Approved Starship Redemption Class Star Destroyer

[Thom Naudir]

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a new Star Destroyer for the Silver Jedi Order to face the coming darkness.
• Image Source: Link
• Canon Link: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Silver Jedi Order
• Affiliation: Silver Jedi Order
• Production: Unique
• Model: Redepmtion
• Material: Durasteel, Alusteel, Ultrachrome

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Destroyer
• Length: 1722 Meters
• Width: 604 Meters
• Height: 500 Meters
• Armament: Very High
• Defenses: Moderate
• Hangar: Low-3
• Maneuverability Rating: Average
• Speed Rating: Average
• Hyperdrive Class: Average-2

Standard Systems:

• Molecular Shielding
• Long Range Transceiver
• Linked Targeting Computers
• Escape Pods
• Communication Jammer

Advanced Systems:

• HIMS

Strengths:

• Double Front: The Redemption Class Star Destroyer, much like all dagger shaped vessels, can concentrate its fire on a single point, allowing it to tear its way through almost anything in its way.
• Linked: The targeting computers aboard the Redemption Class are connected in a large network, allowing them to target a single force. However, they can also be divided using the same system, allowing them to be grouped together to target several targets all at once.

Weaknesses:

• Wingless: The Redemption focuses much of its space to supporting its weaponry, leaving limited room for hangars of any significant size. The Redemption is forced to rely heavily on fighter support from other vessels.
• Tough Nut: The Redemption has limited shielding, instead relying more on its heavy armor to survive long term engagements.

Description: The Redemption is part of a program started by Admiral Sentus Olan to try and create a new line of vessels to help prepare the Order for the coming darkness. To allow the vessel to get where it needs to at any time, a HIMS system has been installed within the vessel.

 

[Malok]

<p>Under Review.</p>

 

[Malok]

[member="Sentus Olan"]

Still looking this over - initial observation, did you mean to add more to the Advanced Systems?

 

[Thom Naudir]

I was going to but I decided to back off on that department.

[member="Darth Metus"]

 

[Malok]

[member="Sentus Olan"]

Looking pretty good! Couple of tweaks before I can pass this up:

Please link to the SJO faction page in the manufacturer field.

In "Production Information" please list what Production this ship is.

 

[Thom Naudir]

Edited

[member="Darth Metus"]

 

[Malok]

[member="Sentus Olan"]

So at Minor Production, your ratings are too high. You need to lower a total of two degrees for this to pass.

Also, as Ultrachrome is a restricted material, it's only available at Semi-Unique production for a ship if you have a Tier 5 company as a Manufacturer or Unique if you have just the major faction as the manufacturer. You'll need to lower the production to keep the material or remove it.

 

[Thom Naudir]

Lowered to Unique, will I still need to lower other ratings?

[member="Darth Metus"]

 

[Malok]

[member="Sentus Olan"]

Nope, it's golden now! Pending approval!

 

[Malok]

<p>Awesome. Pending Secondary Approval. Thanks! [member="Jamie Pyne"]</p>

 

[Gir Quee]

Approved.