[Pre-Factory] =x= Kyber's Personal Armor =x=

[Kyber Salurra]

This is my first factory submission so I'd very much appreciate some feedback to make sure nothing is really out there or ridiculous, and to make sure I'm following the semi-frustrating 1-10 'quality' system that is way too vague for my liking. Any and all feedback is welcome and I'll thank all that do so in advance for reading through my submission. ​

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Intent: Personal Armor for Kyber Salurra
Development Thread: if necessary
Manufacturer: Kyber Salurra
Model: Spetchit Mk. I
Affiliation: Kyber Salurra's Repair Shop
Modularity: Specific Hardpoints on armor allow for the switching out or completely taking off of certain parts.
Production: Production: Unique - Intended only for this character unless the design is worthy of being bought by a corporation willing to mass-produce it.
Material: Durasteel, flex-armor, warden cloak, & thermoguard body glove
Classification: Multipurpose
Weight: 28kg
Quality:

• Blasters: 7
• Shrapnel: 7
• Corrosives: 4
• Radiation: 5
• Melee: 6
• Lighstabers: 5 - (warden cloak is where the brunt of the lightsaber resistance originates)
• Toxins/Gas: 9
  

Special Features:

• Hardpoints for interchangeable weapons located on each wrist as well as on the back.
• Helmet has built in Thermal Sensor & Optic Zoom for up to x4.0 magnification. Can be activated simultaneously.
• Suit & Helmet hermetically sealed with basic air filter to stop inhalation of various gas.
• Has a small Oxygen Canister built-in as last resort for any uninhabitable conditions.
• Can withstand Vacuum pressure.
• Up-to-date communications system inside helmet as well as simple HUD that shows Oxygen level (if applicable), Fuel level (if applicable), outside temperature, and power level.
• Leather belt with various pockets, pouches, and straps for storing munitions and equipment.

Description: Kyber found out early that to take on tougher bounties and to even think about participating in any military activity he'd need his own armor. After saving up as much as he could from his Repair Shop's Profits, he bought himself all the materials and components he couldn't salvage from junkyards or put together himself and began to work.

The suit has a thermoguard body glove inmost layer, and over that is a patchwork of flex-armor plating that covers almost all parts of the body in a layered fashion (black). Over that is pure durasteel plates (silver & blue) covering big swathes of body. Lastly, Kyber took an ordered warden cloak and dyed it blue before cutting it to the desired length and shape. The helmet would be the same step order in its design, except for the various electronic components inside. As for the 3 hardpoints; the hardpoint on his back is designed to accomadate almost any jetpack, jump-pack, or oxygen tank. However, the standard equipment meant of it would be a Z-6 Jetpack. The standard equipment for the right wrist would be the M99 Rocket System, and as for the left the CZ wrist-mounted Flame Projector.

Primary Source: Warden Cloak || Z-6 Jetpack || CZ Wrist-Mounted Flame Projector || M99 Rocket System

 

[Corey's OOC]

[member="Draco Vereen"] is one of our armor experts
But to me, it looks good, quality seems fine to me. You may want to break it down similar to how this armor does. For energy, melee, shrapnel, lightsaber, etc etc

As you mention specific pieces (Z-6 jetpack, CZ Flame Thrower, etc) you may want to link those sources in the Primary Source.

Some Judges get picky.

 

[Laira Darkhold]

[member="Kyber Salurra"]
OCD Intensifies.

Its MM9 Rocket Launcher and ZX Miniature Flame Projector.

other than that looks fine.

 

[Kyber Salurra]

[member="Draco Vereen"] || [member="Corey's OOC"]

Fixed everything I could, some additional feedback on the quality system would be awesome please!

 

[Corey's OOC]

To me it all looks good. Perhaps a note that the Warden cloak is where the brunt of lightsaber resistance originates?

[member="Kyber Salurra"]