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Prefsbelt-Class Super Star Destroyer | The NIV Tregessar

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The NIV Tregessar


OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create the NIO a neat new flagship.
  • Image Source: Taylor Kingston [x], but edited by the lovely Zef Halo Zef Halo
  • Canon Link:
Materials
  • Nanolaminate Plating [x]
  • Impervium [x]
  • Matrix Armour [x]
  • Quadanium [x]
  • CP90 Durasteel [x]
  • Duralloy [x]
  • Laminanium [x]
  • Durasteel [x]
  • Plasteel Interior Paneling [x]
  • Alusteel Skeleton [x]
Weapons Systems:
  • Mass-Driver Autocannons [x]
  • Point Defense Lasers [x]
  • Point Defense Ion Cannons [x]
  • Point Defense Brilliant Missile Pods [x]
  • IDCS-60 Point Defense Driver [x]
  • Heavy Turbolaser Cannons [x]
  • Turbolasers [x]
  • Octuple Barbette Turbolaser [x]
  • Megamaser Batteries [x]
  • Missile Launchers [x]
    • Proton Torpedoes [x]
    • Brilliant Missiles [x]
    • Carbonite Missiles [x]
    • Disruptor Torpedoes [x]
    • Mag-Pulse Warheads [x]
    • Advanced Concussion Missiles [x]
  • Ion Cannon Batteries [x]
  • Mass Driver Cannons [x]
  • Broadside Mass Drivers [x]
  • Broadside Flak Guns [x]
  • Superheavy Composite Beam Turbolasers [x]
  • Null-Burst Projectors [x]
  • Orbital Autocannon [x]
Defence Systems:
  • Deflector Shielding [x]
  • Particle Shielding [x]
  • Ray Shielding [x]
  • Ion Shielding [x]
  • Molecular Shielding [x]
  • Xythan Force Shielding [x]
  • Kiirium Armouring [x]
  • Electronic Countermeasures Suite [x]
  • Cap Drain [x]
Standard Features:
  • C-3A Mercury Class Communications Suite [x]
  • LS-132 Terra Life Support Systems [x]
  • STS-84 Artemis Class Targeting & Sensor System [x]
  • IE-10 Event Horizon Ion Drives [x]
  • Modified I-a2b Solar Ionization Reactor [x]
  • Molecular Furnaces [x]
    • Garment-Fabricators [x]
    • Self-Constructing Armament Facilities [x]
    • Self-Regulating Droid Makers [x]
  • Escape Pods [x]
  • Docking Clamps [x]
  • Kyber Crystal. [x]
Special Features:

