[member="Panzer"]
Looks good to me! Love the artwork, and the character concept is very unique. I also appreciate that you took the time to add great weaknesses to even out her being a powerhouse.
It is not required by any means whatsoever but you may want to consider subbing something to the Factory to flesh out the specs of her armory if that's something that interests you. If you plan on writing her in combat a lot, it can help your RP partners to know exactly what she's made out of (literally) and what they're facing. However like I said, the Factory & Codex are completely optional unless you planned on making her out restricted materials, which you're not.
Good luck with your character! She looks awesome.