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Approved Tech Praetor Battle Armour

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a suit of phrik armour as a gift to PC members of the Order of Fire, Angelii and friends. Being a semi-unique model, distribution of the suit will be extremely limited.
  • Image Source: Image 1 here. 'Lorica Amazon' on Uwm.tv. Original Artist unknown. Image 2 here. Kalsifer by Fetsch on Deviantart. The first picture shows the Order of Fire version, the second the Angelii. The differences are purely cosmetic.
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Restricted Missions: N/A. Firemane is a tier 6 corporation with a phrik specialisation.
  • Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Firemane Industries & Technology
  • Model: N/A
  • Affiliation: Order of Fire, Eldorai Matriarchy's Angelii, Firemane.
  • Modularity: Minor; extra air tanks can be added, gadgets can be removed or replaced as needed.
  • Production: Semi-Unique
  • Material: Phrik, armourweave, conductive earthing rods, Focus crystal implanted in chest area.
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Anti-Lightsabre, Anti-Blaster, Anti-Environment
  • Weight: 15 kg
  • Quality: 8
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Highly resistant to lightsabres (anywhere outside the joints and non-phrik areas)
  • Highly resistant to environmental and elemental hazards
  • Earthing rods to dissipate electrical charges
  • Features advanced HUD with sensor suite and infrared/low light vision.
  • Commlink
  • Includes CD-X Encryption.
  • Environmentally sealed with filters to purify atmosphere and one hour's air in a tank on the back.
  • Boots can be magnetised.
  • Radiation Deflection Badge
  • Provides resistance to sonic damage via Sonic Dampeners.
  • CBRW-1 Flamer. Wrist variant, right wrist.
  • Ballistics Shielding
  • Gauntlets can be retracted.
  • Focus Crystal implanted in chest area.

Strengths:
  • The phrik armour is strong and resistant to many forms of damage, including lightsabres. All in all it possesses significant defensive capabilities without encumbering the wearer unduly.
  • Highly resistant to elemental and environmental effects. Can resist temperatures of extreme heat or cold. Earthing rods dissipate electrical charges.
  • Gadgets.
  • Sonic dampeners provide some protection against sonics.
  • Incorporates a focusing crystal, similar to the foci used by the ancient Jedi Sages and Sith Inquisitors during the Cold War. It provides a minor boost to the wearer's Force powers.
Weaknesses:
  • Vulnerable to kinetic damage. While the suit is tough, the body inside is squishy. Heavy impacts, falls and so on can pulp the wearer. Something like a 50. cal round to the chest will hurt an awful lot, causing significant internal injuries. Likewise it is vulnerable to heavy blasters and explosive weapons.
  • While phrik is tough, the joints between the armour plates in the armpits, neck, groin and shoulder are weaker as they lack the heavy plates.
  • Suit does not protect against Force attacks that bypass armour, such as Force Choke, Drain, illusions and so on.
  • User is still vulnerable to disruptors or Ssi-Ruuvi paddle beamers.
  • Vulnerable to Ion/EMP.

DESCRIPTION

After the Alesia Combat Shield entered production, Firemane turned its eye towards developing a new suit of combat suit, the Praetor Battle Armour. It came into being at the request of the Order of Fire, Firemane's Force-using arm, and the Eldorai Matriarchy's Angelii corps. The suit is intended to be used by the select operatives of both organisations (in other words a very small number of PCs). It is made out of phrik, a very tough alloy Firemane has a lot of experience with. This provides it with good protection against lightsabres, energy attacks and ballistic weapons.


The armour offers a good compromise between protective qualities, speed and mobility. It is also designed to resist cold, heat and electricity very strongly. All Angelii are elemental Force-users and this applies to several members of the Order of Fire, and also to a number of their opponents. Earthing rods have been incorporated to dissipate electrical charges. Moreover, the armour is fully sealed to protect the wearer against toxins and such. Should it become necessary, the gauntlets can be retracted enough to show the wearer's palms, as some Force attacks might require this.


While the Praetor suit provides very good protection, its plates are less thick than those of more powerful models. This was a tradeoff to make suit more mobile, but it also makes it more vulnerable against heavy weapons, kinetic impacts and so on. Due to the smaller frame and reduced bulk, impacts are less padded. Kinetic impacts can be considered to be the suit's greatest weakness. These include bludgeoning attacks, telekinesis, heavy falls and damage from high calibre weapons. Even if an attack does not penetrate the armour itself, it can still hurt the squishy body inside by causing internal injuries. Moreover, the suit is purely conventional and offers no protection against esoteric Force attacks that ignore armour. Furthermore, disruptors and traditional Ssi-Ruuvi paddle beamers are still good weapons, since the former tears apart molecules, while the latter fires paralysis beams that bypass armour.


