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Approved Planet Rhiinalh

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Planet Name: Rhiinalh
  • Demonym: Rhiinul
  • Region: Unknown Regions
  • System Name: Rhiinalh
  • System Features: A Red Dwarf Star orbited by (as follows in order of orbit) Rhiinalh and a barren planetoid the Rhiinul call Stahm, that is used by the Rhiinul for mining metal for their star ships, weapons, armor, strucutres, etc.
  • Location: The middle-right corner of the bottom-left adjacent hex to where Tygeria and Kalidan-Lysenia is located.
  • Major Imports: Raw Materials (metal, meat, etc.), Ship Components, and Weapon Components (blasters and vibroblade components specifically), and coolant fluids
  • Major Exports: Soldiers, Manufactured Goods (may produce tools, weapons, ships, etc. out of imported or mined raw materials)
  • Unexploited Resources: None, the native Rhiinul have exploited every resource possible within their system. However, there may be unexploited areas of resources the Rhiinul have exploited in other regions within their system.
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION
  • Gravity: Standard
  • Climate: Extremely cold. The average temperature year round is -100 Fahrenheit; -73 Celsius
  • Primary Terrain: The whole planet is an archipelago with islands of various sizes. The islands are usually barren or covered with lichens and mosses that manage to survive the frigid temperatures. Some of the larger islands may have mountains and hills now being used to mine Durasteel Ore for the Rhiinul war machine.
  • Atmosphere: Type I
LOCATION INFORMATION
  • Capital City: Levithon; located in the Northern regions of the Eastern hemisphere.
  • Planetary Features: Almost all the larger islands have been transformed into cityscapes by the Rhiinul. The smaller islands might be home to private getaways for the elite Rhiinul, small communities of Rhiinul, or are uninhabited rocks in the frigid oceans. Ice bergs are frequent site floating off the coasts of islands. The majority are the regular size of ice bergs while a sizable minority of them are large enough to be mistaken as smaller islands. The capital city of Levithon has become a burgeoning center of society on Rhiinalh. After the unification of the Rhiinul under Emperor Wahlrin, the city has grown to the point where newer buildings have to be constructed on stilts over the water, or sturdy ice bergs were artificially produced as foundations for newer buildings to expand the city. The Emperor's palace dominates the highest region of the island and towers over the rest of the city. Meanwhile, factories are scattered about the city producing all manner of products needed by the Rhiinul. Every city on the planet is similar in that regard, with a noble palace looming above the city, and factories in all sectors of the cities, though the capital of Levithon is the epitome of Rhiinul civilization.
  • Major Locations:
    • Capital City of Levithon: The seat of the ruler of the Rhiinul. It is the largest city on all of Rhiinalh, and the epitome of what a Rhiinul community is like.
      • Emperor's Palace: The palace is as old as the city that surrounds it. The palace was originally built for the Kings back in the early days when proper civilization was growing on Rhiinalh. When King Wahlrin proclaimed himself Emperor Wahlrin, the palace was expanded to cover all the highest regions of the city, and knocked down the estates of lesser elites for Levithon in the process. Now the palace is a grand, and extremely luxurious estate where the rulers of the Rhiinul will reside for the ages.
      • Levithon Coliseum: Fighting pits are a common site in all Rhiinul settlements, and the one in Levithon has become as grand as the palace. A place for the bloodthirsty Rhiinul to watch others of their race fight in mock battles, compete in feats of strength, or play the violent games the species has played for centuries before the Wahlrin's Conquest.
    • Polar Ice Fields: The poles of Rhiinalh are the coldest regions of the planet. So cold that no Rhiinul settlement exists within them. Within those regions is the only unspoiled lands on the planet. Most technology sizes up and fails due to the severe temperatures while hardly any life exists in the polar regions for the same reasons. These regions are considered cold by the Rhiinul who have evolved to dwell in the extreme cold of Rhiinalh.
    • Kreytor Stahm: The second largest city on Rhiinalh. Located on another of the large islands, the city is the largest industrial hub on the planet. The largest factories can be found here, and the most factories have been constructed there as well. Because of its importance in supporting the industry of the Rhiinul, the original nobility who ruled the island had their rulership repealed by the emperor, leaving whoever is emperor in control of the city.

