Approved Tech Renodar's Jedi longbow

[Renodar Wolfheart]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Intent: Personal weapon for Renodar Wolfheart
Canon Link: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Energy_bow, https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Bowcaster
Permissions: N/A
Image: https://www.deviantart.com/nano-core/art/Sci-Fi-Military-Recurve-Bow-867357790
Primary source: Same as canon

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Manufacturer: Renodar Wolfheart
Affiliation: Renodar Wolfheart
Market Status: Closed-Market
Model: N/A
Modularity: No
Production: Unique
Material: Wood, Energy bow, and bow caster components, green crystal

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

Classification: Quarrel firing Energy longbow
Size: Large
Weight: Average
Ammunition Type: Quarrel arrows, power pack, plasma generator
Ammunition Capacity: Very small about 30 Quarrel arrows.
Effective Range: long-range [100ish meters]
Rate of Fire: Low
Damage Output: High
Recoil: none

SPECIAL FEATURES

Can function as stant enger bow if a Quarrel arrow is not knocked, green plasma string

STRENGTHS

High stopping with Quarrel arrows,
Not encumbrance when it comes to weight
Long range weapon

WEAKNESSES

A slow rate of fire when using Quarrel arrows due to having the knock then into the weapon
Takes a skilled archer to wield it effectively.
Requires quiver of Quarrel arrows to be used to maxim effect
Can be overused in standard energy bow mode, as the user can fire faster the than the plasma generator can keep up




DESCRIPTION

The longbow was a traditional weapon among his people on Midvinter, but he soon, learned he would have to adapt somewhat to his new role in the Sliver Jedi Order, so he set blending tech, with tradition, after seeing the Wookies make their bow casters and researching energy bow, he some of the Wookie weapon smiths set about crafting a modernized version of his traditional weapon, able fire specially made Quarrel arrows and regular plasma bolt/arrows.

 

[Listib Hibin]

Sorry on the wait, I had to think over really how to put this.

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

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• Intent: Personal weapon for Renodar Wolfheart
  Canon Link: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Energy_bow, https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Bowcaster
  Permissions: N/A

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Weight: The bow itself is light, but dependent on how many Quarrel arrows are carried the quiver can be heavy
Ammunition Capacity: Very small about 30 Quarrel arrows. Average without then used as a normal energy pow
Damage Output: High with Quarrel arrows average with them

Have to pick one rating for each of them, cannot make them varied.


Lastly, can you please proofread and fix up some wording? Your weaknesses and strengths are a bit hard to read, some words entirely misspelled.

Let me know when you get to this.
Renodar Wolfheart

 

[Listib Hibin]

Anything? Three days and I will be forced to Archive.
Renodar Wolfheart

 

[Renodar Wolfheart]

i'm going throw it trying get everything fix, maybe another day or two

 

[Renodar Wolfheart]

I think i got most if not all if fixed now

 

[Listib Hibin]

Size: Large
Weight: The bow itself is light, but dependent on how many Quarrel arrows are carried the quiver can be Average
Ammunition Type: Quarrel arrows, power pack, plasma generator
Ammunition Capacity: Very small about 30 Quarrel arrows. Average without then used as a normal energy pow
Effective Range: long-range [100ish meters]
Rate of Fire: Low
Damage Output: High with Quarrel arrows average without them
Recoil: none

One rating as I said beforehand. Sorry on the wait.
Renodar Wolfheart

 

[Renodar Wolfheart]

ok that should fix it

 

[Listib Hibin]

Sorry on wait.

APPROVED!
Renodar Wolfheart