The armour has a number of accessoires to help the wearer, such as a wrist flamer. The integrated HUD allows different vision modes, commlink and sensors to permit better communication. Moreover, the boots can be magnetised and an air tank allows longer exposure in hazardous conditions. On the preternatural front, a focusing crystal helps the wearer harness the Force. This is obviously a bonus that only a Force-user can take advantage of, but then again the suit was primarily designed for the Order of Fire and the Angelii.


Overall, the Praetor Battle Armour is a solid suit, but not as powerful as the more unique models. It allows significant mobility and good protection against certain attacks, but still has its weaknesses. The significant costs that result from the use of phrik prohibit larger production. Both Angelii and the Order of Fire receive a suit of armour with the same features, stats, strengths and weaknesses. The only difference between them is cosmetic, as the Angelii's suit has a look more in line with Eldorai aesthetics, whereas the Order of Fire one has a more conventional look.
 

Netherworld

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Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.
 

Netherworld

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[member="Kaida Taldir"]



Kaida Taldir said:
conductive earthing rods

Kaida Taldir said:
Earthing rods have been incorporated to dissipate electrical charges.
  • Please add this to the Special features and Strengths.


Kaida Taldir said:
Has an ARGH Jet Propulsion System attached.

Kaida Taldir said:
CBRW-1 Flamer. Wrist variant. Concealed on left arm.
  • None of these submissions show Affiliation to Firemane. Do you have permission to use these systems?
  • Furthermore, is the submission using the Jetpack or the Jetsuit variant?


Kaida Taldir said:
The suit is rather light, giving the wearer mobility.

Kaida Taldir said:
Weight: 10 kg
  • Unfortunately that weight is way off.
    The Jetpack alone is 28 kg. (The Jetsuit is even heavier at 35 kg)
  • The Wrist-mounted flamethrower is 5 kg. It would also be difficult to conceal considering it spans the length of a human forearm.
  • The Wrist bolter is 2 kg.

[*]That brings the total weight of the suit up to 45 kg (or 52, Jetsuit depending), which is extremely heavy. Please remove the Lightweight strength and instead add a Weakness that reflects this encumbrance. The user would get tired out fairly quickly lugging this around, they would move slower than other fighters, etc.


Kaida Taldir said:
Vulnerable to kinetic damage. While the suit is tough, the body inside is squishy. Heavy impacts, falls and so on can pulp the wearer. Something like a 50. cal round to the chest will hurt an awful lot, causing significant internal injuries.

Kaida Taldir said:
Low weight means the suit lacks the bulk and plate thickness of heavier models. It is somewhat padded, but is weaker against impact. Also makes heavy blasters and explosive weapons dangerous.
  • This reads essentially as the same weakness. Additionally, considering the point brought up above about the weight, the second weakness is irrelevant anyway. Please remove it.


Kaida Taldir said:
Provides resistance to sonic damage via Sonic Dampeners.
  • Special Features that convey particular strengths should be listed as such in the Strengths section.


Kaida Taldir said:
Gauntlets can be retracted.
  • How does this work? Both gauntlets come with very large wrist-mounted weapon systems.
Complete the requested edits and answer the relevant questions, and we'll move on from there. :)
 
[member="Netherworld"]


Thanks for your review.


Regarding the question of ownership, I do have permission to use the flamer and the other ARGH gear. The Abregado-Rae Guild of Hammers is a Firemane subsidiary and we share our tech. That's been the case for several OOC and IC years.


I acknowledge your point re weight. I've removed the wrist bolter and the ARGH jetpack and beefed up the weight to 15 kg. Since it's neither particularly light nor particularly heavy, I've removed light weight as a strength. Likewise I've removed the fourth weakness about it being light. I've also removed the line in Special Features about the flamer being concealed.


I've added the vulnerability to disruptors and paddle beamers that I mentioned in the description, since based on my reading of disruptor subs on the board (e.g. the Vanir Needle Disruptor) they can penetrate even heavy armour by tearing molecules apart, whilst Ssi-Ruuvi paddle beamers ignore it entirely.


Sonic Dampeners and earthing rods have been added to Special Features. Sonic Dampeners got its own category under Strengths, mentioned the earthing rods in the general strength about it being good against elemental and environmental hazards, since they're a part of that.


As for the retractable gauntlets, my understanding is that it just needs to retract over the palm. At a certain verbal command the metal on the wrist splits and slides up to the top of the hand under the gauntlet leaving the palm free.
 

Netherworld

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[member="Kaida Taldir"]

That works.

Now, on the whole, this is a very solid suit of armor – for that reason, I'd like you to balance it out with one more Weakness.
Reading this over, the most logical thing to add would be a Weakness to EMP/Ion, since there are no systems to counteract it.
 
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