POPULATION
  • Native Species: Rhiinul
  • Immigrated Species: None as of submitting. Immigration is very unlikely due to the extremely cold climate that is inhospitable for most other species.
  • Population: Crowded- The population of the natives has been exponentially growing, and with the planet being ruled by one ruler, there is not as many Rhiinul dying which causes the increase in population to be more intense than in previous eras of Rhiinul civilization. The cities and towns on the various islands of the world are incredibly dense with millions upon millions of residents.
  • Demographics: As of this submission, the only population living on Rhiinalh is the native Rhiinul. Most other species would find the planet inhospitably cold. The Rhiinul are not necessarily xenophobic. If another group or species is known for dominating others, they would earn the respect of the Rhiinul. However, less dominant races would be considered inferior and deserving of domination by the Rhiinul.
  • Primary Languages: The only language spoken on Rhiinalh as of this submission would be the native language of Rhiinul. However, as integration with the greater galaxy happens, the Rhiinul may begin to learn other languages to communicate with their neighbors. Most likely the elites of Rhiinul society will learn languages like Galactic Basic first.
  • Culture: The Rhiinul are a belligerent species that value competition, violence, domination, and physical prowess while seeing pacifism as an anathema. For the entire history of civilization on the planet, war has been occurring. Kingdoms and empires would battle against their rival neighbors constantly. Territories and lands would be conquered by others while regions rebelled into new kingdoms. It was not until recently that the planet has been unified under one ruler. Despite the wars among the Rhiinul ending, the prospect of galactic conquest is one that the Rhiinul work towards achieving however possible. The Rhiinul are very individualist in nature, looking to dominate all others around them to some degree, always seeking to advance their station in society to dominate others in some fashion. Industrialization has caused workers to become just as prized as soldiers in Rhiinul society.
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY
  • Government: Imperial
  • Affiliation:
    • Eternal Empire: As of submission, the planet lies within space controlled by the Eternal Empire.
    • Emperor Wahlrin: Formerly King Wahlrin of Levithon, he lead his armies in planet-scale conquest and managed to conquer all other nations within a span of twenty years. After the conquest he proclaimed himself as Emperor of Rhiinalh and the Rhiinul. From there, he would start to initiate the research into more advanced technology to achieve space travel with hyperdrives, more advanced forms of slug thrower weapons, and other forms of technology considered to be at galactic standard.
    • For future reference; The Rhiinul value strength and the ability to dominate. If there are factions, groups, organizations, individuals, etc. that show strength and dominance, they would earn the respect and potential partnership with the Rhiinul.
  • Wealth: High- Because of the ruling elite that serve as officers in the emperor's armies at the highest rank and the emperor himself being extravagantly wealthy, this is considered. However, it would not be ranked higher due to a large gap between the ruling elite and common Rhiinul that would be considered at moderate level wealth. As a result, the categorization of High wealth becomes the average.
  • Stability: High- It has only been a matter of 10 years since Walhrin's Conquest, and the proclaimed emperor of Rhiinalh rules the planet with an gilded, iron fist. When a crime is committed, and the perpetrator caught, the punishment will be swift and often physically maiming or disfiguring if the perpetrator does not get killed. The only alternative to that is to fight as an indentured gladiator in the countless fighting pits across the world. Because of a rather strong centralized government, Rhiinalh is very politically stable. The Rhiinul would not necessarily be dangerous to outsiders that manage some way to not die of the cold, yet engaging in certain activities with the Rhiinul could cause injury due to the violent nature of many Rhiinul activities.
  • Freedom & Oppression: The government is imperial, and thus very authoritarian. The proclaimed emperor of Rhiinalh rules with an iron fist, and crushes all opposition to his reign. The provincial commanders serve as the highest ranking officers in the Rhiinul army, and enforce the emperor's will in the planet's provinces. Violence towards others is not necessarily permitted, but more so controlled. The smaller fighting pits are used as a means for two Rhiinul who have a dispute to fight until the other relents or dies while the larger fighting pits are used to punish criminals who prefer not to get a maiming punishment. There are little secrets the elite have too. The Rhiinul are a rather blunt and straightforward people, and thus various elements of court intrigue like espionage are a near-foreign concept if not considered a spineless means to dominate. Whenever there is opposition among the Rhiinul, it is brazen and openly shown. However, there is little opposition as of the times following Wahlrin's Conquest.
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY
  • Military: The military is the heart and soul of Rhiinul society. The belligerent species native to the planet has been engaged in wars among kingdoms and empires for much of the Rhiinul's history. The unified empire the planet exists as currently was founded because the emperor waged planet-scale war against every other nation on the planet and won. The current lesser nobility are actually the highest ranking officers in the Rhiinul army. Due to only recently achieving space travel, the Rhiinul navy is still in its infancy, but the armies of the Rhiinul are steeped in brutal tradition. Most of the ships being developed by the Rhiinul are drop ships for their armies in anticipation of planetary conquest. Because of the hyper militarization of the imperial rulership of the planet, the only disadvantage Rhiinalh has when it comes to the Rhiinul potentially defending their world, is that other forces in the galaxy may have superior numbers and would certainly have more advanced spacecraft. Therefore, as of being discovered by the Eternal Empire when submitting this, and the Rhiinul discovering they are surrounded by the Eternal Empire, a deal between the emperor and the Eternal Empire's rulers would have to be arranged.
  • Technology: A more clunky version of galactic standard. The scientists that oversaw the accelerated evolution of the Rhiinul utilized the force to manipulate the technological development of the species native to Rhiinalh as well. That is why in a manner of 500 years, the Rhiinul have achieved their level of technology. They manage space travel with hyperdrives, and have advanced slug thrower technology for their weapons. However, the rest of the galaxy is more refined with the level of technology.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
For as long as galactic history has been going, the planet of Rhiinalh has been largely ignored. It's frigid archipelagos and isolated location left it untouched for eons. However, centuries ago, the planet began to be used for an experiment by rogue scientists. The scientists managed to evolve one of the local forms of wildlife, a species of semiaquatic, carnivorous mammals, into a sentient species after centuries of experimentation. However, at some unknown point, the scientists went under the employ of the enigmatic organization known as the Shadow Empire. Whether it was through a deal, a threat, or coercion through the force, the Shadow Empire managed to seize control over the experiments.