  • Comms And Sesnsor Jammer [x]
  • Electronic Countermeasures Suite [x]
  • Interdiction Field Generator [x]
  • G-32 Evasive Armor Plating [x]
  • Laser Reflective Armor [x]
  • DB-SR01 'Powerslave' Droid Brain Network [x]
  • A-20 Omniscient-class Super Processor [x]
  • Battlemind Auxiliary A.I [x]
  • Anti-Ion Emission Tracers [x]
  • HIMS [x]
  • Shroud [x]
  • Pulsemass Generator [x]
  • NAV-RH1 Interdiction Countermeasures Suite [x]
  • ABC Scramblers [x]
  • Magnite Tractor Beam Array [x]
  • Animated Metal Sealant [x]
  • Permissions:
    • Roble Manufacturing [x]
    • TriTech [x] [x]
    • Jaeger Solutions [x]
  • Development Dominions: The New Imperial Order’s July 2020 Dominion Series
    • Rust In Peace | Ord Mantell [x]
    • Cold and Ugly | Carlac [x]
    • Run to the Hills | Baltizaar [x]
  • Primary Source: The Dissident Aggressor [x], the FIV Wrath [x] to a lesser degree.
  • Dedicated to one of the smartest guys I know, Cyrus Tregessar Cyrus Tregessar .
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Kuat-Entralla Engineering [x] in collaboration with Prefsbelt Command and the New Imperial Order.
  • Affiliation: The New Imperial Order [x]
  • Model: The Prefsbelt Class Super Star Destroyer
  • Production: Unique
  • Material:
    • Composite Hull
      • Nanolaminate Plating [x]
      • Impervium [x]
      • Matrix Armour [x]
      • Quadanium [x]
      • CP90 Durasteel [x]
      • Duralloy [x]
      • Laminanium [x]
      • Durasteel [x]
    • Plasteel Interior Paneling [x]
    • Alusteel Skeleton [x]
    • Glasteel Viewports [x]
    • Faraday Cage Components [x]
    • Electronic Components
    • Computing Components
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Command Vessel
  • Length: 10’000 Meters
  • Width: 2’500 Meters
  • Height: 1’300 Meters.
  • Armament: Extreme
    • Starbreaker-class Seismic Mass Driver Cannon [x]
    • Mass-Driver Autocannons [x]
    • Plasma Cannons [x]
    • 'Assimilator' Cannon [The Canonical One] [x]
    • HVC-369 'Covenant' Hypervelocity Cannons [x]
    • Orbital Autocannon [x]
    • "Broadstroke" Solar Ionization Batteries [x]
    • Point Defense Lasers [x]
    • Point Defense Ion Cannons [x]
    • Point Defense Brilliant Missile Pods [x]
    • IDCS-60 Point Defense Driver [x]
    • Heavy Turbolaser Cannons [x]
    • Turbolasers [x]
    • Octuple Barbette Turbolaser [x]
    • Megamaser Batteries [x]
    • Missile Launchers [x]
      • Proton Torpedoes [x]
      • Brilliant Missiles [x]
      • Carbonite Missiles [x]
      • Disruptor Torpedoes [x]
      • Mag-Pulse Warheads [x]
      • Advanced Concussion Missiles [x]
    • Ion Cannon Batteries [x]
    • Mass Driver Cannons [x]
    • Broadside Mass Drivers [x]
    • Broadside Flak Guns [x]
    • LS1 Hailfire Missile Launchers [x]
      • M-19 Firefly Assault Concussion Missile [x]
    • Null-Burst Projectors [x]
    • 'Jen'dosta' Defense System [x]
  • Defenses: Extreme
    • Composite Hull
    • Deflector Shielding [x]
    • Particle Shielding [x]
    • Ray Shielding [x]
    • Ion Shielding [x]
    • Molecular Shielding [x]
    • Xythan Force Shielding [x]
    • Electronic Countermeasures Suite [x]
    • Interior Defense Countermeasures Suite
      • Automated Turrets
      • Blast Doors
      • Sentries and Patrols
      • Ray shields, etc.
    • Cap Drain [x]
  • Hangar Space: Very Low
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters: 18 Squadrons
    • Support Craft: 7 Squadrons
  • Maneuverability Rating: Very Low
  • Speed Rating: High
  • Hyperdrive: Yes.
  • Hyperdrive Class: 2.0
STANDARD FEATURES
  • The Muster: While Prefsbelt Command prefers to provide its own troops, the consolidation of such resources in one vessel means that there are liberties taken with such a doctrine. While the Tregessar does not hold a great deal of hangar space compared to most other vessels, it nevertheless houses entire armoured divisions and supporting infantry formations. As such, there is a great deal of space provided.
  • ISB Intelligence Suite: The Tregessar contains military communications arrays designed to intercept traffic. While not all of it is decipherable immediately, the Tregessar nevertheless can download thousands of incoming transmissions for the ISB and COMPNOR to store them. On top of this capacity, the ISB also has a small detention centre to transfer high risk prisoners with accompanying interrogation cells.
