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Approved Planet Polorus

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Abril

The priest God never paid
Polorus
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: To serve as a base for The Lintics and Abril
Image Credit: Here
Canon: N/A
Links: Temple, The Lintics GENERAL INFORMATION
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Planet Name: Polorus
Demonym: Polorian

Region: Outer
System Name: Farigard
System Features: The days are short and the nights are long. Dusk is the longest period of time, consisting of 9 hours. Daytime is 3 hours and night is 6 hours, making the days 18 hours long.
Coordinates: N14
Major Imports: N/A
Major Exports: N/A

GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
Gravity: Earth-like
Climate: Rocky, cold and windy.
Primary Terrain: Full of rocks and deep caverns. Canyons are also normal.
Major Locations: The only notable location is the Lintic's temple. It's somewhere in the northern hemisphere. It is currently abandoned, but easily habitable. The temple itself is a huge structure in of itself but the tunnels into the caves are the most remarkable thing about it. <p>POPULATION
  • Native Species: N/A
  • Immigrated Species: Human, among other humanoids
  • Population: Minimally populated
  • Demographics: Average alien/human ratio
  • Primary Languages: Galactic Standard
  • Culture: The only settlement is The Lintic Temple. Here they lived in isolation and performed rituals for better health and mind.
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: Democracy
  • Affiliation: The Lintics owned Polorus, however, their disappearance affected the ownership of the planet. It is currently unowned
  • Wealth: Medium
  • Stability: Crime is low, poverty is low and there is little to no danger
  • Freedom & Oppression: Relaxed and open, little rules and no direct leader or police force.
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
  • Military: Force-sensitive individuals with lightsabers are the top of Polorus' military capability
  • Technology: They use very little technology expect lightsabers so very primitive.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
In the early days of the Lintics when they were searching desperately for a planet to habit. Searching for a hideaway far from the galactic unrest and problems. They searched for years until finding a small habitable rocky planet in the middle of nowhere. Perfect. They started to build their bases and habited the planet. They built their first temple early on with rocks they found. They shaped the temples with their force abilities Spreading their word around in the galaxy they thrived for many generations, still hidden from most of the galaxy. Until they mysteriously vanished.
 

Netherworld

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You're missing the POPULATION, GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY, and MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY sections of the Planet template.
Please add them back in and fill them out appropriately.

Similarly, we require at least a solid paragraph under HISTORICAL INFORMATION. You can expand on what you currently have by describing a bit more in depth how the Lintics found the planet and built their temple, how they vanished, etc.
 

Netherworld

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Abril said:
Major Locations: The only notable location is the Lintic's temple. [...] It is currently abandoned, but easily habitable.

Abril said:
Culture: [...] Here they live in isolation and perform rituals for better health and mind.

Abril said:
Affiliation: The Lintics own Polorus

Abril said:
Until they [The Lintics] mysteriously vanished.
  • Your submission contains conflicting information as to the current status / population of the planet.
  • Who are the Lintics?
  • Are they actually gone from the planet, or do they remain and actively practice rituals?
Please address the contradictions in your submission (quoted above). When you have done so, please alert me via PM – we are aware of the fact that members currently cannot reply to their submissions. Staff is working on it.
 
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