Then, at another unknown date, the Shadow Empire experimenters began making the evolved species, the Rhiinul, into easy to coerce shock troops. The species was already a bunch of hulking, belligerent beings. However, after this point in the experiments, they became susceptible to mind control through the force, and also became unable to become force sensitive. Yet, the Rhiinul on the planet did not notice the change whatsoever. None were ever known to be force sensitive to begin with, and so the force was a foreign concept to them all. Thus, the sorcery conducted by the Shadow Empire experimentors was left unnoticed by the Rhiinul below them.

Despite the experiments, civilization for the Rhiinul progressed much like any other, however much faster because of the experiments. In the span of approximately 500 years, the Rhiinul went from barbaric primitive savages to almost exactly galactic standard technology. From roving bands of primitives to a planet-wide empire beginning space travel. When proper civilization was achieved over 200 years after sentience, countless kingdoms and empires were constantly at war with each other. However, near the latter end of the 500 years, one of the kings began a war of conquest of the entire planet after receiving dreams of leading the Rhiinul to glory as a united empire. That king was named Wahlrin of Levithon, and those dreams came from the enigmatic Shadow Empire sorcerers. Wahrin would unleash a massive crusade to bring about a unified Rhiinul Empire with him as its Emperor. Within the span of twenty years, Wahlrin's empire was established. Him and his generals' planet-scale conquest would eventually become so crucial, the Rhiinul historical timeline has dates of "Before Conquest" and "After Conquest" in reference to the period of twenty years known as Wahlrin's Conquest. From there, Wahlrin's reign would see the development of vast industry far beyond what was achieved in the years predating his crusade. A scientific community was created in the military in order to advance technology to the level the newly proclaimed Emperor of Rhiinalh wanted. Eventually, the slugthrowers that soldiers were armed with became more efficient and advanced than previous models in the history of the Rhiinul using firearms in war. More mechanized forms of warfare began to develop with tanks that could float on the water like boats but also drive on land, improved armor after achieving a better refinement of the durasteel ore that lies in abundance within the crust of Rhiinalh. Then, the first hyperdrive powered starships were developed after approximately ten years of progress.

The Shadow Empire researchers managed to manipulate the Rhiinul to develop said hyperdrive models and higher technology through sublte influence. Through usage of Sith magics long forgotten with them being the exception of knowing them, the researchers manipulated the minds and dreams of the Rhiinul scientists. This influence lead to the Rhiinul having knowledge of which resources on their world they could use for the construction of the ships, hyperdrives, and all other advanced technology they use currently. However, those details would only be known by those affiliated with the Shadow Empire and knowledgable of the experiments onf Rhiinalh. To all others, including the Rhiinul themselves, it just seems the Rhiinul have had an incredibly fast evolution path on their world. The Rhiinul use that knowledge of extremely fast development as a source of special pride to show their superiority to beings they see as inferior and wish to dominate.

The first year of discovering space travel to that capacity was spent mass-producing the first models of ships. The next, a mining colony was established on an outer planet called Stahm by the Rhiinul. From there, more durasteel was being dug up to fuel the evolving war machine of the Rhiinul Empire. Then, the following three years after the colony on Stahm was established, the Rhiinul Empire went beyond their home system and Rhiinalh to the other parts galaxy. It was then they discovered they were surrounded by the Eternal Empire. A militaristic nation like them, which they would eventually grow to respect and integrate into in order to fulfill their ambitions of galactic domination through the empire. The Rhiinul would also utilize the more refined technology their new hosts had to improve their own with new ships, armor, weapons, and more. In return, the Eternal Empire gained a race of soldiers ore than willing to conquer the galaxy, as well as an industrial world to manufacture more goods for the empire, out of Rhiinalh.
 