  • Detention Facility: Outside of the ISB and Compnor, Prefsbelt Command is engaged in its own underhanded strategic research and illegal sourcing of forced labour. As such, there are accommodations aboard the vessel to house such research subjects and labourers for transport back to Prefsbelt.
  • C-3A Mercury Class Communications Suite [x]
  • LS-132 Terra Life Support Systems [x]
  • STS-84 Artemis Class Targeting & Sensor System [x]
  • IE-10 Event Horizon Ion Drives [x]
  • Modified I-a2b Solar Ionization Reactor [x]
  • Molecular Furnaces [x]
    • Garment-Fabricators [x]
    • Self-Constructing Armament Facilities [x]
    • Self-Regulating Droid Makers [x]
  • Escape Pods [x]
  • Docking Clamps [x]
  • Kyber Crystal enhanced weapons systems where applicable. [x]
  • Fire linked turrets with fast track mountings on each applicable armament.
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
  • The KriegsGeist [x]: The KriegsGeist is an expansion of the old FIV Wrath’s Warmind, and allows for the coordination of vessels and armaments in a way comparable to that of Battle Meditation.
  • Comms And Sesnsor Jammer [x [x20]: The impressive communications array aboard the Tregessar allows for it to potentially jam the communications of most enemy fleets. As such being able to potentially project a black spot in communications upon enemy vessels. Be it in the form of blocking a planets communication before invasion or sowing confusion aboard enemy fleets during engagements.
  • Electronic Countermeasures Suite [x]
  • Interdiction Field Generator [x]
  • G-32 Evasive Armor Plating [x]
  • Laser Reflective Armor [x]
  • DB-SR01 'Powerslave' Droid Brain Network [x]
  • A-20 Omniscient-class Super Processor [x]
  • Battlemind Auxiliary A.I [x]
  • Anti-Ion Emission Tracers [x]
  • HIMS [x]
  • Shroud [x]
  • Pulsemass Generator, dispatched via mines [x]
  • NAV-RH1 Interdiction Countermeasures Suite [x]
  • ABC Scramblers [x]
  • Magnite Tractor Beam Array [x8] [x]
  • Animated Metal Sealant [x]
STRENGTHS
  • Morale Raiser: The Tregessar’s size, shape and most of all the KriegsGeist give it a certain morale raising effect, equivalent to Battle Meditation. When fielded in battle, officers and crewmen will do the damndest to see the battle through to a successful conclusion.
  • Blinding the Enemy: The communications and sensor jamming abilities of the Tregessar mean it can effectively blind portions of a fleet, incapable of communicating conventionally with one another, and blinding their sensor systems.
  • Kyber Batteries: The kyber crystals installed within the weapons systems of the Tregessar improve the efficiency of such batteries. As such, the Tregessar’s complement of such weapons greatly improves its already substantive damage. This of course only being for the turbolaser batteries.
  • Interdictor: While it doesn't hold the bulge of one, the Tregessar has the capacity to organise interdiction fields and blockades.
  • Jen'Dosta Defence System: Fairly alright point defence system that does a superb job at minimising hostile missile barrages.
WEAKNESSES
  • Volatile Heavy Batteries: Kyber crystals by their very nature are incredibly volatile. Successive hits of the energy weapons emplacements will cause such batteries to detonate and as a result, damage the structure of the Tregessar.
  • Morale Loser: The Tregessar is a vessel designed to lead its subordinate into glorious battle. If the vessel were to be lost in such a venture, along with the KriegsGeist, it would crush the morale of friendly ships and hamper efforts to tactically reconcile the situation.
  • Fighter Support: While its compliment of 25 squadrons is gargantuan compared to most other ships fielded, compared to the actual size of the Tregessar, it’s quite small. The Tregessar would do well to travel with an accompaniment of escorts to bulk up its lacking fighter stock.
DESCRIPTION
The NIV Tregessar began as a project in the design bureaus of the Pa’Desh remnant, a splinter faction of the collapsed First Order remnant, although its design was more like that of the FIV Wrath than the design taken on. The construction of such a vessel was a pipe dream until a few years later when for the Pa’Desh remnant, Pa’Desh was no longer viable as a haven. Moving to Prefsbelt under the leadership of Grand Admiral Carlyle Rausgeber, there was a rebranding from Pa’Deshi remnant to that of Prefsbelt Command. Taking aboard the industrious naval traditions of Prefsbelt, Prefsbelt Command began to look into the manufacture of naval vessels for their new benefactors, the New Imperial Order.

