Approved Ranged Weapon Ragnarok Project Tech

[Lyssara Thrynn]

SPECIAL FEATURES

• anti matter stabilizer : When the shot is launched the anti-matter is stabilized in the launcher which makes it possible to reach the desired target

STRENGTHS

• High Range scale explosion: allows us to deliver a strike with a more or less large anti-matter bomb depending on the quantity of anti-matter present in the torpedo
• Anti Matter use : a rocket launcher made for anti-matter torpedoes, it is adapted to torpedo models and can therefore be used to shoot them effectively.
• good durability: the rocket launcher is solid to withstand basic shots and can take simple laser shots

WEAKNESSES

• Limited Ammunition: Due to the rarity of antimatter, the vessel can only carry a very limited number of torpedoes, restricting its sustained attack capabilities.
• Long Reload Time: The antimatter containment and magnetic stabilization systems require significant time between each shot.
• Risk of Instability: If the magnetic containment fails, the torpedo could explode prematurely, causing severe damage to the host vessel.
• sensitive to emp: a large electrical discharge could destroy the torpedo from a distance and render the gun ineffective. It could turn against the pitcher.

DESCRIPTION
The Ragnarok Launcher is an advanced antimatter torpedo launcher designed for medium to heavy-class warships, representing the pinnacle of antimatter weaponry. Built with rare and ultra-durable materials, this launcher has immense destructive power: a single torpedo can annihilate large enemy vessels, neutralize fortified structures, and cause significant damage. Developped by lyssara thrynn for his personal interest and that of the diarchy faction

 

[Rara Gowisi]

Lyssara Thrynn Hi, I'll be reviewing this.

A few issues.

Massive Destruction: Antimatter torpedoes can annihilate large targets or pierce even the strongest shields, causing devastating, irreparable damage.

As per John Locke 's ruling, nothing on Chaos is invincible. Adversely, nothing on Chaos is capable of true annihilation. It will alwyas be your opponents job, not yours, to determine damage.

I'd like you to rewrite this to make that more clear.

High Durability: The beskar and durasteel armor make the launcher extremely resistant to attacks, ensuring its functionality even under heavy fire.

As per factory rules, anything with an Extreme defensive rating, whether in the drop down menus or otherwise, requires a sub to be semi-unique or lower. I'd ask you rewrite this to not mention extreme resistances, or make it semi-unique.

Psychological Impact: The mere reputation of antimatter torpedoes instills fear, often forcing the enemy to rethink strategies or retreat.

Is there anything marking this weapon so the opponent would know it's anti-matter before it hits? If not, then this strength is null. Anti-matter torpedos are not a common sight on chaos, and so I'm unsure if such a reputation exists, but what I do know is that you cannot dictate how your opponent reacts to any attack. Please rewrite this.

Requires a ship specially equipped with this technology to use.

This is not a valid weakness, as it applies to every vehicle weapon based system. I ask you replace it with a true weakness.

All that said, I'm also going to move this to Ranged Weapon submissions, and ask you fill out the required drop down menus.

 

[Lyssara Thrynn]

Hello!

first of all I want to thank you for taking the time to do a review on the subject, thank you! And thank you for putting it in the right section, also I have a question is it necessary to make a new topic for the torpedoes themselves or is that enough with the rocket launcher?

Also, I took the trouble to edit what you asked, if you need anything, please don't hesitate, thank you.

Rara Gowisi

 

[Rara Gowisi]

is it necessary to make a new topic for the torpedoes themselves or is that enough with the rocket launcher?

Theoretically, it's fine. Munitions and launchers are put together in factory all the time, especially specialized stuff like this.

That said, new issues with the rewrite.

customizable torpedo: The shape of the torpedoes can be adapted depending on the shape you want to give to the explosion

This is...not how explosions work. What I assume you're trying to do is a Shape Charge, which does not function by changing the shape of the explosion, but rather giving the explosive a direction through path of least resistance.

That said, this is an anti-matter bomb, and thus that wouldn't work anyways. There's a big difference between a high explosive charge, and matter annihilation.

I'll ask you rewrite this.

 

[Lyssara Thrynn]

at worst I completely deleted this part, it's not that serious, is it all good for you? Thanks to you

Rara Gowisi

 

[Rara Gowisi]

Lyssara Thrynn I don't see any further issues, no. Standard warning as per usual. Opponent calls hits, not you. If this gets abused, I'll have to throw you over to John.

Approved!