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Ylla Caeli'runa

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Wahlrin Hello there! Hope you're day is going well. I really enjoyed reading your submission. However, there's a short list of things that need to change before I pass this up the vine for secondary review:

Crossover | I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but the name of the planet is very close to Riis-Reborn in Destiny and even has a similar climate surrounding it. Per the Codex Rules, crossovers aren't permitted in Codex subs. I'm gonna ask for a name change here, which may also mean changing the references, if any, within the Rhiinul sub as well so that things match. Please remove any mention of "Rhiis" from the submission and replace it with another name.​
Image Credit | I've found a alternate source for your 4th image on DeviantArt and I've linked it here. Please replace the 4th credit.​
Gravity | Earth-like can be removed here, Standard works just fine and doesn't reference Earth directly.​
Affiliation | Please add the Shadow Empire underneath the Eternal Empire and add this link to it.​
History | Small disconnect here, how did they discover hyperdrive tech? What kind of exposure did they have to access the knowledge? Was it through the scientists that created them? Through direct contact with membes of the Shadow Empire or the Eternal Empire?​

If you have any questions/concerns or just want to tell me that changes are complete, feel free to tag me!
 

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Thank you very much for the notes on this Ylla Caeli'runa. The name change is certainly possible. I'll just finagle off of the Rhiinul name. I'll be sure to fix all the other issues soon. I am open to suggestions too for things in the history. Otherwise, I'll figure those out on my own as well with no problem.

I may be a little slow to make these changes, but they will happen. Again, thank you.
 

Ylla Caeli'runa

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Wahlrin
Of course! I'm also just a tag away of you'd like to brainstorm here on the thread! If you think the changes will take a substantial amount of time, I could also move it to Pre-Codex for you to work on. But, also perfectly find to work on under the Planet section too!
If you need anything, let me know! Otherwise, I'll be checking in in about a week if edits aren't complete before then.
 

Wahlrin

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Ylla Caeli'runa, I just adjusted the name and the gravity for this. I'll also adjust it for the race. Hopefully I finish it faster than assumed.

It shouldn't take me too long to make adjustments, but it would be slow and steady. Thank you very much for the offer and I would certainly keep that in mind for when I get to adjusting the history segment.
 

Wahlrin

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Ylla Caeli'runa , I worked on the links you pointed out. Is the image credit better now? Also, I put the Shadow Empire link with the other relevant links in the "links" section.
 

Ylla Caeli'runa

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Wahlrin
I've done a bit of thinking and I think it'd be best to expand on what you already have in the Tech section ("
The scientists that oversaw the accelerated evolution of the Rhiinul utilized the force to manipulate the technological development of the species native to Rhiinalh as well.") in the History. Perhaps when the scientists emerge for the Rhiinul and begin making slugthrowers and weaponry of their own, the scientists from the Shadow Empire implant the ideas/concepts/bits of information on hyperspace tech and how it's formed slowly into the minds of the Rhiinul scientic community. Sort of nudging them along and rewarding them with more imformation/parts to begin constructing the technology when they're on the right track until they reconstruct the technology correctly and it's functional. Essentially, the Shadow Empire conducts a sort of Skinner Box experiment with them and shapes their behavior and evolution in a way that builds their relationship and potentially shapes how they come to view them and the Eternal Empire.

What are your thoughts on this? Did you have something else in mind? Does this fit the narrative that you're looking to write for the planet and the Rhiinul?
 

Wahlrin

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Ylla Caeli'runa Something like that could work. I meant to imply such a thing, so this helps get more specific. However, with that, I would mean to have this skinner box situation happen sublimely from the perspective of the Rhiinul, where they do not know they are lab rats, and instead think they are an incredibly powerful race in mental capacity too.
 

Ylla Caeli'runa

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Wahlrin

I think that'd be a great point to play off of! Reminds me of reading a book and you know something before the character does. Would you like to bounce a few more ideas around or would you like to work on the History section on your own and ping me when you've added what you'd like?
 

Wahlrin

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Ylla Caeli'runa, I would be completely fine with hearing more thoughts on your end of what to possibly add on to flesh out the species' history more. I'll be working on the history in the meanwhile, but I won't mind.
 

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Ylla Caeli'runa I added an extra paragraph to explain the advancement of technology due to the Shadow Empire's secret influence and manipulation. Your thoughts on it? Any other aspects of the history you'd like to see, or modifications to what I wrote to start off the explanation?
 

Ylla Caeli'runa

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Wahlrin I love it and really it bridges the disconnect on how they came to get the technology and that was the goal! Would you like to add more to it or would you prefer that I pass this up for secondary?
 
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