The Prefsbelt Command proved themselves capable, and with one of the heads of navy of a failed state in their grip, Sovereign Imperator Irveric Tavlar decided to bestow upon them resources to construct a flagship. A Super Star Destroyer. Noticing the historical parallels to the old Galactic Empire, the Wrath style fell out and was replaced with one similar to the ancient Executor-Class, but retain a name familiar to the First Imperial exiles, Tregessar. After head of the First Imperial Navy, Grand Admiral Cyrus Tregessar.

In regards to design, Grand Admiral Rausgeber’s quest for glory saw him design a vessel meant to lead into battle and command campaigns. The introduction of the KreigsGeist system, similar to the Wrath’s warmind would achieve such a result, with the computer system able to improve fleet efficency comparable to the intervention of a force user. The vessel also took upon a role as a saboteur of communications, installing a number of signal jammers designed to cripple intrafleet communications for hostile combatants and stifle their sensor and targeting abilities. This however came at an unfortunate loss mind you, of hangar capacity. While the Tregessar houses a vast wing of fighters and bombers, it is relatively small given its size.

The armament of the Tregessar was exclusively taken and modified from the already successful Dissident Aggressor, however with a greater presence of kyber crystals. Said crystals provide a double edged sword, and while they largely improve the effectiveness of firing solutions, they are volatile once attacked and can detonate, causing greater hull damage than the detonation of ordinary batteries. Defences aboard the Tregessar are similar in scope and scale, with a composite hull and comprehensive point defence system, along with multiple layers of shielding and thick hull plating. In case of boarding, there is an extensive garrison of both New Imperial regulars and Prefsbelt Stossjägers aboard.

Ultimately the NIV Tregessar is a symbol of a new era both for the First Imperial exiles of Prefsbelt and New Imperial Order. That Prefsbelt Command will dominate the navy, and be here to stay.
 
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Hi there! I apologize for taking so long to get working on this. Anyway, I'm still making my way through this sub, but I've already run into a couple of problems, which I've detailed below. I may add other things as I work my way through, but for the time being please work on fixing these.

Canon Link Linked within the submission.

Regardless of whether you linked the canon within the submission, any canon articles will need to be linked here in this section.

TriTech [x]

This is a permission given to Gat Tambor Gat Tambor and the Technoid Manufactorum, not the NIO. I will need evidence of permission given explicitly to the NIO in order to accept this.

As always, if you have any questions or concerns please feel free to tag me here and I will do my best to help. Thanks!

Robogeber Robogeber
 

Shuklaar Kyrdol

CEO of Breshig War Forge Consolidated
Hello! So, I will be the second pair of eyes on this submission. Good job on working together on the necessary changes thus far, Beltran Rarr Beltran Rarr and Robogeber Robogeber .

Just a few issues we're going to have to work through, though.

1) Production Information

  1. You've got both Nanolaminate plating as well as Kiirium mirrors in a composite armor. Both materials function by being on the surface of a starship or wherever else they're installed. Additionally you list Laser Reflective Armor, which needless to say would naturally need to be the outermost layer of armor. Remedy this.
2) Technical Specifications
  1. Please clarify whether you're referring to a Chaos submission or a canon weapon when you mention the 'assimilator cannon'. I know you linked shield leech weapon, but the names don't match up.
    'Assimilator' Cannon [x]
  2. Please change the wording here to ensure that the following cannot be confused as shielding. Kiirium is not used in shielding.
    Kiirium Mirror Shielding [x]
3) Standard Features
  1. You mention the kyber enhanced weapons, however you have several missile and kinetic based weapon systems. As you know, kyber crystals are only used to enhance energy weapons, please mention this in your weaknesses.
4) Advanced Systems
  1. Relax the wording in the following to something along the lines of "potentially able to", or "has the potential to".
    Comms And Sesnsor Jammer [x [x20]: The impressive communications array aboard the Tregessar allows for it to jam the communications of most enemy fleets, being able to effectively project a black spot in communications. Be it in the form of blocking a planets communication before invasion or sowing confusion aboard enemy fleets during engagements.

    Blinding the Enemy: The communications and sensor jamming abilities of the Tregessar mean it can effectively blind portions of a fleet, incapable of communicating conventionally with one another, and blinding their sensor systems.
  2. Please change your listing of the pulsemass generator to reflect the fact that they were launched as mines rather than gravity well projectors.
5) Strengths and Weaknesses
  1. You most definitely need to list the interdictor field generator as a strength.
  2. Please add the Jen'dosta Defense System under strengths.
  3. Oh and you might want to change the following from 'moral' to 'morale', because there's little about this ship that's 'moral' xD
    Moral Raiser: The Tregessar’s size, shape and most of all the KriegsGeist give it a certain morale raising effect, equivalent to Battle Meditation. When fielded in battle, officers and crewmen will do the damndest to see the battle through to a successful conclusion.
 
Robogeber Robogeber

This submission has been pulled because of an issue that I noticed with its armament. In particular the use of the Superheavy Composite Beam Turbolasers which are marked on the wookiepedia article as a superweapon.

Site rules prohibit the use of superweapons as per the quote below:

Superweapons are restricted to Staff-Approved Events and must be destroyed prior to the end of the event.

As such, I'm going to ask that you please remove the Superheavy Composite Beam Turbolasers from this submission.
 
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