted to meet the standards of the recently built and retrofitted Warships with the installation of Offensive Armaments , Defensive Systems and State of the Art Communications and Sensory Systems as well as unique systems such as HIMS , Gravity Well Projectors and most notably it's own Cloaking Device. In addition to these new changes , the FDS Resurgence's Hangar Space was modified so that it could carry more Support Craft to make up for the lack of Space available for Support Craft within most of the other Warships within the Final Dawn Navy allowing the Resurgence to hold both the role of Front-Line Warship and Planetary Assault Ship giving the Final Dawn a potentially dangerous and powerful new Warship on the Battlefield capable of providing the necessary support needed for offensive and defensive operations against their many foes in the Second Great Hyperspace War.

 
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Martin Draigo

GDI CEO
Martin Draigo
Character Bio
Marlon Sularen said:

ansel-hsiao-carrier31.jpg
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Battlecarrier | Can hold a large amount of Starfighters and Support Craft and has enough Weapon Emplacements to directly engage enemy Warships of the same size.
  • Strong Shielding & Defenses | Three-Layer Shielding along with a Vast array of Countermeasures allows the Phaetra-Class Light Battlecarrier to withstand lengthy assaults from numerically superior foes for extended periods of time
  • Gravity Wells | Possess the ability to activate Interdiction Fields to prevent enemy warships from escaping the battlefield
  • Cloaking Technology | Possess the ability to utilize Cloaking Devices to easily slip in and out of enemy Systems and conduct Surprise Attacks against enemy Targets
WEAKNESSES
  • Vulnerable Rear | The Rear of the Light Battlecarriers is lightly defended rendering it vulnerable to enemy assaults
  • Large Profile | The Large Profile of the Phaetra-Class Light Battlecarrier makes it an easy target for smaller and larger vessels alike which may be detrimental should a sufficient amount of enemy forces manage to overwhelm the Battlecarrier
  • Cloaking Technology | The Phaetra-Class Light Battlecarrier is unable to utilize it's Weapons or even Jump into Hyperspace when it's Cloaking Device is acting. Any attempt to jump into Hyperspace while it's Cloaking device is active will literally tear the ship apart
DESCRIPTION

The Phaetra-Class Star Carrier that would come to be known as the FDS Tormentor , was first built during the Early Days of the Third Imperial Civil War soon finding itself within the notorious Wraith Squadron under the command of the then Commodore Marlon Sularen during his time within the New Imperial Armada. When Sularen was dishonorably discharged from the New Imperials , rather then abandoning him and staying loyal to the New Imperials , the crew of the Warships within Wraith Squadron defected remaining loyal to their Commanding Officer. While some of the Vessels of Wraith Squadron such as the Pellaeon-IV Class Battlecarriers were brought back into service under Sularen during his time as Lord-Imperator of Byss. The Phaetra-Class Star Carrier was kept mothballed by Sularen who sought to re-introduce the Vessel into his Armada at a later date. After over a decade of inactivity , the Phaetra-Class Star Carrier formerly known as the NIV Tormentor was brought back to service under Sularen once more this time within the Final Dawn Navy as the FDS Resurgence.

Upon being brought back into Service , the Resurgence was heavily retrofitted to meet the standards of the recently built and retrofitted Warships with the installation of Offensive Armaments , Defensive Systems and State of the Art Communications and Sensory Systems as well as unique systems such as HIMS , Gravity Well Projectors and most notably it's own Cloaking Device. In addition to these new changes , the FDS Resurgence's Hangar Space was modified so that it could carry more Support Craft to make up for the lack of Space available for Support Craft within most of the other Warships within the Final Dawn Navy allowing the Resurgence to hold both the role of Front-Line Warship and Planetary Assault Ship giving the Final Dawn a potentially dangerous and powerful new Warship on the Battlefield capable of providing the necessary support needed for offensive and defensive operations against their many foes in the Second Great Hyperspace War.

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Hello!

Nice sub. I particularly appreciate how detailed it is with the myriad of links.

I do have a few comments however, that will require some attention.

1. Permissions
  • The fourth permission (where you ask HAMWAGON for permission to use the NIO vessels within Wraith Squadron) is very grainy, and a bit hard to decipher. Can you please upload a better resolution photo?

2. Production Information
  • Material: You will need to choose between either Kiiriam or the Laser Reflective Armor within your 'Advanced Systems' list, as they are both specific armor material which drastically impact the nature of the armor itself. Whichever you choose will increase the defensive rating of your ship as noted below in my comments regarding the laser reflective armor. After making your decision, please adjust and rebalance your rating accordingly.

3. Technical Specifications:
  • Height: Minor error here. I noticed you listed the height as 1.200 meters, when i'm sure you meant to write 1,200 meters. Please correct.
  • Armament: The types of weapons shown appear to reflect a 'High' rating in lieu of 'Average'. Please adjust and/or rebalance accordingly.

4. Advanced Systems:
  • Laser Reflective Armor: This should be listed as a strength (this could be added to the 'strong shielding and defenses' entry), and would also increase the defensive rating of the ship. As noted above, you will need to choose between either this or the Kiiriam.
  • The HIMS should be listed as a strength on its own.

5. Strengths & Weaknesses:
  • If you decide to keep the HIMS, then after you add it as a strength, please add another weakness to counterbalance the number of strengths vs weaknesses.
 
Major Faction

Marlon Sularen

Warlord of the Empire
Marlon Sularen
Character Bio
Martin Draigo said:
Hello!

Nice sub. I particularly appreciate how detailed it is with the myriad of links.

I do have a few comments however, that will require some attention.

1. Permissions
  • The fourth permission (where you ask HAMWAGON for permission to use the NIO vessels within Wraith Squadron) is very grainy, and a bit hard to decipher. Can you please upload a better resolution photo?

2. Production Information
  • Material: You will need to choose between either Kiiriam or the Laser Reflective Armor within your 'Advanced Systems' list, as they are both specific armor material which drastically impact the nature of the armor itself. Whichever you choose will increase the defensive rating of your ship as noted below in my comments regarding the laser reflective armor. After making your decision, please adjust and rebalance your rating accordingly.

3. Technical Specifications:
  • Height: Minor error here. I noticed you listed the height as 1.200 meters, when i'm sure you meant to write 1,200 meters. Please correct.
  • Armament: The types of weapons shown appear to reflect a 'High' rating in lieu of 'Average'. Please adjust and/or rebalance accordingly.

4. Advanced Systems:
  • Laser Reflective Armor: This should be listed as a strength (this could be added to the 'strong shielding and defenses' entry), and would also increase the defensive rating of the ship. As noted above, you will need to choose between either this or the Kiiriam.
  • The HIMS should be listed as a strength on its own.

5. Strengths & Weaknesses:
  • If you decide to keep the HIMS, then after you add it as a strength, please add another weakness to counterbalance the number of strengths vs weaknesses.
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Would these changes be sufficient?
 

Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
Ravenfire
Moderator
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